Naruto: Binding Hinata as Mother at the Beginning

Great, it's the Hokage's help to the Wood Domain Master, we can be saved [laughing evilly] Suddenly there was a [fear], Wen Qing committed a crime, died in the harem and then exterminated the clan. The theme of Naruto is bonds, people, families, and villages. If you destroy your clan, you are betraying the village. All the previous emotional lines will be scrapped. If you have to use the harem line in the future, it will only make the character seriously OOC. If you want to take in a girl and rely on your strength to become a strongman, you should be strong [laughter]. The problem forcibly creates a moral dilemma and turns it into a dark and profound disability. What the hell are you doing with a bunch of emotional lines in front of it?

It is at the top level among similar tomatoes, but the number of updates is too small. There may be many people reading books in the future, and maybe they will die [cover face][cover face] What? It suddenly became an infinite Tsukuyomi simulator. Since you want to write a fake world, why don't you just kill all the Hyugas and enjoy it? The latest plot is so pure that I can't get up and down [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

There's nothing sinister about it. It's rare that it doesn't engage in conspiracy theories and the characters are quite intelligent. However, it's a bit unclear. So I wrote a guide for a fan who likes original female characters.

It's well written, basically not toxic, and the protagonist has a calm and steady personality and doesn't bite the bullet. He's nothing like his male pig, he's licking and has a vulgar personality, that's enough. This should be the era of aloof male protagonists, and the dog-licking protagonists should go to shit! ! Your back is just a mess. I said you could score 9 points, but I didn't expect you were slapped in the face.

Okay, it's time to eat, no stains [laughing evilly] Damn it, after getting through those few chapters it's still okay.

Come on, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle (ง •̀_•́)ง[note]

Four stars, it is the first echelon of Naruto novels. However, due to the audience problem of the platform, only the novice Naruto novels can grow. It is recommended to consider going to the biggest place. With a stable income, you can avoid eunuchs as much as possible. Your writing level and rhythm control are basically in the top 30 to top 20 of the light novel category there, and anything beyond that mainly depends on luck. To be honest, the writing style is not suitable here. After all, it is a free platform, and the audience is looking for only three words: white, cool, and yellow. You will know it by looking at the list. I have just started streaming now. If I set up a FLAG, I will definitely not write one million. Five hundred thousand is a life and death battle. This is basically generating electricity for love.

Is a good book Popularity has been dragged down by plug-ins. Many people in the Hokage audience don't know about the Rune Hex plug-in. In addition, there is no clear upgrade route for the plug-in. Rune Hex is almost the same as the rules-based Deus Ex Machina. Chinese people generally like tradition, accumulate internal strength and practice the system step by step, and do not like to become stronger based on rules out of thin air. If it were replaced by a well-known plug-in like Bengyu, its popularity would be much better. The evolution of Erbaiyan Other Hyuga fans used Uchiha's transfer seal to rob the eye power, creating a new stage between the Byakugan and the Turning Eye, and they can use some of the Turning Eye skills. After all, if the three magatama jumps directly to the samsara eye, then Susana will have the ability of the samsara eye. By the same token, there must be an intermediate stage. This book mentions many times that the Byakugan can evolve, but then there is no further explanation. Even if you steal a few eyes quietly and the pupil-absorbing power becomes stronger step by step, it is better than using runes to seduce the gods. But this is Uncle Huang, the main focus is on the heroine, and these are secondary.

It's okay. The most controversial thing is the infinite monthly rewind. The ratings have dropped sharply since that chapter. In fact, I think it's okay. The main reason is that there was nothing to let readers know that the protagonist can rewind. You can pave the way for it, but it doesn't mean that you have to use it. You can only use it at the critical moment. The readers are all from God's perspective. You can write it in narration. Don't keep the readers in the dark. Suddenly, you can have unlimited moon reading.

It's really good-looking. Although the protagonist has a harem, he doesn't act like a stallion and jump on everyone he meets. The plot is smooth and unobtrusive. The strength can be regarded as growing step by step. You can also go back to the second episode. This is simply a masterpiece that can only be found [Sending Hearts]

Chapter 55: A lot of people will lose

So far, everything is fine, very good. At first, I thought the author would write sparsely, because a lot of things about Hex were poorly written. The only problem is the strength issue. The original price of the equipment price reference is at least one thousand or two thousand. You have to save up until the Year of the Monkey and the Horse to complete the magic equipment. Hex is more of a reference to Brawl, and Genting and Golden Shovel are indeed relatively small. In fact, I was looking forward to something more exciting, but the author's current rhythm is good. But there is a fatal problem. If your rhythm slows down, updates must keep up. Otherwise, it will be over when you encounter a transitional chapter. Updates must keep up. [Laughing evilly] Finally, congratulations to the author. Keep working steadily, be more exciting, and work harder. The future is promising!

So far, it's okay. The most uncomfortable part is that the Infinite Tsukuyomi section is too abrupt and frustrating. It's almost like the ending of a dream. However, the author said that things will get better in the future. I'll give it five stars first and then wait and see.

From some angles, the part about Sister Xia's death that many people are talking about is actually a good plot from a writing point of view. Everyone is saying it is not good or bad. I think it is like a novel that has always been good. However, a certain major plot is mediocre or displeased by some people. In the new book stage, other It's really not easy to use. Because of the speed of updates and the fact that it's just a novel, many people won't have the patience to read it. I just say based on my feelings after reading it so far, it's a good Naruto fanfic. It's written in a way that people won't think of any poisonous points. Some places are also handled very delicately. It's a good summary. Come on, it's a good book.

It's not that good, but the score shouldn't be that low. I can only say that the restarted chapters were indeed too fast and not well laid out, but overall it's still worthy of recognition and I hope to keep up the good work.

Not bad, very to my liking As for the unlimited monthly reading you mentioned, what did I think? Isn't this just like the bad ending in Naomo Gaimu? When you get to the end and you're not satisfied with the ending, you load the file and start over again. I can only say that I played the first game seriously. In the next two weeks, I started to treat people as NPCs to speed pass.

It's a great book. The author definitely has a side job. The writing is very good. The male protagonist is gentle on the surface but is actually a pervert. There is no plot about turtles and cows. The male protagonist is absolutely in control. The plot is also very interesting. It is written step by step.

Super awesome, dream ending + awesome.

The reader thought it was just the beginning, but unexpectedly it went directly to the final battle of Infinite Tsukuyomi. Author: "When did you have the illusion that you were not under an illusion?" [Laughs]

Overall, it's okay, but there are two points. In the early stage, Tomoji, a civilian genin who had just graduated, was too strong. He felt that he was stronger than several juniors at the same time. He used several ninjutsu in succession. His strength in the early stage was maintained for a long time. It didn't take long after Hayate's death to wipe out the Hinata clan. The Senji were replaced one by one, which greatly increased their combat power.

At least I still like the protagonist's character very much. It's too ridiculous to have a bond in a separate family. It's normal for a person to be ruthless and cold-blooded in nature. However, I feel that the protagonist's approximate strength rating can be more detailed. The interaction with the female supporting role is also quite interesting and worth recommending.

I love reading it. The writing of this Naruto fanfic has surpassed that of most authors on Tomato. It doesn't have any bad points. The protagonist needs to be developed in the early stage. Tolerance is not a coward, but a strategy. The author writes well, finish this book first, don't be a eunuch

If I can continue writing, I think 8 to 9 points will be a sure thing.

To me, this book is quite innovative, but from the latest chapters, I feel that the author has failed a bit. I hope the author can sort out the outline and write better plots in the future. I feel a little sorry for the current plot. However, I can still read these bad points (the pace of the relationship with the heroine is too fast, the archive is reopened.), But reading the archive this time may not be an opportunity, and the follow-up depends on how the author writes.

That's ok, I'm looking forward to the plot, and I won't do any ink about the girl.

Now that I have read Hongdou's chapter, I think it is very well written. It is not an invincible novel. The feeling of gradual growth and the description of daily life and battles are very good. Maybe not everyone likes to watch multiple heroines, but I love watching it [please update]

The emotional line is very well written, it's big but not super model, the character's personality is very vivid, and the emotional line drawing style is a bit like the best servant and the Witch of the Eastern Jin Dynasty. It may be a little uncomfortable for people who are not very partial to emotional trends, but for someone like me who occasionally reads emotional articles on female videos, it's a piece of cake.

The writing is okay. If the number of words increases, the rating will probably not be bad.

It's really... A huge relief.

Looks good, come on