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The first part is very green, but the more you write in the later part, the better. If you can endure the first part, the second part is very exciting, all the staff have online IQs, and the setting is very novel. It is considered a good book in Tomato, but it feels like the author is being fed up with books. Let's make an objective evaluation. Since I am a new author, I feel that the author has a good foundation. It is much better than some short-form articles on Tomato, but it is not very good. The main reason is that the plot is a little messy at the beginning, but the progress is very big at the end. It can be seen that the author is making progress. I can only say that I am very much looking forward to writing the next one. I will deduct one star for the first one.

The content is quite good, and many parts of the plot look like the climax of other novels, but it's okay. At least it doesn't create as much trouble between the male and female protagonists as others. But there are also some poisonous points. For example, the male protagonist in the Tomato classic knows the secret, and then treats the senior management as a fool to hide it. It feels like the male protagonist is entering the secret realm and solving the trouble. Also, the appearance of the heroine should be more reasonable, right? Secondly, a mental beast controls a newly awakened person and almost kills a male protagonist who is higher than him and has more powerful abilities than him? If you want to say that the male protagonist is injured, you should make it more serious. Otherwise, you just brushed it off, and then the male protagonist almost died?

I don't know if it's a good book at the moment, but overall it looks pretty good. It's much better than Tomato's book, which is mostly just talk. It's acceptable. The author will update it soon. Let me see the emotional line [laugh][laugh][shy]

Give yourself a low score and be humble. The author is revising the article, and subsequent plots will not be affected.

There is some lack of details in the front, and some plots feel too abrupt. Whether it is blending into the team or rushing directly into the rift, it feels like it is just to follow the story line. The growth of the characters and the changes in inner feelings can be more clear. All in all, the main line is very clear and not bad. The writing is still lacking. Come on [laugh][laugh][laugh]

The writing is all very good and I like it very much, but the thing is, the heroine. . Isn't it Jiang Wan? . Jiang Wan suddenly felt so pitiful. . .

It's okay, but a female character who has been portrayed so much ends up being a passerby. It's better to go to the female channel next door. It's not in line with my hobbies. I'd better give it a good review, writing is not easy [laughs][laughs]

OK OK [Like][Like][Like] Come on, author

It's a good book, and it's great if you skip the early stages of it.

With a huge world view, the foreshadowing is laid in the early stage, and the plot is also very novel. I am looking forward to the subsequent performance. The author should not stop updating like milk tea cats and dogs! Come on come on

Good-looking, super good-looking [sending heart]

It's pretty good to watch, but I feel like I'm obsessed with the plot.

One word is cool! ! Highly recommended

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [send heart][send heart][send heart] The author will update soon. Looking forward to the past and present lives of the male and female protagonists.

I've read more than a dozen chapters. It's my kind of novel. I hope it doesn't end badly.

The subject matter is okay, keep up the good work

Very nice, I like it very much

Not bad, at least there are no poisonous points at present. Please support [eating melon] Hey, I still have to ask, is the heroine Jiang Wan? Then this time they came suddenly, but the author didn't do anything to foreshadow it (except for the phone signal, which was not very good, so I didn't seem to mention it), which made me wonder if these people were irrelevant? Logically speaking, if it is an important person, shouldn't it be mentioned in advance? I hope it's clear (after all, Jiang Wan doesn't seem to have anything to do with Shuangqiang at the moment)

The plot and structure are a bit green, but. . . The writing is very charming and not boring.

It's quite spacious, and it's quite nice.

Looks good, keep it up

It looks good, but I'm afraid the author will run away [smile]

Not bad. Very pretty.

Overall evaluation, I think it's still OK [Learned]

I personally prefer this kind of book. The writing is pretty good.

Very nice, not a brainless piece of writing

The writing is very good and beautiful, and the protagonist is well portrayed.

A very good book, much better than some nonsense articles on Tomato

It's absolutely beautiful. It's the first time I'm so engrossed in reading a book. I'm not here to read a book review, so I read it all.

Very good, beautiful [laughs][laughs]