Bliss************

So far, it's a pretty good if-line fanfic. First, let's talk about the points that you may be concerned about: 1. It's different from the original timeline (not too disturbing). 2. Tongmo and Kotonoha seem to have an emotional connection (it's in the eye of the beholder, I quite like it, and the author writes it very sweetly). Advantages: interesting if lines, good writing style, stable updates by the author (currently), the subject matter of this book is rare and top-notch among demon slayer works. Disadvantages: The author should be a new author, and he is not very good at segmenting. For the few chapters I have read so far, I feel that the progress is a bit slow, and there are problems with the timeline (I personally don't think it is a hindrance, they are all minor problems). Guesses: 1. If Inosuke is the protagonist, I am looking forward to how the author writes the ending. 2. Will Inosuke turn into a ghost or use a human body to fight against the Demon Slayer Squad? Summary: The best in fan fiction, you can read it later when you are fattened up [shy]

Very beautiful, really beautiful! ! ! The author will update soon! ! (To be honest, I don't like Tongqin very much, but the author's writing style is really good!)

Very nice! ! ! I like this [shyness] very warm! The Demon Slayer Squad and ghosts can coexist peacefully (not really). Anyway, I really like it, really like it, really like it! ! ! In short, I love every word, every article, every chapter, and every detail! If possible, I wish there were more books like this!

It's basically not OOc, and it's friendly to people who like to read fanfics but hate changing settings. However, it's a bit unacceptable for people who are tired of joining later. It's really beautiful. It's the best one I've found among Tongqin books. It's totally in line with my taste.

I saw Inosuke's if-line jokes in the video, but I didn't expect it to be actually written into a novel. Big cheers to the author [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Looks good! I really like this book. The family of three will be happy forever.

The writing is really good! Come on, teacher₍^˶ ╸𖥦 ╸˵^₎⟆

It's good-looking, but the rotten person is sincere [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Incredibly good-looking.

Tongqin99 Teacher, I want to be your dog This if line is so delicious

Tongqin is so delicious and the teacher is a god

Teachers should pay more attention to their health! Very well written! Come on, teacher!

This is God. It smells so good. It smells so good.

The writing is very good, keep it up!

Very nice. I like it very much.

The writing is very good and beautiful.

Good looking, yes. Please enter text

Nice looking, nice looking.

It smells good. It smells good.

Prince Inosuke

Very well written, highly recommended

A very nice book.

One page is just too short

Super pretty! Tongqin99!

Love love love love love love

My evaluation is because I have to write and be objective, so I have it

Delicious 😋 And it's not OOC

It's pretty good, but it could be refined a little more and some descriptions could be removed.

Author, some of your settings are not quite right. You can read my previous comments. There are a few bugs, but the rice is delicious.

It's so exciting, the content is very interesting