[Evil girl + refined self-interest + no morals + doing whatever she wants + not a great heroine]
The dream demon Lin Wan is a weak, beautiful, cold little white flower that looks very innocent and harmless, but is actually a scheming black lotus.
She feeds on love and does whatever it takes to keep her full. Countless men have been drained of their love by her and then abandoned without mercy by her.
After collapsing a thousand and one small worlds, she was kicked back to these worlds by the Department of Correction to pay off her debts.
When Lin Wan arrived in the small world, she realized that these men who had fallen obediently at her invitation were now more difficult to deal with.
[Disabled fake daughter* possessive CEO]
The real daughter's family ate and wiped the fake daughter clean and drove them out of the house, waiting for the paralyzed fake daughter to be tortured to death by the nurses in the nursing home. But why was the fake daughter taken home by the boss, and how could she get better?
[Stand-in for Little Show Girl* Yin Ji Nine Thousand Years Old]
Lin Wan had the same face as Xiao Ji's dead fiancée. Everyone thought she was a stand-in, but no one knew she was Bai Yueguang herself. As soon as she was reborn, Lin Wan was almost strangled to death by Xiao Ji. Later, Xiao Ji wanted to hold her in his hands.
[Outdated female singer*top male mentor]
What should I do if my once well-behaved and obedient puppy suddenly turns into a cold-faced vicious dog? It's simple, just tame it again. If the dog is disobedient, it's probably hungry. Just feed it and it'll be fine!
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Reader comments
Objectively speaking, I think the writing is okay. At least there are no awkward sentences. However, there are many unreasonable points in the plot setting. I frowned at some parts.
In the first world, you have to cook for the male protagonist in a wheelchair
In the second world, you can die twice in front of the male protagonist and still be resurrected
The male protagonist in the third world is just looking for trouble. I was really impressed by the rating of D in the first round. Aren't the other judges quite satisfied? Can you please neutralize it? This male protagonist is the dominant one.
In addition, she is definitely not a big heroine, she is a weak one, but it has nothing to do with the villain in the introduction. I understand that the villain is really egoistic.
Normally when I read a book and see something embarrassing, I don't comment too much, but when I see something bad, I really can't help but comment.
Cheers for the new book and good luck with the 100,000-word debut! (It might be better if the slot can be changed)
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh looking good-s-points points it look so good are so good looking are great looking. The author is so good at writing, it's really beautiful. Each small world has a tight rhythm, and the story is short and concise. It's really not enough to read, but it has explained everything that needs to be explained. The only shortcoming is that it is too little. I feel like I want to continue reading the author. Hahaha, it is not enough. The female protagonist is really too cool. There may be one or two male protagonists in the middle who will be crazy about it, and then the female protagonist may be a little aggrieved. But overall, I think every world is beautiful. It's amazing.
Objectively speaking, I think the writing is okay. At least there are no awkward sentences. However, there are many unreasonable points in the plot setting. I frowned at some parts. In the first world, you have to cook for the male protagonist in a wheelchair In the second world, you can die twice in front of the male protagonist and still be resurrected The male protagonist in the third world is just looking for trouble. I was really impressed by the rating of D in the first round. Aren't the other judges quite satisfied? Can you please neutralize it? This male protagonist is the dominant one. In addition, she is definitely not a big heroine, she is a weak one, but it has nothing to do with the villain in the introduction. I understand that the villain is really egoistic. Normally when I read a book and see something embarrassing, I don't comment too much, but when I see something bad, I really can't help but comment. Cheers for the new book and good luck with the 100,000-word debut! (It might be better if the slot can be changed)
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh looking good-s-points points it look so good are so good looking are great looking. The author is so good at writing, it's really beautiful. Each small world has a tight rhythm, and the story is short and concise. It's really not enough to read, but it has explained everything that needs to be explained. The only shortcoming is that it is too little. I feel like I want to continue reading the author. Hahaha, it is not enough. The female protagonist is really too cool. There may be one or two male protagonists in the middle who will be crazy about it, and then the female protagonist may be a little aggrieved. But overall, I think every world is beautiful. It's amazing.