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I went to read this. The author's writing is really good, but some details are not polished properly. My thoughts later will involve spoilers. Let's talk about the author's shortcomings first. The author's plots are good, but some details are not polished well, such as the Poké Ball that suddenly appeared, and the protagonist's weapon. At the beginning, he got it from a fanatical believer, but later it became smooth from Ma Zhishi's side. Secondly, why is there no introduction to the author's protagonist's Ba album later? How come it also found another pair of its own and flew away? Next, let's talk about the advantages. The author's background and description are quite good. The second green caterpillar that suddenly appeared was mentioned earlier. Although it was not introduced too much, it was later connected with Qinglu. Originally Qinglu and the protagonist could have taken the same route of friendship and bonding, but Qinglu chose another absolute reason and control. Another author once described that the protagonist helped Xiaochun but didn't know where she would be later [eating melon] The kids fell into the trap. Later, the protagonist seems to have changed. He puts Badadie into the obviously problematic blood nest ball, underestimates the opponent, and then uses the elf to block the damage. Rely on this to advance the plot. I said before that I finally found a good book, but I didn't expect that I would work hard later [face covering]

Seeing this, I have to admire the author's great imagination and good writing. I have read a book on this subject before that was too depressing to be honest and I couldn't read it, but this one can't. I read this one. The plot is very attractive and I can really feel the growth of Chihong. He is integrating into the world while trying hard to retain ""himself"". At the same time, I also remind readers who have not read it. This book is a brand new world view. The Pokémon here are not ordinary Pokémon and have a feeling similar to Cthulhu. The warmth of the animation here is just the warmth between Red and Pokémon. If you want to watch the warmth of the animation, you can quit, but I still recommend you to watch it. There are also some details that the author needs to improve. There is no normal heroine in this worldview [face covering] (the above only represents my personal opinion, don't criticize me)

It's very well written. First of all, the protagonist is a little bit poisonous, but within the acceptable range. Secondly, I want to complain about many female protagonists. I also thought about Chihong's acceptance of the female protagonist. I didn't expect it to be Pokémon Fury. At least half of the 10 Pokémon books now have Fury characters. I'm used to it [laughing and crying]. Ps; the protagonist is Red in the normal world.

It can become a masterpiece. Although I feel that some parts of the author's writing are still a little tasteless, it does not prevent it from becoming a masterpiece. Of course, it just can. I have read relatively little about the specific details. It depends on how the author writes later. It's really interesting. It reminds me of the fake Ultraman I read in Lao Feng Mo. It's very interesting, but I don't know what the author is going to do next. It's just that it was written too fast, and many plots were not laid out well. The causes and consequences of many events were written a bit too quickly, and the reason why the entire Pokémon world was contaminated has not been written yet. We have reached the Quartz Plateau so quickly. I feel that if I can't maintain a good rhythm in the follow-up, it may collapse very quickly. I hope I can grasp the rhythm a little bit. Then there is the truth about the world. I hope to write a little more about it. Judging from the situation in the plot, the pollution should have started decades ago, and it seems to be caused by an unknown beast. I hope the author can write some extras to supplement the plot. Although the pace is fast, it seems to be okay.

Weird + Pokémon is quite creative, but the plot moves too fast, and some plot developments are too deliberate and need to be polished. The three weird Pokémon in the team are currently well established.

Why not give the protagonist the physical qualities of a peer?

Support the small workshop, but it is definitely not worth 5 stars. The battle is very fast, and it is solved in one chapter. I am quite satisfied with it. The plot is compact to the point of depression, the subject matter is very novel, and the logic is a bit rough. You can take a look.

My evaluation is that if you keep going, this will become a masterpiece, but what I want to do even more is if there is a big boss who can make a revision of this thing. This plot and storyline feel like it can be made into a super exciting GBA game revision.

It's just that the pace is a bit fast, but everything else is good, and it will make up for any shortcomings. The subject matter is also very good, and it doesn't feel particularly depressing. The growth of the protagonist can also be seen. It's very interesting. It may become a masterpiece of this genre. But there is one thing, you bastard, please update it quickly! ! ! [Smile][smile][smile]

I think it's very well written, and it's the first time I've seen this kind of Pokémon writing, but it would be nice if there were ten updates a day. Sorry, kids, the protagonist is useless, what can I do if I can only rely on my wisdom to underestimate the enemy? ? ? , Rely on force to leave Pokémon on the roadside in the later stage, and more than 120 chapters and more than 60 chapters are about treating Pokémon because Pokémon are injured. You said that chapter 20 or 30 is enough, and more than 60 chapters are all about treating Pokémon? ? ? And it can't be said that there are no tactics, right? Are the auxiliary skills always available? It doesn't matter if you can't learn the light wall and reflective wall. Don't you want to learn and use things like defense, light harmony, moonlight, poison, and parasitic seeds? All attacks are on, right? Samsung is already top-notch, I hope it won't be too weak in the future.

A great novel

Very nice. . . . "Alien" Pokémon text

Until Chapter 39, except that the pace is too fast and many things are not described or foreshadowed, it is basically okay. The subject matter is very novel.

Super new theme, super new among basically the same Pokémon

It's a very novel subject matter, but the author's writing skills still need to be improved. There are some minor flaws, but they are barely acceptable.

It's a bit like AI, but you can tell that the author is working hard to improve it, but I can only say that you should read it when there is a shortage of books.

The Book of Gods, the plot is just a little too fast.

When will the author give the protagonist some red Pokémon, such as Punch and Buttercup?

The pace is fast and it's fun to watch

Well written and beautiful

Good looking. Recommended. Really good looking.

Well worth a look, kids.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very interesting, good luck to the author

Super super pretty

The plot is pretty good

Ninety-nine percent rare.

It's quite interesting, I hope it won't happen again later.

Taurus B, this environment also creates a harem with Pokémon.

Why don't the protagonist give him an armored ninja frog [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]