"I was originally a rotten bone in the world, but I received the mercy of heaven. My soul fell into a deep pool and transformed into a white snake. I thought I was just an ant trying to survive, but I didn't expect that a piece of tortoise shell could predict the secrets of heaven and see through the murderous calamity! Thousands of years of evil fate and thousands of years of grievances, all follow me. The transformation of this little white snake begins, killing evil spirits and seizing luck. When a dragon's roar echoes in the depths of the deep pool, who could have imagined that this world will be completely overturned by a snake? He will change his fate from a white snake to a dragon!
Reader comments
The writing is good, but there are also some details where he is not active. The protagonist is temporarily handless, so how can he place his palms?
I think I saw this at 7 o'clock,
I hope the author can adjust the combat power well. Plan the details better.
The pace should be slower, otherwise it won't look good. Slowing down should be fine.
Come on, author, don't stop [crying]
Also, it's a bit messy. Please change it.
The writing is good, but there are also some details where he is not active. The protagonist is temporarily handless, so how can he place his palms?
I think I saw this at 7 o'clock,
I hope the author can adjust the combat power well. Plan the details better. The pace should be slower, otherwise it won't look good. Slowing down should be fine.
Come on, author, don't stop [crying] Also, it's a bit messy. Please change it.