Apocalyptic Wasteland: A Shelter from the Start

The writing style is mature. I originally wrote this kind of panel wasteland novel, which was mostly written by men, but after reading more than ten chapters, you ranked in the top 10% of wasteland novels. If you keep it in the later stages and have an outline, you can get into the 5%. There is no unnecessary nonsense and no jokes. It is very science student's writing style. It is often published on Tomato I have seen many authors setting the protagonist to be a programmer who died suddenly, but I feel that they have never been a programmer. Instead, the author of this article should be very rational, calm and logic-oriented in writing. Like my programmer friends, they write articles simply and seriously without being exaggerated. I hope to maintain the main line and style of writing.

I really like this subject... The beginning and flow of the story are also very attractive. But [face covering] [face covering] Anyone who has worked with AI can feel that it is too strong.

Give me a five-star encouragement. Overall, it's very good and has potential. Advantages: The heroine is very proactive, she is a charismatic, leadership and capable protagonist, and the supporting characters are also carefully created. She is not a one-man show for the heroine. The writing is smooth and rhythmic, and the protagonist is shocked at every step. It is quite enjoyable to watch. Those who like to read about infrastructure or farming are in luck. Detailed science-related knowledge is used to build bases and farming in a logical manner. The article is generally warm, and I hope that the heroine will become bigger and stronger in the future. Personally felt flaws: there are a few insults and swear words, the stereotype of "princess" (I forgot the specific description, but it is probably about the enjoyment of the princess/servicing the princess, and similar stereotypes of the princess being delicate), the story progression is a bit too idealistic, if it could be described in a more in-depth and impeccable way The process of the game could be better (for example, after the heroine repaired the equipment in Bilgewater Town, he let her go so easily, which was unreasonable). If it could be described in more depth, the novel would be thicker. Even now, it feels like lifting it up and putting it down gently. The protagonist's resolution of the dilemma is too idealistic.

It's so cool. It's so good to watch. From what I've seen, the heroine has a strong brain and super leadership. Now everyone in the team has their own advantages. The most important thing is that there is no Ai Nan plot. I enjoyed watching it anyway.

It looks good. I really like this wasteland infrastructure theme. I want to start from scratch and join partners to farm and build infrastructure. I hope that the heroine will become stronger and stronger. I am really curious about what 10 intelligence is like. I feel that every improvement is a new level. I hope that the shelter will continue to develop attack and defense. I feel that it is still too granary now. There are chaos everywhere. I feel that I can pick up a lot of accessories, so that I can produce it myself. By the way, there is also transportation. It is a pity every time I see that I can only pick up a little and give up a lot.

This article deeply shocked me. The author's vast knowledge reserve has reached a terrifying level. I can barely understand the chemical reactions involved in the article. Usually such professional terminology would make me feel obscure and difficult to understand, but not in this book. The author is like a veteran, easily making chemistry approachable and easy to understand. It does not affect the reading experience at all, and makes people obsessed with the protagonist Lin Yu. The writing style is like the cold light flashing when Irene cuts the human body with a professional scalpel, and the white operating room has a clear smell of disinfectant water. Stable and sure. The plot is perfectly connected, there are almost no supporting characters that are wasted, and all the clues are twisted into a rope. You think you have planned it all, but you will find out at the end that you are just a mantis stalking the cicada and the oriole behind. I am looking forward to further developments more and more. There is also a digression. Except for the protagonist Lin Yu, all the others in the article have foreign names. Does this mean that China has disappeared above the wasteland? Has "we" disappeared, deeper underground or higher in space?

Wonderful! I didn't expect the wasteland writing to be so detailed, and how well written it is about farming and killing, the game between various forces, and the protagonist group's careful and bold use of relationships.

I like it, both the plot and the characters are in line with my taste so far. The plot of less than a hundred chapters has ups and downs, the characters are full, and it satisfies the hoarding and planting aspects. There is no so-called Virgin plot or inexplicable emotional lines. What can be seen is only the will of a group of people to survive. The wisdom of the heroine, the tacit understanding and cooperation of the team, and the preliminary outline of the base have ignited the fire of civilization in the wasteland, bringing a bit of passion and touch. I hope that the subsequent plot will be equally exciting. There are just too few to read. I don't know if there are any other novels of this type [crying]

Basically, I have been following the book since the beginning of the book. The author writes very well. The whole story frame is very grand and the context is well laid out. The plot of the story is very smooth. The protagonist's intelligence and wit are also very well written. I personally like the refreshing feeling of saving supplies in the early stage [cool]. One thing is that the author used a little too much force when writing, and some words were used repeatedly. Some fragments are a bit embarrassing to read because the author tried to create a tense and exciting atmosphere. I hope the author can reduce the use of words such as "extreme", "extremely" and "extremely" [face covering] (I don't mean to say that the writing is bad, but it will make me a little tired of reading when I use it all the time🥲). Finally, the author's writing is really good, so cheers for the author!

I reached the latest chapter in one go, it's so good! Although many terms sound a bit unclear, the heroine is really amazing! Just like the ghost said, she is the captain, not the kind of queen who is arbitrary. She takes care of everyone and is very capable of being a conductor, leading the group to perform its best function. At the same time, the whole novel is not the kind of book that swarms people. I really like it. It is the kind of book that is collected one or two, which is very comfortable. Moreover, the author is very knowledgeable and well-written. There are many details that were not found in previous infrastructure books, as well as the collision between the old civilization and the new era. It is very interesting, as well as the development of the branch plot. The heroine is not the kind of existence that is so powerful that no one can kill her, but has flesh and blood, can be injured, is proud of her efforts, and is proud of having a family to protect! The most interesting thing is that the characters in it are very full-bodied, each one has a distinct personality, and finally blends into each other. The heroine in the latest chapter is doubtful about her own life experience and her scalp is numb for an instant! ! I look forward to the author's great follow-up [Admiration]