Naruto fanfic
Twelve years later, Sakura Jingu has become the priest of the Hiiki Shrine, which is respected by the five major countries. In her memory, Naruto's world should not have such a huge religious force, let alone a character like her who appeared out of thin air and was taken for granted by everyone.
The shrine is full of cherry blossoms all day long, and twenty-four shrine maidens guard it silently. The hazy willpower known as the "Fox God" who is entrenched behind the shrine carries the inheritance of the shrine and the memories of those who have traveled through the shrine. She steps into the whirlpool of the ninja world as a shrine maiden.
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(After I wrote it out, it was already very different from what I thought at the beginning. I really envy people who can write down perfectly what they think of)
Reader comments
I stayed up late to read it, which is really rare. At first I thought it was a series of works that followed the main plot, but after the protagonist took Zabuza and Shiro in, I completely changed my mind. I clearly felt that the author was getting better and wrote something of his own based on the framework he had set up. In my opinion, being able to do this can be regarded as a successful fanfic. The author's portrayal of the characters is also good. The protagonist behaves very calmly most of the time. When he was trampled by the fox god in his deal with Orochimaru, the conflict with his past image suddenly made people feel alive (Miyaji-sama is cute).
Of course, there are other things that are worthy of praise, so I won't list them all. Let's talk about some subjective feelings. Maybe it's just me, so it's for reference only. The first one is that before taking in Zabuza and Haku, it felt a little more preachy, but of course it disappeared after that. This is also the feeling that I feel is a watershed before and after taking in Zabuza and Haku. The second thing is that I think the author can optimize the details. There are two or three typos, so I won't go into details. For example, Bai serves the protagonist. When the protagonist is stepped on by the fox god, Bai can directly enter the door, which gives me a sense of violation? After all, the protagonist is a palace minister and his status is here. How could Bai take the turn to appear in that situation? There are also considerations of different genders. It would be a little more natural if the author had used the protagonist's words to express that "Bai can appear reasonably", but this is not a big problem. Just treat it as what I felt when I saw it.
To sum up, the shortcomings do not hide the good points. In my opinion, this is a good book. I hope the author can continue to read more. I also include a little bit of my selfishness. I want to see the author's thinking and understanding of the world of Naruto, and I want to see a complete story about Jingu Siying.
I finally read a novel about Naruto Miko, where the protagonist is transcendent from the ninja world. It's not about being high-profile all the time, but it's fun to show off occasionally. Please keep writing [blowing kiss]
I stayed up late to read it, which is really rare. At first I thought it was a series of works that followed the main plot, but after the protagonist took Zabuza and Shiro in, I completely changed my mind. I clearly felt that the author was getting better and wrote something of his own based on the framework he had set up. In my opinion, being able to do this can be regarded as a successful fanfic. The author's portrayal of the characters is also good. The protagonist behaves very calmly most of the time. When he was trampled by the fox god in his deal with Orochimaru, the conflict with his past image suddenly made people feel alive (Miyaji-sama is cute). Of course, there are other things that are worthy of praise, so I won't list them all. Let's talk about some subjective feelings. Maybe it's just me, so it's for reference only. The first one is that before taking in Zabuza and Haku, it felt a little more preachy, but of course it disappeared after that. This is also the feeling that I feel is a watershed before and after taking in Zabuza and Haku. The second thing is that I think the author can optimize the details. There are two or three typos, so I won't go into details. For example, Bai serves the protagonist. When the protagonist is stepped on by the fox god, Bai can directly enter the door, which gives me a sense of violation? After all, the protagonist is a palace minister and his status is here. How could Bai take the turn to appear in that situation? There are also considerations of different genders. It would be a little more natural if the author had used the protagonist's words to express that "Bai can appear reasonably", but this is not a big problem. Just treat it as what I felt when I saw it. To sum up, the shortcomings do not hide the good points. In my opinion, this is a good book. I hope the author can continue to read more. I also include a little bit of my selfishness. I want to see the author's thinking and understanding of the world of Naruto, and I want to see a complete story about Jingu Siying.
I finally read a novel about Naruto Miko, where the protagonist is transcendent from the ninja world. It's not about being high-profile all the time, but it's fun to show off occasionally. Please keep writing [blowing kiss]