I Was a Brother in Blue Star, and My Skills Were Maxed Out

Overall, it's good, but I feel that the plot is a bit delayed, and the updates are a bit slow. The most important thing is that the main line of raising a baby is a bit too much. How can I put it, it feels like there are a lot of unnecessary places, and many places are emphasized repeatedly. However, I still like this kind of group portrait writing. Everyone in Class S feels that the portrayal is good, and I can feel that they have souls. For an entertainment story, the frequency of his sister's appearance is too high, and it's annoying.

It's a good read to read. You have to raise a baby and have your own career. However, when the author writes about raising a baby, it's easy to become ruthless and forget your feelings (I don't care about this, I like to read them all, and the author's introduction also mentions that raising a baby is the main plot) The only two people who are a little bit sensual are Shen Buzhuo and Xie Que. They are a bit corrupt. I don't know what the author thinks. They don't have too many plots, but they will come out to sell them out of the blue [face covering] To be honest, this subject seems to have a bit of both male and female themes, and is more female-oriented, but if they really have signs, the author had better give a warning at the beginning, because some people don't like corruption in non-CP novels (like me) and people in the same class don't want their relationship to be classified as love. If they are too close, it feels like they are balancing literature (scratching their heads) Of course, some people like this kind of plot, and feel that it is good to have a bite while passing by. The author writes based on his own ideas, that is, if they are really serious, can they give a warning at the beginning? [Crying] They are really a pair. The author said that there are several pairs of deputy CPs [eating melon], but so far I can only see two pairs (scratching my head)

This book is very good, it is meant to be read in one go, and the plot is quite interesting. However, I think one of the author's biggest shortcomings is that there are too many words in each paragraph, which dazzles the reader, like a lot of twine. What you see in front of your eyes is your words. Sometimes there are too many. In fact, you can try to divide them into short paragraphs, which will make readers feel very comfortable. But in summary, it is a very good novel. My evaluation may not be too standard, but among the female videos I follow, this is a potential masterpiece. So in the end, I hope the author can suddenly explode and be even more surprised. I highly recommend this book. Although I know what I said, I know that I said too many words, and then divided it into short paragraphs. A small paragraph is a bit silly because I can't finish the sentence, but I just give some small suggestions, don't worry about it [please read carefully]

It's a very good book. There is no heroine, and there are no mixed feelings. It is just a simple career chapter. Friendship and family love are also written very delicately. Especially Zhouzhou. I think she is so cute and I like her very much. The interaction between the brother and sister is particularly poignant. I hope the author can continue his work and update it.

This book is so good that I have to open a trumpet account to read it. There is a family relationship between brothers and sisters, and there is also a friendship between friends. Everyone's image is very smart and energetic. So beautiful🥺Men are menstruating when they see it🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It is so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘It is God, it is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world beautiful I realized the meaning😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression😋It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😨It was so cute that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and flooded into the Qiantang River🤤🤑

It's a cool article, the family line is very warm, but some works require inspiration, and the protagonist is written directly without any foreshadowing, will others really not doubt it? But believe him without any brain 😔 This point needs to be changed. It is almost the same to become the center among classmates. You will be convinced after being crushed once or twice😵‍💫. Didn't that Sheng investigate the protagonist? There must be information about the protagonist before he traveled through time, right? Of course, if you read this article as a kind of heartwarming article about raising a girl and dominating the world, then you will think that I didn't say anything (because I am, but I still hope the author can write better)

I see that it's going well so far, and getting along with my classmates and sister is quite natural. But after reading this, I want to ask the author, will the protagonist really give up Star Dome Academy for his sister later? If this is the case, can you please tell me that it is a good way to avoid lightning? Because I always think that the resources that a top university has access to are very top-notch. Not to mention anything else, those top composition teachers and so on must give priority to cooperation with top universities. Moreover, it was mentioned before that there are big differences between the two worlds, and a lot of knowledge needs to be mastered, so I think it is still necessary to go to the school. I just want to be more lenient in this situation and bring my sister with me.

It's okay, the character of the main character won my heart. It's just that I think there are some unnecessary plot points in the article that are a bit redundant. Moreover, some of the plots are a bit stiff and feel like they were forced together. Overall not bad.

Only watched part of it. The problems discovered so far are: several psychological descriptions are very redundant. The author is trying hard to prove that Class S is excellent and group-like. When the character's behavior, dialogue, and expressions are enough to convey emotions, we readers will automatically complete the entire process of "empathy-inference-substitution". At this time, the author suddenly jumped out to add a psychological description. It was not a psychological supplement, but a "dumb version of instructions for use." This kind of redundant filler will interrupt the narrative rhythm and greatly affect the reader's perception. Only when the character's external behavior contradicts the inner reality is psychological description not repetitive but revealing. "Functional interaction" overwhelms "life-oriented interaction". The author wanted to write about the advanced feeling of Class S and the warm feeling of progressing with a few friends, but he used too much force, and the effect presented was: middle school, alienation, "acting" intimacy, as if he was trying to sell unfamiliar CB. This is also related to the previous question. Excessive psychological description will make the relationship appear "too full", with no blank space and not many detailed descriptions. The most important "ineffective interaction" has not yet appeared. Regarding the sister, there is no need to delete the scene. It is rare to see a cub written without being offensive. I don't know if the author has the idea of ​​​​writing a cub article. Look forward to the author's progress later and continue to comment later. What does it mean? After I just evaluated these two shortcomings, the latter two problems appeared less often. It seemed like I was deliberately looking for trouble [smile] [cry]

From the perspective of readers with many years of entertainment experience, it can be seen that the writing style is still immature and the rhythm control also needs to be strengthened. However, the most basic sense of pleasure and the arrangement of life-oriented parts in slow-paced and refreshing articles are basically in place. I'm not saying it's necessarily a popular book, but it's still a readable book in today's world of entertainment online articles. You can see the innovation, and the attractive points are not sacrificed because of innovation. I can feel some reference to classic entertainment online articles, but I don't think I am disgusted. I can only say that I hope the author will have new ideas and new guidelines based on this. I rarely write reviews since I read the book, and even less often I open a small book like this and read it straight through. Novels such as "Wenyu Wenzhaogong" have special meaning to me, so I will just think about them above.

It's very interesting and interesting. This is my first system + vest-type novel. There is a little sister in the story. The family and friendship are wow wow wow. It's really interesting to watch. It's fun to read and there's a lot of warmth at the same time. Good-looking and good-looking.

It's quite good-looking. Although it's uncensored, it's not like a male channel where all the women fall in love with the hero or have an ambiguous crush on him for a thousand years. He's a normal handsome guy! Sister Zhouzhou is not like Ruozhihua, she is an ordinary child! It's a bit of a group portrait, and it's a good article. Can you write more about the male protagonist showing off? I admit that I am just showing off, and I love to watch show-offs [almost crying]

It looks good, and the plot is also very good, but the first blow was a bit distressing, but does my brother have CP?

Wow! This is the first time I read a girl-control novel, and the protagonist has a very serious personality. I have seen many protagonists with a funny and abstract personality, which is a bit disgusting, but in this novel, he nailed the protagonist's personality just right, which is very awesome! Very pretty! But I hope Zhouzhou's interactions can be reduced a little bit, too much would be a bit annoying. I wonder if the character of the protagonist can be made more three-dimensional, because he is perfect like a god, with only a compassionate temperament and no negative emotions. For example, the elders will give priority to Zhouzhou's ideas no matter what they do, but that is obviously the result of the protagonist's own efforts. This is very uncomfortable, and Zhouzhou is a bit too willful. She can't feel the difficulty of the protagonist at all, indeed! It is a bit over the top to make a 3-year-old child sensible. Another point... I always feel that what others admire the protagonist the most is, but their love for Zhouzhou is so pure that it makes people feel unbalanced.

I like it very much, I like it very much. I haven't seen such a pure writing about family and friends in a long time! And it's not AI either! Please continue to maintain your current level! I will follow up! ! ! Come on, author!

Class S, everyone is a genius. How can I put it? In other books, Class S feels that there is no genius except the protagonist. They are either jealous or the protagonist cannot find this person after taking action. This book written by the teacher almost has its own highlights and fields. This is a group portrait, shining in its own field.

Very, very beautiful, very, very beautiful. Indescribably beautiful. Nothing else to say![][][][][][][][][]

I like it very much, and recommend a song "DAMIDAMI" to the author. I think this song is very suitable for the protagonist. Its front and back notes are cheerful and relaxed, but there is a hint of loneliness in the middle. It uses European music style and Middle Eastern drum music to create a blending background (a bit like a Scottish minor, but it doesn't seem to be the case), and it also suits the background of being reborn in Blue Star. The first part can be very suitable to express the rebirth and redemption of the protagonist when he is reborn on Blue Star. The loneliness in the middle is like recalling the loneliness of the previous life. The final backnote has the beauty of the protagonist finding a new life in Class S and taking care of his sister. It can be said that the emotion and style of this song can be regarded as summarizing the protagonist's past and present lives. If the author likes this song after listening to it, he can try to write it into a novel [Thinking]

Tied to chapter 90, the author should work hard to update! ! I rarely rate or leave comments when reading books, but this novel is very good. Good luck to the author! The protagonist Lu Xingjun is very well portrayed. Although he has a golden finger, he has a very good outlook on life, especially towards his sister, who is both father and brother. Even if he becomes a father in the future, he may not be able to raise and take care of his children in such a meticulous way. When he is most desperate for family ties, the appearance of his little sister is his salvation! It looks so warm and healing! The most successful group portrait in it, each supporting character is very three-dimensional and has his or her own personality, stance, and story... The setting of the entire world structure with nine continents is actually particularly suitable for developing map-style plots. There will be many stories to write... Regarding the pace, since it involves entertainment, it is recommended to speed up and expand the pace of the career. The warmth of family life is good, but watching too much can easily lead to plot fatigue. The details of life in the book are too detailed, and they appear repeatedly in different chapters. This is inevitable when focusing on life plots. Ordinary daily life is repeated, but it will make readers feel at peace... You can add life plots (it is best to add some new ideas and not repeat too much) in the gap between study... And career..., And the rhythm will make readers like it more... Otherwise, if this novel does not collapse later, it will go towards millions of words... The plot is too repetitive and detailed, which is very unfavorable for book lovers... You can skip chapters when reading a book, but you can't when listening to a book... Come on, author! I hope this novel will not be ruined in the future... Don't be eunuched... Don't want a harem (the current male protagonist's character design will be ruined if he has a harem! A person who is so attached to his family should have a warm home, and a wife and children who truly love him. True love is the only and exclusive thing)... Don't be too ambiguous (either seriously fall in love and get married, or support no CP) A rare good book, support it! ! ! ! ! !

It is a very special book, with the leisure and carefreeness of ordinary life. The characters in the book are clear and spiritual, and each character has their own characteristics. The daily harmony and nature of the two sisters [get it] [note] Emotions are smooth and natural!

It's nice. My brother really raised Zhouzhou very well. I saw a lot of people saying that he interacted with Zhouzhou too much. I don't think so at all. It's really warm. I particularly like Zhouzhou, he's really sensible, cute and a completely good baby. Watching him with my brother makes me feel soft. I wonder if the author can make us Zhouzhou become more awesome in the future. Hahahaha. I want to have a good relationship with my brother. This non-CP is really great. Finally, I hope the author will update it soon. I can't read it enough [crying]

It's quite good-looking. It's rare to see group portraits in the Wenzhaogong type. It's mainly for career, but I feel that the development of the main plot is a bit slow. It's a group portrait, so a large part of it describes getting along with other people, but overall it's not bad.

It's very beautiful. I especially like the group portrait of Class S. Everyone is sparkling. Zhouzhou is also very cute. The relationship between brother and sister is really well described and delicate. It has a huge number of chapters and is also the one I have read the most.

It's equal, it looks good! The tone of the story is warm and heartwarming, with a slow daily pace. The protagonist Lu Yunjun has no CP or ambiguity. Although it is a cool text, whether the protagonist comes up with his works or expresses his coolness, it is all natural and natural. It is not pretentious or awkward at all, nor is it illogical. The overall feeling is very good. The main line of the plot is Lu Yunjun's studies (study and exams, friendship with his classmates from Class S of Qin Yizhong, the classmates from Class S are the main supporting roles, and they are more group portraits) + daily life of raising a child (his only relative, sister Zhouzhou, the protagonist cares for her wholeheartedly, and I feel that Zhouzhou is the real one) The happiest person in the whole story is to have such a good brother to support him) + entertainment career (the most important part is that the literary creation is "blank", and the music is "deep", that is, the slow pace, and some small characters are also highlighted a lot. I look forward to further development of the entertainment career in the future). All in all, I like it very much. The author wrote it according to his own wishes. Good luck.

The plot is good (I think it's more daily life at the moment, unlike traditional cool novels). The protagonist has no cp, but has a family line and a friendship line (Zhouzhou is cute). The protagonist has a certain vest (but it's basically gone). I personally think it's good (I want to see the career line and academic line advance together). You can keep it up for a while and then read it (does the author dare to update 40,000 words to scare me to death) There is nothing particularly unacceptable

The setting and writing style are comfortable and warm. I tied it and wrote down my thoughts. It is worth reading and likes👍👍👍Except for the excessive number of girls~~ describing the cuteness, behavior, clothing, etc. Of the child. (Because I am following the article from the beginning, I have this feeling. I probably won't be able to do it if I follow it every day)

I think it's very interesting. I recommend reading it. As long as the author keeps updating the follow-up content and it won't hold me back, I will keep following it. The names the author gave to each character are really nice. I like them all.

Temperature, temperature, this book is full of temperature. The master has warmth, his eyes have warmth, his side has warmth, the supporting characters have warmth, and the environment has warmth. This is a warm book with no indifference in it. There is no intrigue, no decisive killing, no faint smile. There is no boundless hatred. Some. They are all the temperature of life.

Not bad, this time travel looks like a sweet dream the male protagonist had before his death. Because he longed for family affection, he had his younger sister Zhouzhou after traveling through time, allowing the male protagonist to experience the feeling of being needed by his relatives. He wants to be recognized as talented, so he has all the entertainment information systems on earth and photographic memory, so he can fully display his talents. Also, after the time travel, the protagonist did not express any doubts, longing or relief about his relatives in the previous life. He seemed a bit indifferent, so the transition between the two worlds was a bit unnatural. Moreover, the emotional expression in the article after the time travel was too abundant, and it was a bit exaggerated and rushed [please taste it carefully] The male protagonist's temperament is okay. One thing I like about him very much is that he loves to learn and will take the initiative to understand history instead of relying solely on the system. The friendship between the classmates is quite good, as the micro-group portraits should be, but every time I see them studying and playing together, it feels a bit unreal and artificial. Maybe this is the difference between elite schools and our ordinary high schools [Thinking]. I hope that if the male protagonist buys a house later in college, he hopes to have a house nanny. It would be better for a woman to do things like Zhou Zhou's bathing.

Looks good! To be honest, the author can write about cute babies. Zhouzhou is polite and obedient, and the environment of the whole book is super comfortable. The career, family relationship, and friendship are all very good and rare. It is much better than those who write cool articles that are not fun enough and write about cute babies and let the baby save them. Exquisite food and grass, if you put it lightly, it will be smooth, and the world view is very detailed and picturesque.