I Am Too Cautious in One Punch World

It's awesome, it's so awesome😭😭😭 I just read it as a novice article, but I didn't expect that this guy is really capable. It's a rare masterpiece among Yiquan fans, but there are too few of it😢

The new path combines the fantasy fairy with one punch, and it is not very inconsistent. The protagonist's moral principles are also just right. After he has the confidence and a way out, he lets go and takes a break, and then gradually moves from the clone to the main body (PS: One Punch Man actually discusses the understanding of the concepts of heroes, justice, and strength from different directions. Since it is based on one punch, the author should not be too biased)

Overall, it's okay. The protagonist's image and the images of each character are very relevant and vivid. The settings can be changed. The first and ninth levels are still not as intuitive as the Qi Refining and Golden Pill Dao. Moreover, the latter has a ready-made mature system.

It's very interesting. Among all the One Punch fanfics of Singularity and Tomato, this novel ranks first in my heart (only my personal opinion) Other one-punch fan novels always have various problems. Either the protagonist system is too complicated, there are too many female protagonists, or the male protagonist's character setting is too bad, and there are many literary youth diseases. First of all, this novel has a single heroine, Tatsumaki. I came here because of the single heroine Tatsumaki. The character setting and plot of the protagonist are also very good. If I don't talk about the specifics for the moment, the most surprising thing for me is that the relationship between the protagonist and Tatsumaki is very good. It has the feeling of watching a first love, sweet but not greasy. Many fan authors who write about the heroine of Tatsumaki make the protagonist look like a scumbag or a licker, which is very embarrassing.

The clone is almost enough. Let the main body come out when it's time, otherwise it will become a poison.

The five-star review encourages me. The early writing was okay, but the romance was too rigid (we started talking after a fight) and I didn't understand much. The author can go to other websites or find a few romance books on Tomato to learn from. The combat aspect is okay, and the main plot is not a big problem for the time being. If it doesn't work, focus on the combat aspect. In fact, love is not so anxious to win.

It's okay, the cautious character design is well received, but it feels like it's not cautious enough. Merely whipping corpses and staying behind are not considered prudent, and plots such as fighting a tornado made me feel overconfident in my own strength. And even if this is not maintained, there will be no description of whipping corpses later. Personally, I understand that caution is more about intelligence, not just about combat power. Collect external intelligence as much as possible, and at the same time overestimate the opponent's strength to ensure that you are always within the range that can be dealt with; do not leak your own information, it is best to weaken your sense of presence, do not actively seek trouble, do not appear in others' sight, and do not give others the opportunity to target. Even more extreme, they become clones, and what appears in the outside world is never the original body [Chigua]

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the author's design of the protagonist's power system and character is really good, and the plot advances quickly without any nonsense. After reading it for a while, I knew it was a book that would explode. Sure enough, it has been read by hundreds of thousands.

There is no obvious poison, and the punch character is well established. After reading it all at once, if the writing style behind it is the same as the previous one, it will definitely be a fine book! [Think]

Author, I traveled back from five hundred years later. The future reality will slowly merge with your novel, and people from other worlds will invade the earth. In order to win, they catch you before you can write the ending, after which the true catastrophe for humanity begins. Five hundred years ago, the genius Mr. Albajirk invented the time machine, and Hajigao, the top executive of the People's Federation, ordered me to go back to the time before everything happened to find you. In order to fight back against the aliens, we need to get all the weaknesses of the aliens from your novel immediately. Please update 500 chapters a day immediately. For the survival of mankind, you must update more! No, they're going to find me! You must update more, your information will make mankind great again

The content of the article is very novel and does not have the sense of mindless time travel for modern people. The author allows a person from a fantasy world to travel to the world of One-Punch Man with a modern background, but there is no strong sense of fragmentation. The combat power system is also pretty good and remarkable. It is a good article.

The author has potential, don't be constrained by cultivating immortality when reading. You can imagine that the male protagonist's world view and combat power are from level 1 to level 10. The combat power system is different from the previous routines and can reduce poison points by 80%. The character setting is very good and there are currently 100 chapters that can be read and very interesting.

It can be seen that the protagonist's character is well portrayed and Tatsumaki's daily life is also very consistent with the original work. I think this is enough for me to give 5 points because I have read a few books and they all have a bit of demonic character design. Why give 4 points? It is still a little bit poisonous. For example, the comparison of combat power is between cultivating immortals and super powers? I may be a little over the top on this point, but the plot and characters are still okay for Tomato and worth watching.

In my opinion, it is cut off from where I see it now (layered armor), the structure is complete, and the content is rigorous (except for the time when I confessed to the tornado), which is beyond my expectations. I personally think this is a leisure article worth reading (I think it is a leisure article😋). It is well written in daily life, and the bones are a little picky, but in my eyes it is still acceptable, and the characters are quite complete. The author keeps up the good work, we love to read it [laughing]

The daily love story with Tatsumaki is really well written. The writing of supporting characters like the teacher is quite consistent with the original work. But after there were more original things later, the plot became a little bit boring. But this is acceptable. After all, it is impossible for the screenwriter to be better than Teacher One. For those small adaptations that are not original, that is, the original plot, the writing is very good. Overall, a great article. Suitable for readers who like dragon scrolls. Only then did I realize that all the books written by the author were dragon scrolls. I'm such a fan of Tatsumaki. It can also be seen in the article that he does have a good grasp of Tatsumaki's character. Are you actually the person who recommended Tornado alone? I agree with you.

It's really good. I don't understand why so many people are obsessed with the realm in the book. Not all fantasy novels have to use the golden elixir method. The author didn't say that the sixth level is equal to the Nascent Soul, only the ghost level. I don't understand whether the negative comments in the comment area are because of reading too many fantasy novels.

The author's masterpiece of a single female protagonist, One Punch Tornado, has written a vivid person, surpassing the author's other books. This book feels like the strongest one. Even Tomato has not found a better fusion of single female protagonist and Tornado.

It's so exciting, it's so sweet, this sweet, slow and non-protracted little article is really mouth-watering! The author must update it! ! !

Can. The protagonist is overly cautious, but it is more reasonable because of his childhood experiences. The dragon roll has high sugar content and can be eaten. Strong and good grass.

This is the first one-punch fanfic that appeals to the appetite. The author's emotional descriptions are quite delicate, and the sweetness is good from time to time. Although the power system is a bit abrupt, it is generally good. I like this single-female protagonist Tatsumaki the most, and I look forward to other works.

I rely on the author's writing to be very good. The plot and setting are also very comfortable. Good, good, good. Come on, the author [sends my heart][sends my heart][sends my heart]

Where's the invincible article you promised? Strong men came one after another, beating the protagonist until his soul was gone. But the daily life with Tatsumaki is very beautiful. Although the alien enemies and chases are a bit disappointing, overall they are pretty good.

How should I put it, the book is a good book, the setting is good, and the writing is also good, but how can I put it, maybe I have read too many harem stories, and I feel that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is too weak, and there are too many repetitive descriptions, which may be a bit boring? Anyway, come on, author

It ranks among the top 3 of the One Punch fanfics I have read. The author rationally did not describe many characters in One Punch (too much of this stuff would ruin the original characters). The story line is simple and comfortable to watch. Later, just write the story line and the character of the male protagonist. It is a masterpiece.

I saw the ending today, so I specially posted a book review. Generally speaking, the tone is very relaxed. There is no big deal. Even though the pace at the end is relatively fast, it is understandable because the data is really not good and the ending promised by the author is also given to us. I don't expect too much. Finally, I feel very grateful. Thank you to the author for letting me see the ending before I go back to school. It's very satisfying [laughs] By the way, last but not least, I would like to thank the boss @ Paddling Water's Leisure Person, otherwise this book might really be cut in half [crying]

To put it bluntly, it's been a long time since I read a sweet article with correct logic.

It's okay, but the protagonist's caution always feels like he's not cautious enough.

It's okay. I personally can accept it and watch it. The heroine is a tornado, which is great [laughing] It's a pity that the protagonist is not from the earth, but from the fantasy world to one punch. Finally, I hope the author can work harder and update to prevent the eunuch from being unfinished.

Please stop writing fanfics. This emotional scene is really well written.

It was unexpectedly good, and the relationship with Tatsumaki progressed very naturally.