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You can take a look at the journey of a little person who has delusions of being persecuted and cultivates immortality [laughter]

It's very beautiful. The protagonist is very cautious. After building the foundation, he can even feel the breath in order to avoid fighting, and the intelligence system is also very powerful. If resources are missing, resource information will be given the next second, and if weapons are missing, information will be given the next second. It is synchronized with the protagonist's thinking, almost as if the protagonist thinks: "I am missing a weapon." The intelligence system is almost synchronized the next second. Refresh: There are immortal soldiers in a certain place, as well as danger predictions. You can be a god and cannot be calculated, because the protagonist will always know your next step. If you refresh the spirit stone, you will know how many times someone blinked at a certain moment. If you want to play a trick, just abandon the sect and leave, find a mountain with strong spiritual energy to retreat, and refresh the information every day to get free resources.

This is another level of Qi training with the initial, middle, final and perfect realms. This is a small poisonous point. I hope it won't appear frequently in the future.

Not bad, just a little bit of AI polishing, just starting from scratch can be steamed. The new book is number one.

The dog and the turtle are two different things. The protagonist is a dog when he needs to be a turtle. He doesn't hesitate when it's time to attack. He's much better than a pure turtle.

I received several comments today, saying that I am not so strict in the next fifty or so chapters, because what I want to write is the setting of Xuanjian and the First Saint Demon Sect in which people seek fruition and gold. There are problems with the skills, paths, and connections that the protagonist cultivates, and they have already entered the eyes of the adults above. Now many things are out of my control, and I have to slowly lay out the plot behind it. Don't worry, I will definitely be very strict after cultivating magical powers [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

After reading it for a long time, I felt that it was okay, but the logic was not very rigorous and the author's writing skills were so-so. Support me [face covering] [face covering] I can't stand it anymore, my logic is wrong, it makes me feel uncomfortable [punch out]

To be honest, I think the writing is very good and the characters are well portrayed, even if it is a small supporting role. With information, this is the world of cultivation. With information, you must be meticulous and show yourself to others. Are you afraid that others will not know that you have a great opportunity?

The author Gou Daoliu is not suffering from delusions of persecution

The rhythm control is excellent, and the relaxation is relaxed. I am already impressed by this book.

The author's writing is not bad. Although the plot is not so ups and downs and particularly interesting, the logic is relatively clear and self-consistent. The language is not so clumsy. It reads OK and is not bad.

I have read the latest chapter. It is very well written. I like the character of the protagonist, who is both stubborn and ruthless. I didn't click in to read the rating, but after reading the introduction, I felt it was my cup of tea. Fortunately, I didn't miss it. You can't just read the ratings for Tomato novels, haha. I hope the author will keep updating!

It's so real. The uncle and aunt took all the protagonist's money and abused him from childhood to adulthood. They immediately extended their lives after becoming immortals. In the same mine, your parents died, but your uncle and aunt did not die, and they immediately robbed your family of all their money. So, is it difficult to guess who killed your parents?

It has flesh and blood and reflects reality. There are many words of warning in the book that can help people to alert themselves in troubled times or prosperous times, not to be blinded by the world, not to be brainwashed by the world, profit comes first, and good and evil are the balance. A person has done a hundred good things, but also done one great evil thing. Would you say he is a good person or a bad person? And vice versa. Man is not God! Benefits are only true, and choices are the balance. A wise man does not distinguish between rich and poor. Only when he is at ease and free, without losing or owing each other, can his life be clear.

The author will update soon. I haven't seen this type of novel for a long time. It is very consistent with my understanding of cultivating immortals. The old monsters in it are not like idiots who have been cultivating for hundreds of years. They all have their own plans.

The writing style is good, the protagonist is also very stable, in line with the moral principles, the writing is refreshing and very smooth.

The writing is good, come on, the description of the realms is so awesome. The Zifu realm can span countless thousands of miles and kill you with one finger. The Golden Core realm can span countless billions of miles to detect and kill you. I don't know what will appear after the protagonist Golden Core.

The protagonist is ruthless, strategist, and decisive when it comes to cutting off. He is a standard villain who forgets his roots. How can I say that the battle narrative and human relationships are also very good. The protagonist Wufa Zhenren is killed by Jindan Zhenjun with one finger. The feeling of powerlessness and insignificance is very well written, as well as the determination of the protagonist to become stronger. I don't understand why the score is so low. Is it because I can't stand the fact that the protagonist is a rebel? I also forgot my roots.

It's pretty good. Although it's not a masterpiece, it's definitely a masterpiece. I don't really like the character of the protagonist, I can only say that he is too aloof and flies too high without landing on the ground. Also, I am quite hypocritical in front of strong people, and I also call others hypocritical. My evaluation is that it is better to write about villains than to write about hypocrites.

At present, the combat power system has not collapsed, and the financial system has not become popular. The entire world view continues very well, and then the remaining ones can support the forces under their own hands and reorganize a large-scale behemoth force to serve themselves in the future. Come and conquer the world, gain insights from another world, and compete with normal level strong men. It is necessary to flexibly show the grand scenes brought about by the current state. .

Beautiful, very enjoyable to watch! ! ! The protagonist's character is flexible and flexible, decisive in killing, and only pursues immortality. Currently, there is no female protagonist, and there is no ambiguous female supporting role. Finally, it is not the usual Holy Mother novel. It is not like the kind where you meet one person and save another, which makes you tired to death. This article does not have the burden of the protagonist to hold you back. You don't have to worry about being indecisive by other people who are cultivating immortals. You are very determined to seek immortality! Moreover, there is also a younger brother who is die-hard to the protagonist, and his loyalty is comparable to that of Beria's disciple Izuku Fushii. It is really very interesting. I hope the author will add more chapters. [Sending Hearts]

Low grade grain and grass The author is a newbie Nondescript, inferior

The protagonist is sometimes not decisive enough, but overall he is good

The production of a great work will definitely go through countless misunderstandings and speculations. Only when the author creates according to his own ideas can he express his emotions in writing as he pleases. Of course, he can also listen to the readers' suggestions appropriately, but don't be misled by some voices.

It's so beautiful. I like this book very much. I highly recommend it.

Perfect and honest, without any pretense of childish behavior

I predict that this book will be rated at around 8 points, which is considered normal. Gou Dao's writing is acceptable, a little bit poisonous, but it was forced. I haven't read it later, and I don't know when the protagonist's family will worship heaven, and when Master Situ will be reduced to a furnace. I originally gave it 4 stars, but the author is too humble, so I changed it to 5.

Beautiful, carefully written, definitely not an AI article

Whenever the protagonist comes on stage, you'll be watching with excitement afterward. What is the author doing by writing that the protagonist dies later? There is no role for the protagonist at all.

The protagonist who makes people laugh [face covering] is just eye-catching, and the plot is not cliche either [laughing evilly]