Comprehensive Comic: My Youth Love Story Is Very Problematic

It feels good after watching it. As long as there are no poisonous spots later, it is worth recommending. 666, As the first person to comment on this book, said that as long as the plot behind it is not too shocking, it is a good book, but it turns out that the plot behind the heroine is not that shocking at all! I have no desire to read anymore! As for the author, please take a look at the introduction you wrote yourself or change the introduction! And I added two stars in the review because one star is not included in the calculation!

There is a bit of a contradiction between the content and the introduction. Megumi did not reject Midoriya, and everyone generally dislikes Midoriya (it should be downplayed, or there may be conflicts with the protagonist later on). Glass has too few scenes, she deserves the best [almost crying]. The advantage is that the characters are well drawn and there is no OOC. The protagonist currently feels too perfect and Asasi (suitable for a novel from a few years ago). I hope to polish the image of the protagonist (such as having to eat something, breaking the image of the little chef guy [admiration])

The writing is good. According to the character of the protagonist in Chapter 43, the differences between previous social attributes and peers, etc., After finishing this book, I can try to create urban novels such as Japan or ours based on the experience of this book. The focus can be on the immersive description of Lun Ye and the troubled dogs in the relationship, as well as the chat and social interaction between different characters, etc. This can attract a group of readers who like daily and thoughtful writing or who prefer literary youth. At present, the three-dimensional character of the protagonist is already established. It depends on how the author writes later. Here are the 8 apes, please give the author a bottle of drink to cheer him up [Like]

The male protagonist's character and ability are all well written. As for An Yi's problem, I feel it's okay. The female characters all have a disgusting attitude towards An Yi, and there is no interaction between them. An Yi only plays a role in promoting the interaction between the protagonist and other female characters, but a lot of people criticize the protagonist when they see him being friends with him [face covering]. There is also the inexplicable Shen Nong who talks about a completely non-existent plot. He can't be a fellow saboteur, right? How can I put it, there is no big problem with the plot. I also like to watch this kind of daily life. Give me a five-star to encourage the author [Send my heart] Finally, let me say it, if you rate it more than 5 points, it really won't be a shame [face covering]

I won't say much about the plot. I fully respect the plots of all authors. If you don't like it, I won't read it and just avoid it. The main reason I write a review is to hope that the author can improve his writing style in the next book. Some people praise how good the writing is. This cannot be wrong, it can only be said to be superficial. This is not the style of writing that Internet articles should express. It tastes very stiff and uses strange words. I used to think that this kind of writing style is very good, but the sense of substitution is very low and it is flashy. After flipping through the book twice more, I found that the whole book has the same flavor, with a stiff feeling. Changing the writing style is equivalent to changing the writing style. My suggestion is not very good. My left and right brains are cross-talking. I'm sorry. Maybe this style of writing is called Japanese light novels, I don't know, but it is still very different from Chinese online writing. Maybe that's why I can't stand light novels, so that's my problem. To make a metaphor, it is like the hair on the hand, but it is indeed hair. I prefer it to be smooth hair,

The master's wonderful pen has captured the soul, making people look at the empty update page without thinking about food and drink, and the soul is like a flower on a branch. What a cruel heart! Could it be that he wants to imitate that Immortal Si Wen, who ended up with half a volume of heavenly book? If it's a little later, the soul in this room will dry up its tears, and the red will disappear and the fragrance will fade away! Please give me some chapters to extend my life~ [Punch out]

Yes, yes, it still looks good now. I quite like the character of the protagonist, Asasi. I just hope that the protagonist can give out some sweets and the emotional line can be faster.

There's nothing much to say about giving it four stars. It's a classic Japanese manga with a gentle male protagonist. The only one who didn't write An Yilun as sublimely, but it's pretty much the same. I can only say that the male protagonist is a normal version. It reads like a Japanese light novel. There are many better alternatives than it. For example, I really can't fall in love. In simple terms, there are many. The writing is average, the plot is average, and the classic family happy world peace finale

Use this to encourage

Can't the defeated dog and the heroine be taken in together?

Ignore the trolls, I hope the author writes well. There aren't many fangirls with such good-looking female protagonists.

Not bad, a novel worth reading

It's rare that the male protagonist Asasi is written well. Anyway, I like it.

It's not bad, it's not something that belongs to the Dragon Kingdom. Overseas Chinese recommend watching it, although it is a bit bland.

Those who play with Glass are all good people. Glass is really cute [crying][crying][crying]

Very good, very delicate, come on!

Not bad, let's see again

Not bad, worthy of praise

Not bad, good looking

It's okay, I don't know what to say

I think it's pretty good

Ok ok ok

It's a blast and must be praised.

So far, there's no big problem. Come on [Like]

It's very well written and well worth watching, but the subject is a bit misleading.

It's very well written. Come on, I hope Yukino will appear soon.

I can keep reading this manga, good luck to the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's good-looking and there's nothing very sinister about it. The only drawback is that the number of words is too few and it's not enough to read!

The writing is good, and the transition between the heroine's appearances is very natural. The biggest problem right now is that there are only 100,000 words [laughing]

The writing is very good. I hope it can be continued in the long run. Come on, the author gives you [heartfelt]