Overly Salty Mahayana Monks

It's quite interesting. I originally thought that the author was good at fighting, and the design of the battles had the feeling of returning to battle with spells. Later, I found that the author is actually better at writing emotions. He can write about the indifference of strong people who don't need to follow the rules, but feel that it is more interesting to follow some specifications. The description of the gap between the admiration of girls and their strength is very realistic. I hope the author can keep this emotion indifferent and true, and also hope that the expanded map will not ignore the connections between people.

I think it's okay at the moment. I just hope there won't be a female protagonist and that it won't be like other protagonists. After the protagonist reveals his strength, it will be completely the protagonist's personal show. If the author is capable, he should write a group portrait and let the protagonist create his own sect here to spread the system of cultivating immortals. It is better than writing a plot in which a bunch of harems are opened and the protagonist beats everyone.

Very pretty. But the writing is a bit out of the ordinary. At first I thought it was a casual daily plot where the protagonist hides in the city. Later, the plot suddenly speeds up and the protagonist tears off his waistcoat and explodes. Now it seems that a new map will be opened in the latest chapter? I personally don't feel much about the "turtle" pointed out in the comment area. Overall, this book is okay and I can read it [OK]

The plot is very well written! However, the strength of the Mahayana portrait (the chapter on tracing the origin of evil cultivators) is biased. It is probably because it is worried about affecting the development of the plot, so it was deliberately restricted. It's best to write the plot without affecting the style. Suggestion: Adjust it from the protagonist's passive inability and inability to subjective unwillingness, unnecessary, heavenly restrictions, or no need for explanation at all to satisfy the feeling of satisfaction.

I chased it all the way, and overall I felt it was okay, except that some of the settings were not in place. The protagonist was obviously incredibly powerful, but in terms of detection ability, it was difficult to even find the exact location of Death Ember, which always felt a bit strange. I don't write this review to complain, I mainly want to encourage new authors (actually I'm a new author too), keep up the good work [smile]

It's still pretty good-looking and interesting, at least for an old book reader like me. Maybe it's because I'm just starting out. Anyway, I feel like I can't see how powerful the protagonist is, or I can't express that feeling. But it could also be because this book is written from a spectator's perspective. Anyway, overall it's pretty good.

It's not bad. The male protagonist's outlook is quite upright, and the plot is also good. It's not too mindless like some books.

Very good, average

It's okay, the male protagonist wants to be a human being, not an immortal. The plot is bland and has no flaws.

Than the direct boss dominates the world. It's more like the secluded life of a big shot. There is also the sweet love of ordinary people. So beautiful

Personally, I think it's good. The male protagonist is invincible and the female protagonist's scenes are also good. However, the male protagonist's current feelings for the female protagonist haven't changed much [shy]

Not bad, invest and wait and see

A very novel and beautiful novel, the language is concise and not verbose, and the plot is reasonable and interesting. I hope it won't collapse and become a desolate story later on.

Very beautiful, very beautiful

Not bad, ok

It's okay, at least I'm okay for now.

It's really pretty

You can build a fort now

Interesting, worth watching

Very good, beautiful

This book is indeed well written, but the system can make people in the whole world weaker, or it is too close to the Mahayana.

It seems pretty good so far, but it's too little. I'll try to improve it.

Not bad. There are no poisonous points in Chapter 12 so far.

It's enough to pass the time. It's just that the names of the characters in the early stage of Western Fantasy are really hard to remember and make me dizzy. But later on, it's okay. I can give you some encouragement points.

I really enjoyed reading it. It would be better if there were three chapters.

I think it's okay, it's good, it looks good

A very good and somewhat novel story about a hidden boss. The rhythm is soothing and the plot is reasonable and logical. It's just a shame to have a sloppy ending.