After Get Off Work, I Picked up a Loli Witch

Although it can be written with more ups and downs from the setting point of view, the story proceeds according to the daily rhythm. If you like to read it on a daily basis, it is quite good (I like to read it). The whole story is the growth path of the female protagonist, and the male protagonist's psychology is gradually enriched and no longer decadent. The male protagonist is responsible and considerate of the female protagonist. The female protagonist is also very cute on the inside. Later on, she becomes well-behaved and sensible, and gradually gains power. In addition, the entire text of this work is basically in a daily style, which may be boring to some people. I hope everyone can treat it as normal.

Silver Branch City is really well written, full marks to me The characters in it are all very distinctive Daisy, a senior at the Magic Academy, likes to have a leisurely job, likes to be called senior, and speaks very fast. Liz, the front desk clerk of the Adventure Guild, often fished and ate apples and instant noodles. Finally, she was transferred away by the guild leader for a week to manage the warehouse. Eve, a roadside stall, specializes in barbecue, such as roasted chicken legs. She is regarded as a love rival by Xiao Mo. Xiao Mo gets jealous every time she appears. The great detective Edmund is cheerful and vengeful. He avenges his daughter and exposes the royal family members' human experiments on witches and elves. He is thoughtful and arranges a way for Feng Yun to escape. He is a highly intelligent person with only four rings of strength, but he can use the power of the Elf Kingdom to deprive the royal family member who killed his daughter of his daughter of his identity and exile him. … Of course, the most important thing is the sweet daily life between Fengyun and Movis. They want to be together forever.

A very good novel First of all, in terms of writing style, the author's writing style is very unique. It does not have boring descriptions and is more life-like. It is not tiring to read. It can be said that it makes people feel like a spring breeze. It can make people feel the warmth of daily life without making people anxious. Secondly, in terms of content, it mainly describes daily life. The male protagonist has a relatively easy-going personality, or is flat, and does not like to be involved in troublesome things. He initially shows pity to the female protagonist and is helpless to take her away. Later, he can be said to have become a real family. In terms of combat power, it is above average, but I have not encountered anyone who can really threaten the male protagonist (of course, the female protagonist is not being coerced). The female protagonist is written with the innocent and lively feeling of a child, although I feel that the female protagonist is not good enough. In order to appear to be more childish and innocent compared to her real age, her perspective often carries a kind of romantic fantasy and expectation, but this may also be related to the heroine's previous experience. As for her personality, she is half spirit pearl and half magic pill. She will praise the male protagonist's advantages and defend him. She will bring him back from his memories with gentleness without hurting him. She is also a little arrogant. She likes the male protagonist to praise her and will often talk to him. They quarreled, fought with each other, and made some jokes. They were quite curious and had a hard time relaxing. Of course, they also learned the dirty words spoken by the male protagonist (fw prison style teaches bad children😡). The interaction between the two people has a sense of life. What follows is my favorite Gravity, possessiveness and maintenance 😋 (may contain spoilers), it started to show up in the Empire after pinching the heart, and then in Griffith (the first city he went to) the hero put the sleepy heroine in the hotel and went alone While eating in a bar, the heroine wakes up and goes directly to the hero and then throws herself into his arms, not wanting him to leave her. When giving alms to the three homeless brothers and sisters, she specially introduces the hero but is angry because the three brothers and sisters did not thank the hero. She will wrap her arms around the hero when she sleeps. , Has a strong exclusivity towards other women, will be jealous, will often look for topics to get the male protagonist to respond to her, make small moves to divert the male protagonist's attention to him, and will have some tricks and ingenuity to interact with the male protagonist, it is really delicious😋

Although the latter part is slow, the first few chapters in Tomato's slow pace can be called a great start. Although the writing is not very good, it is not bad, especially since there are not many literary youths who like to write a long chapter describing the environment. Traveling to a different world will not miss the original world. I'm still missing the original world. Don't put your patriotic sentiments into light novels. Hey) As long as you don't commit literary youth problems in the future, keep the male and female protagonists clean, don't introduce overly complicated settings, go through a long journey near the end or add more relevant early Easter eggs, it can become a tomato masterpiece (unfortunately, in light novels, only pure meat and eunuchs are easier to push), even if it is released in QD, it will be a masterpiece. I was also very surprised that the protagonist in the author's initial chapter died due to war. After all, many authors now believe that as long as the country is strong enough, civilians will not be injured. The cruel history of war has told us that the author has surpassed most other authors by writing this way. This is not a joke, but a fact. Summary: At present, it is high-quality and medium-quality. As long as it is neither pure pornographic nor too censorious, and maintains a single heroine and a double character, the popularity may not rise, but the quality will definitely be very high.

It's a very good Western fantasy novel. I really like the interaction between Mavis and Feng Yun. I feel warm after reading the corpse. I also look forward to the further development of Mavis' relationship with Feng Yun when she grows up. I want to continue to be so happy [Like][Like][Like]

It's a good-looking daily novel, and the overall style is very relaxed. It doesn't have the feeling that the whole world is revolving around pig's feet, which should make me feel it is better than 90% of novels. The characters don't have that kind of human-machine feeling. Having ideas in your mind is much better than formulas. The promotion of Tomato is really not very good. I like to read the kind of human-machine articles that are recommended to me. It's okay if I read it occasionally, but I can't stand it if I read it too much.

It's pretty good, warm and daily, with a single female protagonist. I have read more than 80 chapters, and I think it is okay. It is a daily Western fantasy light novel type. Reading it in your spare time can relax your mood. At present, the heroine is still young, and there is still a lot of room for growth. After all, she is a nurturing person (it will be okay if she is slightly sickly in the future). The male protagonist is more like an old young man, who is miserable in his daily life. It feels like the author is writing about the life he wants. Since the beginning of the trip, we have been able to get along with each other on a daily basis, relaxed and happy, and have daily quarrels. However, we are still young, so there is not much emotional sublimation, and it is more about companionship. I have always felt that you will have a feeling (first impression) from the first few chapters of a book, whether it is suitable for you to read, and whether you can persist in reading it. At the beginning, I stayed because of the freshness. Once the freshness wears off, I really like/suit it if I can stay. The author of this book designed the plot to pursue a certain rationality and also referenced it from daily life, which is very good. If you also like the daily-oriented western fantasy love development system, this book is also a good choice.

It's okay, relaxing and daily. Judging from the current situation, although there may not be many people, it's still acceptable. There are many people who like to watch it. Anyway, I think it's pretty good. It's like a world of my own imagination. I should be able to write hundreds of chapters. Come on! [Praise]

After reading more than a hundred chapters, as an only child looking after my adopted sister, I really felt warm and physical. My sister is a rich person in nature and has the characteristics of a magic pill. Her daily life is full of a sense of life. There are occasional hints of the main plot and rhythm adjustments in her daily life, which is quite interesting. What I love most is that the communication and emotional changes are real and natural. Whether it is the vivid three-dimensional characters supported by the extensive descriptions of the brothers and sisters, or the passing characters who only show the tip of the iceberg or are only glimpsed, there are parts worth pondering as a viewer. This kind of appropriate white space goes beyond the text itself and is thought-provoking. I mean absolutely delicious 😋.

Hmm... Emm... It's been a long time since I've written a book review. This book is just like the introduction. It's a road story. It's bland but interesting. It's like a real trip. The younger sister is very cute and at the same time very attached to her older brother. Both of them have been miserable in the past. In this story, the younger sister is a witch. This race's natural strength is different and the same emotion will be lost or enhanced. As for her, she is currently. I feel insecure and want to be by the protagonist's side all the time (not the yandere kind, the kind of emm... Who cares a lot about your girlfriend who will be jealous). The character creation has not made me feel uncomfortable so far. There are no problems with the relationship between the characters. The writing is okay and I don't think it is bad. In short, this book is very good, not too fast and moderate, and I recommend you to read it.

It's quite good. I've read more than 30 chapters. There's no fighting or fighting, just some interesting daily routines. The rhythm is OK. I'd like to give it a five-star support.

It is an improvement compared to the author's previous book, but this book is not particularly attractive in daily life. When I first read it, I felt that the background setting was interesting, and the daily conversations between the two people were also interesting. I was motivated to read it, but I like to read some novel or stories with ups and downs and exciting plots. I don't like to read daily life, so I have no motivation after reading it for a while. In fact, this book can develop a grand narrative from the background, which will be more attractive. Finally, book friends who like to read about ordinary daily life are recommended to read it. I also hope that the author can find the shortcomings in this book and write a more attractive story (will there be a next one? Author ⊙_⊙)

Good book. One of the few books whose dialogues keep people reading, it is very well written and deals with daily life very well. Most of the time it's a quarrel between a brother and a sister. Rush and calmness in an urgent context. There is tension

The author's daily-oriented Western fantasy is very good, relaxed and enjoyable. Although the protagonist's words in the early chapters have a little dialect that affects the perception, it is basically gone in the later stages. Don't be dissuaded just because of this. The female protagonist is raised, and she is always with the male protagonist every day. There is a lot of daily interaction content, which is quite exciting. I recommend everyone to read the travel story of Fengyun and Movis.

I like you, the group leader is a vampire loli, very moist, the group leader won't let the moon

Score it first and make it up later. So far, it's very comfortable to watch on a daily basis. The two of them get along very well. Two magic pills. I hope to see Xiao Mo's gravity field as an adult [laughing]. Finally, host, I like you [blowing kiss]

A very nice and healing daily text [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's a very relaxed and ordinary daily life. Both the ups and downs of the plot and the external emotional expressions of the male and female protagonists are quite smooth and slow. It's like a pack of original Lay's potato chips. It has no characteristics and no taste stimulation, but it just can't be stopped. However, the overdose is just like a pack of Lay's. When you can't get anything out, you realize that you have finished eating. The taste in your mouth is still there, but there is nothing left [full]

After reading Chapter 102, I hope the author can write more sweet plots. At this stage, it feels too "dry", like dry soil that is watery and has no sugar. The plot was okay. Apart from being a bit watery, it was actually quite heartwarming. It would have been nice to have more desserts. When the author sees it, remember to give me a like [like]

Good-looking, good-looking

Good looking and fun to interact with on a daily basis

After watching a dozen of them, I felt like I was resurrected😋😋

Very pretty~ Well, if you like watching daily life and eating sweets, you can come here

Laodeng update soon, I want to see Xiao Mowan open the whole room in seconds [shy]

The rhythm of the story is well controlled, and the description of the little kid is very human [laughs]. It is a daily novel.

For daily use, it has a bit of a mournful Fulian feel, making people feel at peace like a big pink cat [laughing evilly]

I hope there will be more emotional scenes with Mavis in the future [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] It's not a brother-sister relationship [shy]

I will keep watching the mouth and teeth It is obviously a very good subject matter, with clear mission clues and orderly plot advancement. Each small unit story can also be seen to be well polished (watching the Forgotten Witch was really a bit amazing to me), the road story is also well connected, and the current development of the main plot is also good (such as various foreshadowings, the driving force of the foreshadowing, and chapter management, etc.). I also think the author's writing style is not bad. The use of imagery is very helpful in describing the details and the description of love scenes (such as Hui Hui). I hope the author can persevere and complete this journey that has been polished for a long time and well enough. Come on!

Daily writing, pretty good

It looks good. I love reading it. Come on, the author.