Dragon Raja: If There Were a Girl

I think the difference from other second creations is that this one does not change the plot direction through the protagonist's own strength, but changes the plot through the protagonist's influence on Lu Mingfei. In the original plot, Lu Mingfei's biggest problem is that he hesitates on key things. Xia Chao's speaking spirit could not change the attack of Norton's flames, nor could it change the reality that Old Tang was a dragon, but it changed Lu Mingfei, changed Lu Mingfei's timid attitude when facing the dragon king's flames, changed Lu Mingze's hesitation when he saw Old Tang transforming into a dragon in the future, and also changed his fear when he traded a quarter of his life. It was Xia Chao's weak and costly speaking spirit that comforted him in the predicament. Lu Mingfei's fearful heart was broken. It was Xia Chao who rushed to Lu Mingfei time and time again and gave him the decisive life deal from the initial hesitation to the present. It was Lu Mingfei who changed the tragedy. It was Lu Mingfei who saved Old Tang. It was Lu Mingfei who defeated Fenrir. But it was Xia Chao who changed Lu Mingfei. Fei illuminates the way forward for Lu Mingfei time and time again when he is at his most desperate. What I like very much is that there are no people who take over the role. The logic of the top level of combat power is still Lu Mingfei, not the protagonist. The power to change the direction of the plot is still Lu Mingfei, but the person who promotes the change in the plot is Xia Chao. Here I can truly see the growth of Lu Mingfei, which is a Lu Mingfei that Jiangnan will never be able to write in his life. I often think What can the mature Lu Mingfei bring to me? A story that is not a tragedy, a pair of living Ye Shengyaji young lovers, a humorous and interesting old Tang who no longer needs to be controlled by revenge and anger, a good junior who is no longer obsessed with senior Nuonuo, an optimistic child who is no longer as scared and timid as before... What about Xia Dynasty? She brought the mature Lu Mingfei.

A good... Sadistic novel? Lu Mingfei's low self-esteem, secret love, and caution were all written, but... They were written on another girl - a real ordinary mixed race, a girl who liked Lu Mingfei. The only bad thing about the book is that the author's writing style is so good, so good that he writes about the pain of a secret love but not being able to love it so vividly and delicately that it empathizes with it. I hope that Lu Mingfei can be with Xia Chao in the later period. It is Lu Mingfei's own choice of Xia Chao, rather than Lu Mingze's "gift" to Xia Chao (allowing her to become a concubine of Lu Mingfei). Or just let Xia Chao die and let that bastard soar into the sky, or let this damn bastard continue to hide in that damn cellar, drink that damn wine, and then shake his head at the senior sister he misses so much.

That's great. Just write it like this. At the end, just cut it. You're not far from Jiangnan 😏😏😏

I like it so much. I feel that Lu Mingfei's feelings for Xia Chao go beyond love. They rely on familiarity and make a firm choice for important people. Although Xia Chao is secretly in love, what he wants may be more love. A cute relationship is far less stable and long-lasting than a mutually dependent relationship. Moreover, Lu Mingfei has a low self-esteem character, which makes it difficult for him to be himself in front of the girl he likes. But Xia Chao was different. They were so familiar that he could be himself in front of her without having to act to cover up his insecurity and fear. This is love. Love is too unstable, this kind of relationship is more secure.

The writing is really awesome, breaking through the structure of traditional dragon literature. I know it's you, the old Jiangnan thief.

Ah, this kind of writing style can be called Dragon Clan writing. Although it is not as good as the top batch, it can be regarded as a good one at last. The rhythm of the plot is extremely tight, and it can even be said that there is no water at all, but the problem is that it is a bit too tight. With more than fifty chapters, at least five or six major plot points have passed, and the pace is so fast. The emotional line advances too quickly, with too little foreshadowing and too abrupt. I always look forward to a grander scene, such as a kiss before the protagonist dies or before a sacrifice. Ah, that kind of unforgettable and delicious thing. In addition, this is a semi-torture novel. There are actually very few things the protagonist can do, but it is enough to make up for the regrets. I quite like the feeling of powerlessness and despair. In short, it is an authentic dragon flavor, and the sense of sadness is quite right. This writing style is definitely considered high-quality in terms of 🍅. It is not just a cool piece of writing. It is worth reading.

The plot rhythm and characters are well polished! Xia Chao's feelings are really touching, and her relationship with Lu Mingfei is also very in line with the mentality of a teenage girl. It's a very good book. I hope the author will read more, and I must stick to it 😳

A very good fanfic that changes the development trajectory of many small events while keeping the big events unchanged. The protagonist can be understood as a good friend who has a crush on Lu Mingfei (the latest chapters have shown his feelings). The protagonist has an inferiority complex. I feel that I am not as energetic as Nuonuo, and not as refined and beautiful as Ling. Very delicious 😋

I finally came across a Dragon Clan novel with such an authentic Jiangnan flavor. Other Dragon Clan novels make me vomit after reading them. I want to save them and read them, but I'm afraid that I'll die 😢

I was really wrong, I accidentally entered Tianjia! It's so well written, so similar to Jiangnan. I'm here to make up for my regrets, not to get a knife 😢😢😢