Apocalyptic Wasteland: Start a Shelter

The writing style is mature. I originally wrote this kind of panel wasteland novel, which was mostly written by men, but after reading more than ten chapters, you ranked in the top 10% of wasteland novels. If you keep it in the later stages and have an outline, you can get into the 5%. There is no unnecessary nonsense and no jokes. It is very science student's writing style. It is often published on Tomato I have seen many authors setting the protagonist to be a programmer who died suddenly, but I feel that they have never been a programmer. Instead, the author of this article should be very rational, calm and logic-oriented in writing. Like my programmer friends, they write articles simply and seriously without being exaggerated. I hope to maintain the main line and style of writing.

Give me a five-star encouragement. Overall, it's very good and has potential. Advantages: The heroine is very proactive, she is a charismatic, leadership and capable protagonist, and the supporting characters are also carefully created. She is not a one-man show for the heroine. The writing is smooth and rhythmic, and the protagonist is shocked at every step. It is quite enjoyable to watch. Those who like to read about infrastructure or farming are in luck. Detailed science-related knowledge is used to build bases and farming in a logical manner. The article is generally warm, and I hope that the heroine will become bigger and stronger in the future. Personally felt flaws: there are a few insults and swear words, the stereotype of "princess" (I forgot the specific description, but it is probably about the enjoyment of the princess/servicing the princess, and similar stereotypes of the princess being delicate), the story progression is a bit too idealistic, if it could be described in a more in-depth and impeccable way The process of the game could be better (for example, after the heroine repaired the equipment in Bilgewater Town, he let her go so easily, which was unreasonable). If it could be described in more depth, the novel would be thicker. Even now, it feels like lifting it up and putting it down gently. The protagonist's resolution of the dilemma is too idealistic.

I really like this subject... The beginning and flow of the story are also very attractive. But [face covering] [face covering] Anyone who has worked with AI can feel that it is too strong.

It's so cool. It's so good to watch. From what I've seen, the heroine has a strong brain and super leadership. Now everyone in the team has their own advantages. The most important thing is that there is no Ai Nan plot. I enjoyed watching it anyway.

It looks good. I really like this wasteland infrastructure theme. I want to start from scratch and join partners to farm and build infrastructure. I hope that the heroine will become stronger and stronger. I am really curious about what 10 intelligence is like. I feel that every improvement is a new level. I hope that the shelter will continue to develop attack and defense. I feel that it is still too granary now. There are chaos everywhere. I feel that I can pick up a lot of accessories, so that I can produce it myself. By the way, there is also transportation. It is a pity every time I see that I can only pick up a little and give up a lot.

Wonderful! I didn't expect the wasteland writing to be so detailed, and how well written it is about farming and killing, the game between various forces, and the protagonist group's careful and bold use of relationships.

I like it, both the plot and the characters are in line with my taste so far. The plot of less than a hundred chapters has ups and downs, the characters are full, and it satisfies the hoarding and planting aspects. There is no so-called Virgin plot or inexplicable emotional lines. What can be seen is only the will of a group of people to survive. The wisdom of the heroine, the tacit understanding and cooperation of the team, and the preliminary outline of the base have ignited the fire of civilization in the wasteland, bringing a bit of passion and touch. I hope that the subsequent plot will be equally exciting. There are just too few to read. I don't know if there are any other novels of this type [crying]

Especially beautiful. From the protagonist to the supporting role, the plot from the main line to the branches are all logical, the characters are distinct, and the plot development is meticulous and thoughtful. I especially like the daily farming life when everyone builds a base together. The writing is so immersive and interspersed with adventures and delicious food, it's ups and downs and fascinating. Big cheers for the author, this is the best wasteland infrastructure article I have ever read! ! !

I reached the latest chapter in one go, it's so good! Although many terms sound a bit unclear, the heroine is really amazing! Just like the ghost said, she is the captain, not the kind of queen who is arbitrary. She takes care of everyone and is very capable of being a conductor, leading the group to perform its best function. At the same time, the whole novel is not the kind of book that swarms people. I really like it. It is the kind of book that is collected one or two, which is very comfortable. Moreover, the author is very knowledgeable and well-written. There are many details that were not found in previous infrastructure books, as well as the collision between the old civilization and the new era. It is very interesting, as well as the development of the branch plot. The heroine is not the kind of existence that is so powerful that no one can kill her, but has flesh and blood, can be injured, is proud of her efforts, and is proud of having a family to protect! The most interesting thing is that the characters in it are very full-bodied, each one has a distinct personality, and finally blends into each other. The heroine in the latest chapter is doubtful about her own life experience and her scalp is numb for an instant! ! I look forward to the author's great follow-up [Admiration]

Hahaha, I found another very good wasteland novel. This year's wasteland novel really impressed me. The heroine's four-person team is also very powerful, and the heroine is the most powerful. Hahaha, not bad, worth following up. This is the first time I have seen such a novel that is full of useful information. It is about the end of the wasteland. I love it. Many things were created by my own team. The heroine is really awesome. She is full of efforts to restore the civilization of the wasteland and build a world that belongs to them. The female protagonist team has begun to establish their own power, and has also helped many people. They will be distributed according to their work, and the more work they do, the more they will get. I like watching it, so cheer up.

It's very good-looking. The author doesn't look like a newcomer at all. The writing and settings are very strong and the writing is very rigorous. For those who are not familiar with chemistry, it feels like being in class (just kidding). It's quite enjoyable so far. There is nothing frustrating. The plot connects naturally (the farming part may be a bit boring) , I personally think that if you don't like farming, skipping it will not affect the subsequent plot.) Everyone in the team has their own abilities, and the supporting roles are of both men and women, old and young (this is really impressive, men can also be logistics, and women can also be warriors). This is the best book I have read recently. Opening this book is like opening a wasteland diary. The writing is not gorgeous, but the writing is really good. The Deathclaw siege is really exciting. Speaking of which, the Deathclaw family did nothing wrong. At first they just wanted to eat something, and later they wanted to avenge their children. But this is the wasteland. Either you die or I die. Everyone just wants to live. Come on, author! This book will definitely be a hit

This article deeply shocked me. The author's vast knowledge reserve has reached a terrifying level. I can barely understand the chemical reactions involved in the article. Usually such professional terminology would make me feel obscure and difficult to understand, but not in this book. The author is like a veteran, easily making chemistry approachable and easy to understand. It does not affect the reading experience at all, and makes people obsessed with the protagonist Lin Yu. The writing style is like the cold light flashing when Irene cuts the human body with a professional scalpel, and the white operating room has a clear smell of disinfectant water. Stable and sure. The plot is perfectly connected, there are almost no supporting characters that are wasted, and all the clues are twisted into a rope. You think you have planned it all, but you will find out at the end that you are just a mantis stalking the cicada and the oriole behind. I am looking forward to further developments more and more. There is also a digression. Except for the protagonist Lin Yu, all the others in the article have foreign names. Does this mean that China has disappeared above the wasteland? Has "we" disappeared, deeper underground or higher in space?

The overall settings are similar to the game "Fallout", including bottle cap currency, radiation storms, radiation cockroaches and various settings. When I played the game before, I thought that this kind of setting would be good for writing, but I didn't expect to find it [laughs] The writing is very good. The characters and scenes are well depicted in the parts I have seen so far. I hope there will be more fresh settings and look forward to updates!

Worth 5 stars The writing style is a little unsophisticated (for example, "Although... But [Intelligence 9]" and multiple explanations in brackets often appeared in the early stage) but it is stable and practical enough. As the protagonist group develops, the main line of the entire world is also advancing. You can feel the author's careful thinking about the main line. The character setting is three-dimensional and lovable, and multiple important female characters are arranged [reasonably]. Writing characters is the author's strength, and he can express the character's portrait in two or three paragraphs (a bit like a second-game character, I often think Alice is a freckle girl) The development part is written in great detail. I personally read this part briefly. Readers who read it carefully may feel like they are in a chemistry/physics class. As the first book, it is of good quality. I look forward to the subsequent development of the main plot and the author to complete this first Tomato novel.

It ties it up in one breath, and it looks like it's the only book I haven't abandoned recently after reading more than 300 chapters. The heroine is rational and calm and does not have any unreasonable so-called "lucky" cheats. The supporting characters are not like backgrounds who are inexplicably going against the protagonist group, and they are not impressed by the heroine's "powerful spirit" and bow down. Currently, everyone gathered around the heroine Everyone first gets "profit" from the heroine, and then is touched by the heroine's personality and actively joins her river. They have the same goal and the same driving force, and they expect the river formed by the protagonists to grow into a big river and break through the entire wasteland with great force.

It is a very interesting wasteland novel that reflects the importance of teamwork. It is not the kind of Long Aotian series that relies on the protagonist to change the world alone. The plot is reasonable and not as stupid as some apocalyptic novels. I look forward to more and faster updates from the author! Come on!

It's super good-looking. The current content is worth 9.5 Points or above. It's much better than many wasteland novels on the list. However, growing vegetables and food is a bit too detailed and the pace is a bit slow. Although I also love to watch this kind of plot, I am a little worried that the author's plot will be too long and lead to pitfalls. The author must finish writing it! Follow updates every day and you won't lose money if you invest! The writing is so detailed, and the current plot is also very exciting.

The writing is really good. It's one of the better wasteland infrastructure books I've read so far. The heroine is really sober, calm, and smart, and the supporting characters are all flesh and blood. The writing is really good. The part about planting at the beginning feels a bit long-winded. After the planting chapter, it gets better and starts the real infrastructure construction. This book deserves more than nine points [Sending Hearts]

IMHO, it's really good-looking. The heroine is huge and smart, and her partners are also very reliable. Currently, there are two soldiers, a logistician, a mechanical expert, and a child who can predict things. The author's writing style is also good. He is not a noob. He is not stupid, and there is no nonsensical plot. It is really an infrastructure novel! ! !

A super interesting post-apocalyptic survival story! ! ! The heroine is the absolute intellectual core. The viewing process is very enjoyable. The content is hard-core and rich in knowledge. The author depicts several major forces vividly. I look forward to the heroine quietly developing and becoming bigger and stronger!

I finished reading it in one go. It is about a rare intelligent heroine in Tomato. The current rating is really sorry for the quality of this book. Everyone in the heroine team has their own use. The cheats are not too outrageous. Overall, it is very smooth. It is a good book.

It is a very fluent novel. The core team is well built and the expansion is comfortable step by step. The heroine is lucky that she is the heroine and can pick up special talents, but she has been suffering and suffering. The heroine is very tenacious, and you can also see that the heroine is making progress step by step. Although there are cheats, it does not matter, because the infrastructure here does not come out of thin air, but they themselves have been working hard.

Among the many books that are sent to stores/bases/safe houses by the system, the heroine in this book creates a paradise with her own hands, from a drop of clean water to building a fortress. , The author has come to the world to write novels. If Yang Persimmon only recommends one novel, then I will definitely recommend this unpopular treasure. I don't understand why no one in the apocalyptic novel community recommends this novel. I would have spent money to buy it even at the starting point and JJ. The author has solid skills and fascinating writing. I rarely write book reviews, but this book is definitely worthy of everyone's discovery. It is female-friendly, has wasteland infrastructure, and the author's vocabulary makes me feel comfortable. I have never thought that I can see such a good novel in Yang Persimmon.

I really want to knock myself out with a punch and watch it all over again, it's so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good😭

It's very nice, and I can find a good book in the middle of the night. The writing style can be seen to be relatively young, but the content is very rigorous. I feel that the author must have played this type of game. It is very interesting. I didn't expect that this book is so good but so few people have read it. I hope the work will be a big hit [Blow kiss]

Every thrill is a huge profit, the plot is full of twists and turns, and it's not like the Holy Mother, it's a fairy tale!

I like it very much, it's very beautiful and full of the atmosphere of a science guru. Besides, she's a heroine! What do you recommend about love? President. ． Retarded novel disgusting Finally found a rational book You are the true and true master! I hope it can continue without a male protagonist.

After reading more than 50 chapters, I feel that the imagination is quite good and the logic is smooth, but the writing style needs to be improved. Some parts feel like it was written by AI, and it feels like I am reading a novel with a translated tone. It is also a bit too straightforward, which will make people lose interest in reading. The review of the book said that it would be more interesting with more than 100 chapters. I will read it again.

It's so good-looking, so good-looking, this is the best wasteland novel I've ever read. The group portraits are so well written, and everyone's characteristics are very distinct. I love this kind of group portrait novel so much, it's very to my liking [Adoration]

The writing is very good, the logic of the novel is reasonable, the crises are interlocking, the friendship of the protagonist group and the construction of the base are also very touching, and the survival infrastructure part is really the hardest I have ever seen on Tomato.