My Childhood Friend, Whom I’ve Secretly Loved for Ten Years, Has Soft, Sweet Lips

It looks good, I must write 1, please

The quotation marks are not used very well, and sometimes it is difficult to understand, making it impossible to distinguish between what the characters are saying and their psychological descriptions. Is Wen Ruoqing's father Xingwen or Zhong? There are several mistakes in the article. The emotional changes between the two protagonists are reasonable and will not make people feel strange. The other characters are also well portrayed. The author's writing style is pretty good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 (Personal thoughts) The connection between the chapters of the article is not very good. There are errors in the names of characters in the article. The chapter arrangement of the main and secondary characters is a bit unreasonable. The character is written in several consecutive chapters, and then the main character is written back, and then the secondary characters are written in several consecutive chapters. This results in intermittent relationships between the characters and intermittent content. It is better to write a separate book dedicated to the secondary characters. I think that before the conflict between the two protagonists was completely resolved, they would not have reconciled and been together so quickly. After experiencing their parents' car accident, their father's death, and their mother being seriously ill in bed (and this has something to do with Wen, there is a misunderstanding between the two) Wen could not be with Wen so quickly without any grudges. I personally don't think this is very reasonable.

Why did Wen Qianqian and Wen Ruoqing break up? Recommended! The writing is so delicate

Very good, just started watching it

Well written, 🚗very beautiful

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

When will the memories end 🤭🤭