Dragons: If There Was a Girl

I think the difference from other second creations is that this one does not change the plot direction through the protagonist's own strength, but changes the plot through the protagonist's influence on Lu Mingfei. In the original plot, Lu Mingfei's biggest problem is that he hesitates on key things. Xia Chao's speaking spirit could not change the attack of Norton's flames, nor could it change the reality that Old Tang was a dragon, but it changed Lu Mingfei, changed Lu Mingfei's timid attitude when facing the dragon king's flames, changed Lu Mingze's hesitation when he saw Old Tang transforming into a dragon in the future, and also changed his fear when he traded a quarter of his life. It was Xia Chao's weak and costly speaking spirit that comforted him in the predicament. Lu Mingfei's fearful heart was broken. It was Xia Chao who rushed to Lu Mingfei time and time again and gave him the decisive life deal from the initial hesitation to the present. It was Lu Mingfei who changed the tragedy. It was Lu Mingfei who saved Old Tang. It was Lu Mingfei who defeated Fenrir. But it was Xia Chao who changed Lu Mingfei. Fei illuminates the way forward for Lu Mingfei time and time again when he is at his most desperate. What I like very much is that there are no people who take over the role. The logic of the top level of combat power is still Lu Mingfei, not the protagonist. The power to change the direction of the plot is still Lu Mingfei, but the person who promotes the change in the plot is Xia Chao. Here I can truly see the growth of Lu Mingfei, which is a Lu Mingfei that Jiangnan will never be able to write in his life. I often think What can the mature Lu Mingfei bring to me? A story that is not a tragedy, a pair of living Ye Shengyaji young lovers, a humorous and interesting old Tang who no longer needs to be controlled by revenge and anger, a good junior who is no longer obsessed with senior Nuonuo, an optimistic child who is no longer as scared and timid as before... What about Xia Dynasty? She brought the mature Lu Mingfei.

A good... Sadistic novel? Lu Mingfei's low self-esteem, secret love, and caution were all written, but... They were written on another girl - a real ordinary mixed race, a girl who liked Lu Mingfei. The only bad thing about the book is that the author's writing style is so good, so good that he writes about the pain of a secret love but not being able to love it so vividly and delicately that it empathizes with it. I hope that Lu Mingfei can be with Xia Chao in the later period. It is Lu Mingfei's own choice of Xia Chao, rather than Lu Mingze's "gift" to Xia Chao (allowing her to become a concubine of Lu Mingfei). Or just let Xia Chao die and let that bastard soar into the sky, or let this damn bastard continue to hide in that damn cellar, drink that damn wine, and then shake his head at the senior sister he misses so much.

That's great. Just write it like this. At the end, just cut it. You're not far from Jiangnan [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I like it so much. I feel that Lu Mingfei's feelings for Xia Chao go beyond love. They rely on familiarity and make a firm choice for important people. Although Xia Chao is secretly in love, what he wants may be more love. A cute relationship is far less stable and long-lasting than a mutually dependent relationship. Moreover, Lu Mingfei has a low self-esteem character, which makes it difficult for him to be himself in front of the girl he likes. But Xia Chao was different. They were so familiar that he could be himself in front of her without having to act to cover up his insecurity and fear. This is love. Love is too unstable, this kind of relationship is more secure.

The writing is really awesome, breaking through the structure of traditional dragon literature. I know it's you, the old Jiangnan thief.

Ah, this kind of writing style can be called Dragon Clan writing. Although it is not as good as the top batch, it can be regarded as a good one at last. The rhythm of the plot is extremely tight, and it can even be said that there is no water at all, but the problem is that it is a bit too tight. With more than fifty chapters, at least five or six major plot points have passed, and the pace is so fast. The emotional line advances too quickly, with too little foreshadowing and too abrupt. I always look forward to a grander scene, such as a kiss before the protagonist dies or before a sacrifice. Ah, that kind of unforgettable and delicious thing. In addition, this is a semi-torture novel. There are actually very few things the protagonist can do, but it is enough to make up for the regrets. I quite like the feeling of powerlessness and despair. In short, it is an authentic dragon flavor, and the sense of sadness is quite right. This writing style is definitely considered high-quality in terms of 🍅. It is not just a cool piece of writing. It is worth reading.

The plot rhythm and characters are well polished! Xia Chao's feelings are really touching, and her relationship with Lu Mingfei is also very in line with the mentality of a teenage girl. It's a very good book. I hope the author will read more, and I must stick to it [shy]

A very good fanfic that changes the development trajectory of many small events while keeping the big events unchanged. The protagonist can be understood as a good friend who has a crush on Lu Mingfei (the latest chapters have shown his feelings). The protagonist has an inferiority complex. I feel that I am not as energetic as Nuonuo, and not as refined and beautiful as Ling. Very delicious 😋

I was really wrong, I accidentally entered Tianjia! It's so well written, so similar to Jiangnan. I'm here to make up for my regrets, not to get a knife [crying][crying][crying]

I finally came across a Dragon Clan novel with such an authentic Jiangnan flavor. Other Dragon Clan novels make me vomit after reading them. I want to save them and read them, but I'm afraid that I'll die [crying]

The writing is good and the emotions are very delicate. But I always feel that if this development continues, if Lu Mingfei knows everything, I feel that he will kill Lu Mingze like he killed the White King. Now Lu Mingze's positioning is really similar to Herzog's

I think the plot is a bit messy and I was confused when reading it, but I think the author wrote Lu Mingfei very accurately to the original work without OOC, which looks like Lu Mingfei's bad guy, and I think the author's writing style is very good and the article is very beautiful! , Many of them have restored the original works! I hope the author can update five chapters a day, it's really beautiful (♥∀♥)!

I feel like this is the better type of Tomato Dragon fanfic [you taste it carefully] [blowing kiss]

Good-looking and good-looking, Xia Chao

The sourness of this book is so exciting, and I want to read it again. However, the plot seems to be a little rushed later and not as detailed as the previous one. But the rating is too low, so I won't overrate it and give it a five-star rating. The heroine Xia Chao has liked Lu Mingfei since she was a child (the heroine is not a time travel, original), but in the early stage, Lu Mingfei regarded the heroine Xia Chao as a buddy. The heroine's love is more humble than Lu Mingfei's, and she is a little abusive to the heroine. The reason why it is considered a minor abuse is because the heroine and Lu Mingfei are I was dissatisfied with the speed of establishing a love relationship, but in Volume 2 Chapter 8, Lu Mingfei almost realized his feelings for the heroine. In Volume 2 Chapter 27, he made it clear that he likes the heroine. The emotional line was not stretched too long, otherwise it would be considered abusing the heroine. "Dragon: If There Was a Girl" focuses on the portrayal of the heroine Xia Chao. The heroine and Lu Mingfei are two stray dogs licking each other's wounds. However, Lu Mingfei also has senior brothers, Old Tang and others who care about him. The heroine really only cares about Lu Mingfei, and there is only Lu Mingfei in her world. (When the heroine's life experience is revealed later, it can be seen that the heroine only cares about Lu Mingfei, and there is only Lu Mingfei in the heroine's world) By the way, I would like to recommend another book "Lu Mingfei: Love and Cassel", also published by Tomato. This one is also very interesting. The heroine in the introduction is a heartthrob, but she is a loser in the love scene with Lu Mingfei. "Lu Mingfei: Love and Cassel" belongs to the perspective of the heroine in the early stage and then slowly shifts to the perspective of Lu Mingfei. It seems that there are many heroines at present, and the final ending is hard to say, but Lu Mingfei and Chen Wenwen, Xia Mi, and Ye Zhiyao (the original heroine) all have emotional descriptions. "Dragon: If There Was a Girl" focused on portraying the heroine Xia Chao. "Lu Mingfei: Love and Cassel" later switched to Lu Mingfei's perspective. The single heroine did not have as many scenes as Xia Chao, but there were many heroines, so the scenes were allocated to multiple female characters. The author's level is also good, and Lu Xia's CP is also quite good.

Warm reminder: This book has an original single female protagonist (if the author doesn't act evil later on😗) and the female protagonist is very abusive. If you can accept it, you can read it. The writing is not bad, but I really can't stand the abusive protagonist, so I regret to quit.

Yes, it's the only Dragon Clan fanfic I've read. Xia Chao feels very real and very similar to Lu Mingfei. When I first read Dragon Clan, I actually felt that Lu Mingfei is more suitable for such a girl. It was quite sour in the middle, and I felt the emotional transition was very stable. I really hope they have a good ending and don't feel like it's like another timeline. Because there were some words that Lu Mingfei couldn't say, but Xia Chao refused to say them. In the end, what cannot be said and what is unwilling to be said become what is too late to say.

Why do I feel that with Lu Mingfei's early performance, no one except the untouched Eri Yi will like Lu, right? [What][What][What] Do you think there is a possibility that Xia Chao's love for Lu Mingfei was just something the little devil deliberately gained in Xia Chao's heart in order to let Lu Mingfei use a quarter? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] At that time, in order to save Lu, Xia used [Don't Die] to survive Xia, and then disappeared. Xia felt that he no longer felt his secret love for Lu, and then let Lu chase his wife. Wouldn't it be fun [laughter] [laughter] [laughter]

It's really good-looking, the characters are vividly created, and the writing is good. I haven't watched too much about the plot, but I don't know much about the plot, but the heroine's humble secret love is very realistic. A heroine with low self-esteem but determination is angry and follows behind him for the weak child she has a crush on. She is timid, brave, retreating, persevering, selfish, and dedicated. The girl who has always been cold brings warmth to her beloved boy, even if it makes herself even colder. I look forward to the following plot. It's a bit like a knife, not heroic, but real and sympathetic (at least I share the heroine's humble secret love). Personally, I have never liked eating knives, and most of my viewings are brisk and informal. But there are some books that, although sharp, are hard to extricate themselves from (the explosion of letter attributes?). This book feels a bit like a touch of sadness and inferiority, but the author said in the comment area that this will be a romantic story, not sharp, and I hope it will be HE (it is a Happy Ending, not a Hell Ending)

The author is invincible! ! ! How can I put it this way? The authenticity of this book is very short. To be honest, it is "very fake". But I feel that the author should have his own ideas, such as the identity of the heroine and the man in black armor... The later genuine dragons basically have nothing to do with it, but the author's own creation is indeed very interesting. I hope that everyone who can't stand it in front of you can bear with it a little longer. The author's subsequent description is very, very good. If the author wants to create his own work, I hope the author can write more and write more of his own ideas, the better (I hope the author can write more than 500 chapters [love])

The writing style is very comfortable. It is a dragon fanfic that makes you want to read it. The decline is reflected in both the female protagonist and the male protagonist. The feeling of having no choice but to be pushed away by fate, but the two people are each other's only safe haven. Every time I see them hugging each other, I feel very emotional, because every hug is followed by a long separation, Yu Huaizai. This book is actually more like a group portrait, each character is very three-dimensional. Then there is the fact that the heroine of this book allows Lu Mingfei to grow up. Even if it is only a weak light, it is the most brilliant light in his life. (Everyone is a little monster who has not grown up, and loneliness is the true nature of everyone.) I like this book very much. I hope the author will work harder to write it without eunuchs. It is a great book. I haven't come out yet [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [crying] [crying] [crying], I really feel that they are so sorry and helpless, everyone is rushing them to grow up, it's so hard to cry, why, author, where is your home, let me go and discuss the ideal of life with you [crying] [crying] [crying]

I'm so touched. I always imagined that Old Tang was not dead. Wow, this article is perfect, and the details are very well controlled. You know what we want to see [Crying]

Oh, it's so cruel that my stomach hurts [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] The author's writing style is really like a Jiangnan old thief [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

When the emotions in the chest rise into a tide, the pupils are the first to lose control. In fact, loneliness is not lonely at all, because it has radicals. But you are different from the lonely radical, just stay next to him, because the distance of two steps is enough to make a world. "A person's loneliness is never loneliness. One person looks for another person, one sentence looks for another sentence, this is the real loneliness."

The quality of this book is definitely one of the best among Tomato's Dragon Clan fan novels (I'm not exaggerating). The psychological descriptions are so detailed. I was just as obsessed with it as when I was reading Dragon Clan in junior high school. The kind of fantasy, hope, sadness and imaginary future are really heartbreaking [crying] [crying] As long as this book doesn't come off the shelves, I will finish it

From what I've seen so far, it feels like a sour feeling, a youthful secret love, just like dropping a drop of lemon juice into a bowl of water. It doesn't seem to make any difference, but when you taste it, you can feel a trace of sourness. Well, for Lu Mingfei, Lao Xia was always there. Lao Xia was always silent, or following him or squatting in the corner. He was always there, so he got used to it, used to Lao Xia following him, used to Lao Xia always being by his side. He was so used to all this. Childhood sweethearts are the most deadly blow. (I read the first few chapters before I finished it. It was really delicious, with a slightly sour taste) So when Lao Xia leaves, will you burn, Lu Mingfei?

Ah~ I really wanted to see Lu Mingfei kneeling on the beach, hugging his head and crying after the protagonist was gone. I jumped forward with a big jump. With a complicated expression of pity and triumph, he said in a sinister manner: "I've always wanted to see your expression, this expression of extreme regret, hahaha..." (Laughing wildly)

The writing is okay, the rhythm is a bit messy after the second volume, and there are still some foreshadowings that have not been revealed. Let's look forward to the foreshadowing content. In the first volume, you can clearly feel Xia Chao's cautious love and a kind of depression in the whole story, but after that, especially after the black hairband, the change is more obvious. The current perception is that it is likely to be the ending of BE. You can still look forward to how it will be. Let's review it. Regarding the ending, I still stick to my point of view. It is BE. It is probably the ending of Xia Chao's death. Lu Mingfei experienced from decline to having an important person to finally losing his emotional changes. It is definitely worth looking forward to. The way of death is also quite curious. Regardless of whether Lu Mingfei is If you see death with your own eyes, you will definitely collapse. If you see it with your own eyes, it will definitely collapse even more. Feeling the flow of familiar life, good readers will find their own knife to eat [face covering] Double BE is HE. If the ending is B, then I still hope that Xia Chao will die. She is too miserable.

Lao Xia is too prison, and it is easy to stand it. It is of no value whether you want to be strong but suppress first.

You may think that I have no say after reading it for a long time, but it only takes 5 chapters to identify a good book. The plot is not procrastinating, there is just the right amount of white space, and the writing is a little green, with a little Jiangnan flavor.