The Chief of Hehuan at the Beginning, the Entry Is Wonderful Life

I have read the latest chapter so far, and I feel pretty good about it. Unlike those Acacia novels that start with bitterness and hatred, the protagonist of this book has a brain, and the female characters are not all bad guys. They are stepping stones for the protagonist to become stronger. Moreover, I feel that the author of this book still has a fairy-like flavor, unlike the templates from the wholesale market, which is to my liking [Like] I've finished reading the latest chapter, and the rest is very interesting. The author must be the reincarnation of an old ghost. The supporting characters are all written with great personality, and the cannon fodder villain can actually appear clichéd and reasonable under the setting [facepalm] I really like the setting of this book! Moreover, the author's skill in writing plots cannot be overemphasized. He is definitely a veteran among veterans, and it's a smooth batch, and it's super attractive to me! I also had a temper once and gave the author a whole lot of love! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's well written, with benefits and foreshadowing. It's not a stud novel. The protagonist is very decisive and the characters are well described. I know that the author is the reincarnation of an old weirdo, and there was a mention in the comments section about his blocked old book. I didn't pay much attention at first and couldn't find it, but then I read through the comments and found out that the author has another account. Can you tell me the other account?

It's very interesting. I'm a fan of the author. I've been following the author's first book. This is already his fourth book. Apart from anything else, the author has nothing to say about the plot or character creation. It is really amazing and well-written. There is no cliché plot. Although there are routines, it is more of a novelty. And the author can always come up with some novel settings that have never been seen before, which is amazing. Moreover, it can be clearly felt that the author's writing style is becoming more and more sophisticated, and the progress is obvious. This book, I feel, has at least a rating of 8.5 Or above.

Good Liu Bei, no major poisonous points, but in my opinion, Ling Na has small poisonous points, but it does not affect the consumption. Overall, it looks smooth. There are more emotional scenes, so I will accept it when it is necessary. Moreover, the protagonist confiscated the second-hand goods. For this point, I give you five stars [Adoration], cheers for the author✊

The writing style is very good. It is not like the human-machine heroine in the stallion novel. The descriptions of the three heroines are quite good. They kill decisively and are not too careful. It is already a very good book, I hope it can be maintained in the follow-up, and the heroine in the early stage should not be forgotten. Book friends, there are books of similar quality that you can recommend! ! ! !

It feels really good. Except for the fake pregnancy part, which was a little bit annoying at first, I didn't expect that the next few chapters will immediately come true. The story is pretty good. The male protagonist is also the kind of person who basically doesn't hold any grudges. He accepts girls very quickly, which is good.

As high-end products in harem novels, each female character has her own changes and descriptions, and her relationship with the protagonist has also changed from a cauldron to a Taoist companion. The identity changes of each person are very interesting, although some of the explanations are not obvious.

The setting of the author's book is very similar to another one I read before. They are all entries, and the entries also have negative effects, similar to the feeling of Guigu Bahuang. I personally like it very much, because the author's book has multiple female protagonists, so I like it even more [smile][smile]

It's rare to see a book with a harem that also has a good plot. Several harem characters can appear from time to time without being invisible. Here I suggest that the harem beauties be temporarily stopped or not added more, and that the depth of the existing branch plots be greatly expanded. I hope this book won't be overly plot-heavy because of its pursuit of a harem. If you don't want to give up the harem, you can develop some emotional lines that are instantly divided, and the plot will appear in the later stages. All in all, even if this book doesn't have the harem gimmick, the plot and writing are still solid.

Okay, as a harem novel, there are almost no poisonous points. There are even some wipes that can satisfy the desires that the original novels cannot satisfy. The emotional descriptions are also quite delicate. The author should have written a female channel before. Anyway, if it is written from a female perspective, it does have some female channel flavor, but the male protagonist's perspective is more like a male channel, and the male protagonist's perspective is far more than the female perspective, so the overall control is pretty good. I hope the author will not be a eunuch and will not be a mess. Living a little smoother in real life

It's a book that I picked up casually, and it's amazing. I'm usually very tricky at reading books, but I really read this one. I don't understand why the score is so low. I think the score of this book should be higher than 9. I have also read many other 9-point books, many of which are not as good as this one. The author's writing is very good and the plot is very attractive. I especially like the setting of the characters and the emotional lines are very simple. Those who gave low scores read this Ten or eight of them were read for a while, but the duration was too low, so they stopped reading. Nothing is good for people like this. I think this book is very interesting to read. The more you read, the more you feel. I read it all day today and felt that it was not enough. I read it even when I was walking. I really recommend it. I can't make a fortune by lying to others [Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

The author's writing is very good, the plot is logical, there are benefits, and there are foreshadowings. The rating table is low. I read the latest chapter in one go. I hope the author can see the encouragement of this comment, haha, come on! Really well written!

Author, Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 Hun Xi Returns... Hun Xi When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is more focused. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are in the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates on scriptures are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally.

Super pretty! The speed is extremely fast! The logic is smooth! The setting is quite good. Although the various cannon fodder villains and plots are cliché, they seem very reasonable under the setting. The protagonist and supporting characters are well portrayed, and the plot is good (especially the interaction between the protagonist and the harem [smile]). All in all, Tomato is a good book, and it definitely gets a score of 9 or above. It would be better if the author could write more and write more. Don't finish it before it has a thousand chapters. Don't be a eunuch. [Please update]

There are no details in Eat, so one point will be deducted. The plot is acceptable.

Let me talk about my thoughts after reading it. If the author polishes it well, this novel will not be lower than 9 points. The overall quality of the work is sometimes high and sometimes low. Some places are very tasteful. The overall score is 8.4 Points.

It's a very interesting story about a villain. There's nothing about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. It's just one word. It's about other time-travelers at the beginning, but I won't mention it much later. The heroine is also pure, and the education and training plot is not procrastinating. It's the detailed content of "…" that I want. It's only one chapter after reading it for so long [angry]

Dear author: Seeing words is like meeting each other, showing trust and comfort. Liking your writing is probably the most arbitrary and unreasonable thing in the world. It's not about weighing the pros and cons, or being motivated by sex, but suddenly there is a piece of your work that makes me worried and unable to let go of it. You are the extraneous branch in my stable years, and the sun, moon and stars in my ordinary life. Whether it's the sunrise in the morning, a nap at noon, or a night filled with stars, I want to spend it with you. Don't doubt why I like you, just like fish fall in love with the sea, birds fall in love with the sky, I don't quite understand what this means, I think it's like breathing, no need to practice, just because it's you. By the way, if you still have the manuscript saved, remember to post it. [Laughing evilly] At the first watch, the flaws are revealed, and the ridicule is like a tide; At the second watch, the expression of anger faded slightly, and the spectators began to turn their ears; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and the alliance of the future is hidden. At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; At the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars and the nobles are revitalized, and the sound of praise fills the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the name of the green slip will remain fragrant for thousands of years. Sigh! Nine out of 100 difficulties, the disadvantage lies in the later stage; but by waving the key like rain, it can stop the crowd's beaks May your ink be as long as a long river, so that the starry night will be flawless and readers will forget to eat.

Anyway, it's pretty cool. You can tell what kind of novel it is by looking at the title, so maybe my requirements have become lower. Different novels have different requirements. Just this topic selection, from the perspective of Uncle Pinhuang, is still acceptable.

It's definitely the reincarnation of an old weirdo, and the relationship scenes are not bad. I'd love to see more if I write more. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] It has a 10-point rating on Tomato

Wonderful, wonderful, very wonderful! The author's literary skills are quite good! The protagonist really wins my heart, and the plot is reasonable and not cliche! If the protagonist is a bit more evil, for example, in the eyes of outsiders, he is upright and honest, but in reality he is absolutely self-interested, hypocritical and becomes a Buddha, helps all sentient beings, is low-key and restrained, does not appear saintly in front of others, and is unworthy of others! What does the author think?

It's nice to watch, but there's a slight flaw in the setting. The protagonist's entry for banishing Immortal Gu will let people see their favorite appearance. I don't know if the general will accept it. The first thing she saw when she saw the protagonist looked like her brother. It would be a surprise if she accepted it later. But the author didn't write green, maybe he didn't pay attention when pushing the plot, and just pretended that he didn't exist.

Good good, looking forward to the plot progressing, when will the aunt be taken in [laughing] To be honest, the third volume is over, so if you want to write a straight protagonist, there's no problem. The key is that the protagonist has such a big background, and a group of people use such a stupid way to plot against him, which is really outrageous. I'm here to see Shuangwen, not your strategy. The original attraction was the protagonist and his cauldron, but with his aunt as a ceiling, his combat power was even more restricted. This is not the mortal world, this is the world of immortality. He is not like the Bai Chenglin I saw before. It feels like he has been replaced. And what I'm talking about is that you don't have any plot at all in the Imperial Book, so what are you looking at? Don't engage in those machinations.

It's a good harem story, I just hope it can expand the plot of acquiring a daughter, and I want to see the plot of falling into a trap step by step. When naming the sects and moves in the book, make them concise and easy to remember. When I was in Conquer the Strange Fire, I couldn't tell what was what.

The characters of the heroines are all very well written. Each one has their own unique character and persistence. Although there are only a few supporting characters, they can highlight their own characteristics and qualities. The growth of the protagonist is not only the change of going through hardships, but also the subtle concession and tenderness towards the people around him.

It's relaxing and enjoyable, but the arrangement of the entries is a bit too typical. After reading some of the characters' entries, I can basically guess the direction of this person's plot. The overall writing is smooth, and the plot has ups and downs without being boring. Although the character creation cannot be said to be very strong, it has already surpassed 90% of the harem stories. The problem is that the length is currently short. When the number of characters increases, the shaping problems will become more prominent. You need to pay attention to the rhythm of adding new characters.

There are no big poisons, but there are constant minor poisons. The plot is acceptable, but the whole cast is less intelligent. The evaluation is that it can kill time.

It's coming, it's still beautiful.

It looks good, I like the character of the male protagonist very much, the goal is clear and not pretentious, and the author also writes the plot very well, mainly because the plot is really well written, hehe [Like]

It's a very interesting article, with some new ideas. I came here to read Hehuan, but I found the plot to be more interesting. The shortcoming is that the logic of the writing is relatively simple and not so straightforward. It is a good book to pass the time.