Focus on unit essays
When the gears of fate turn in the opposite direction, returning to before the mistake happened——
The arrogant learn to bow their heads, the indifferent regain their passion, and the blind finally see clearly.
They hold the only bargaining chip: predicting the tragic ending, and a heart eager to rewrite the ending.
But, how to place the belated affection? Is the soul that has been hurt willing to gamble again?
The old script has been torn up. This time, can they write a happy ending for themselves?
Tentative
Unit 1: Prince Gong vs. Attendant Shou (Completed)
Unit 2: Reborn Quan Chen Gong vs. Husband Man Wife Shou (Completed)
Unit 3: Infinite Streaming Reborn Male Attack vs. Real Dog Shou (Completed)
Unit 4: Apocalyptic Campus Evil Attack VS Dark and Transparent Suffering (Completed)
Unit 5: Rebirth of the Surly Male Insect vs. The General's Female Shou (Completed)
Unit 6: Rebirth Game Anchor vs. Big Fan Shou (Completed)
The first unit has nothing to do with copywriting. It is a small draft I made before. If you are interested, you can take a look. The unit has been saved and contains about 40,000 words.
Reader comments
From the first unit to the second unit, you can clearly see the author's progress, and the writing is getting better and better. The first unit is very simple, and it feels like it ends without saying too much. After all, there are only eleven chapters. When I read the first unit, I felt a little confused, but when I got to the second unit, I can see that the author's writing is very good. The characters of the two protagonists are also very good for my xp and character creation. It's also particularly good. As the author said, Du Cong didn't fall in love with Changsheng when he first traveled back through time. He was purposeful, but after experiencing the intrigues and intrigues in the officialdom in his previous life, Xiao Du was even a villain in his previous life. He had a powerful position, but he was lonely. After being reborn, he felt the care and warmth in Changsheng that he had never experienced in his previous life, and the characters were flesh and blood. Moreover, the change in Xiao Du's thinking did not happen suddenly. It is obvious that when facing the cattle seller, Xiao Du no longer only puts money first, but results first as in his previous life. In addition to the creation of characters, the author's writing style is also very good when describing some scenes, such as the daily interactions between two young lovers. The writing is very warm and has a strong sense of picture, making it very comfortable to read. I have only read two units so far, so I can't judge too much, but from these two units it can be seen that the author's writing skills are good and improving. The only shortcoming (not really) is that the writing is a bit short, and I still haven't finished reading it. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Finally, can the teacher write a few more extra chapters for Xiao Du Changsheng in our previous life? I really haven't read enough [shy][shy][shy]
I really have been looking for a long time before I came across such a suitable story about two male protagonists! ! !
I never thought I'd see such an article on Tomato, it's so beautiful! ! !
I am raising a banner for my wife, let's see who will be her enemy! ! !
It smells so good, wow wow, so touching! ! !
Especially the extra chapter "Previous Life" in Unit 2 completely touched my heart❤️
Excited! ! !
It's super good-looking. Although the author is the author of the first unit and it has nothing to do with the copywriting, I feel that the first unit can be read as a stand-alone book. The second unit is also very good. I still feel that it is not finished. I always feel that the extra chapter is not finished, but the extra chapter is also very interesting. Xiao Du in the previous life and Xiao Du in this life are both worth it. I wish🌹🌹🌹, the third unit has not been finished, and I feel very good at the moment. There is no need to avoid lightning. The author is so far away that I can't find a meal replacement. If possible, I will read two books at the same time. It's really not enough to read [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]
I like the second unit the most... I really like the atmosphere of two people relying on each other. It's so cute. . Although you say you are tired, you are lucky to have this feeling of having me here. It is so warm and makes me feel so soft. Let the young couple stay together like this.
Well, because many people commented that the second world is good, so I watched this world first.
I think it's quite sad to watch. Gong's portrayal is very good, and his emotional transition and personality growth are all reflected. I agree with it.
But Shou is much inferior, so why does Shou love to attack? I don't understand. My impression of Shou is that he is a good wife and mother who has been domesticated by the times.
Because Gong's mother bought him back, he worked hard and supported the family without complaining or regretting. Maybe he and Gong got married because they were in love for a long time.
He accepts everything given by him unconditionally. He is like those women in ancient times who were brainwashed by admonitions. Her husband is everything to him. If he is good to him, he accepts it. If he asks for anything from him, he accepts it. If he abandons him, he still accepts it.
Shou seems to have no emotions and personality of his own. Everything revolves around Gong, for which he can sacrifice everything to suppress his feelings.
The extra episode also made me very upset. How could a father who was not involved in his child's growth and never appeared at all gain the love of a child so easily? I can only think that it was because Shou always talked about him and said good things about him in front of his children.
Are you a more virtuous wife and mother? Isn't this what every man wants to marry a woman who can bear humiliation and bear heavy burdens without regrets and hard work without complaint? Even if a man does not take any responsibility at all, he can still amuse his children and enjoy his wife's service when he comes home.
If this is purely a man, then forget it. I don't feel sorry for men that much, but Shou is a brother, a brother who can get pregnant. Apart from his appearance being different from women, he has the characteristics of women giving birth to life. It's hard for me not to sympathize with him.
If the author deliberately wrote this way to conform to the characteristics of the times, I think the teacher's writing style is quite good, but it is too in line with the characteristics of the times, which makes me feel uncomfortable. I always associate it with the reality of ancient times, which is very sad.
Super praise. I really enjoyed reading this book in the middle of the night. The great author writes very delicately. The atmosphere between the young lovers is described very well. Will there be an author baby who suddenly appears? I will have a look at the 20 extra chapters of Angry. [Please update]
It's very, very beautiful [sending my heart], especially the second world, it's very awesome Klass, okay, this author is also very awesome, okay la la la [crazy], I will taste it word for word [make faces]
Looking forward to the author's Zerg novel ໒꒰ྀི ∩⸝⸝∩ ꒱ྀི১. The author must update it more often. It's been a long time since I've seen a fast-traveling article that suits my taste so well ૮꒰ྀི > . < ꒱ྀིა.
It's a cute little sweet article, especially suitable for cp girls like us. Mutual favoring is so great! But some storylines are still a bit too hasty, such as the one with unlimited streaming. I like this one the best, but the process goes too fast, and 4️⃣ people are very easy. But the little sweet article is still good to read [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh] The main reason is that the world really needs such a great invention as mutual petting.
I came from the second book of Mantou. The writing style is really good. The CP is very good and the fragrance is shocking and delicious. I cried when I read the couple of extras of Changsheng Xiaodu [crying]. I follow Mantou's works [admiration]
I read it from another book by the author. It turns out that I have read a little bit of it. It was probably a serialization so I didn't read it again, but I finished it this time! It also makes me not miss it. Hehehe, it's good, the author will update another one soon! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
Before the hearty feeling subsided, I found that I had finished reading the article, and I couldn't help but cry out in grief and indignation. Os really wants the author to write six chapters a day to feed the chickens. Os really wants to stick his head into the author's draft box to see if there is any leftover food. There is actually a new article on the os homepage, so I have to eat it immediately. The Steamed Bun Emperor brings readers a sense of happiness like being full of carbohydrates.
Secretly give yourself a good review [send heart]
Welcome everyone to read the article~
The second world is super beautiful
Looks good. Xiao Du is such a cute dog.
Such a beautiful article is really unforgivable! ! !
It's so beautiful and the writing is smooth. I like it.
Baozi who saw my comment should really open it and take a look. Although I don't know why the rating is so low, this book is really good-looking and good-looking. As a foreign persimmon 🍅, it is one of the few good-looking books. As a reader who has been reading for seven or eight years, I believe you can really try this book without losing money. I usually don't like reviews, mainly because there are too few readers who read this. I want to give the author a rating, and get some people to read this really good and true treasure novel. Why didn't anyone find me?
It's pretty good, a lighthearted and sweet story, the plot progresses quickly and there are no big twists and turns.
Every couple written by the author is so cute. In fact, I didn't like any of them when I first read the introduction. I just didn't have any books to read and gave it a try. Unexpectedly, I found them very interesting.
After reading the first two stories, the teacher is very suitable for writing stories with ancient backgrounds, especially the story about the first prince. It is very interesting. I hope to write more [laughing][laughing][laughing]
The second world is particularly beautiful, I really like it, and the extras are also good
The Zerg world is also good to watch, but I haven't finished the others and I don't like it.
It's good to read. I like the previous life of the second story. I'm looking forward to the author's great Zerg novels.
I like the Zerg unit the most. Boss, please write another one like this😭😭
I haven't read it for a long time, but the author's writing is very good. Why is it so cold [what]
It looks good. I like the Zerg unit and there is a second unit.
It's too short and not enough to read. Each unit can be a separate book. Let's expand it.
Artwork, art, art, Emperor, Emperor, we support you!
Personally, I think the first unit is the best
Units 2 and 3 are the best.
Truly an underrated novel. Very interesting.
Super pretty! ! ! Except for the second unit, I haven't read the other volumes one, three or four. I like them so much [KISS][KISS][KISS]
The more I watch it, the more I like it, it's so exciting! ! !
From the first unit to the second unit, you can clearly see the author's progress, and the writing is getting better and better. The first unit is very simple, and it feels like it ends without saying too much. After all, there are only eleven chapters. When I read the first unit, I felt a little confused, but when I got to the second unit, I can see that the author's writing is very good. The characters of the two protagonists are also very good for my xp and character creation. It's also particularly good. As the author said, Du Cong didn't fall in love with Changsheng when he first traveled back through time. He was purposeful, but after experiencing the intrigues and intrigues in the officialdom in his previous life, Xiao Du was even a villain in his previous life. He had a powerful position, but he was lonely. After being reborn, he felt the care and warmth in Changsheng that he had never experienced in his previous life, and the characters were flesh and blood. Moreover, the change in Xiao Du's thinking did not happen suddenly. It is obvious that when facing the cattle seller, Xiao Du no longer only puts money first, but results first as in his previous life. In addition to the creation of characters, the author's writing style is also very good when describing some scenes, such as the daily interactions between two young lovers. The writing is very warm and has a strong sense of picture, making it very comfortable to read. I have only read two units so far, so I can't judge too much, but from these two units it can be seen that the author's writing skills are good and improving. The only shortcoming (not really) is that the writing is a bit short, and I still haven't finished reading it. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Finally, can the teacher write a few more extra chapters for Xiao Du Changsheng in our previous life? I really haven't read enough [shy][shy][shy]
I really have been looking for a long time before I came across such a suitable story about two male protagonists! ! ! I never thought I'd see such an article on Tomato, it's so beautiful! ! ! I am raising a banner for my wife, let's see who will be her enemy! ! ! It smells so good, wow wow, so touching! ! ! Especially the extra chapter "Previous Life" in Unit 2 completely touched my heart❤️ Excited! ! !
It's super good-looking. Although the author is the author of the first unit and it has nothing to do with the copywriting, I feel that the first unit can be read as a stand-alone book. The second unit is also very good. I still feel that it is not finished. I always feel that the extra chapter is not finished, but the extra chapter is also very interesting. Xiao Du in the previous life and Xiao Du in this life are both worth it. I wish🌹🌹🌹, the third unit has not been finished, and I feel very good at the moment. There is no need to avoid lightning. The author is so far away that I can't find a meal replacement. If possible, I will read two books at the same time. It's really not enough to read [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]
I like the second unit the most... I really like the atmosphere of two people relying on each other. It's so cute. . Although you say you are tired, you are lucky to have this feeling of having me here. It is so warm and makes me feel so soft. Let the young couple stay together like this.
Well, because many people commented that the second world is good, so I watched this world first. I think it's quite sad to watch. Gong's portrayal is very good, and his emotional transition and personality growth are all reflected. I agree with it. But Shou is much inferior, so why does Shou love to attack? I don't understand. My impression of Shou is that he is a good wife and mother who has been domesticated by the times. Because Gong's mother bought him back, he worked hard and supported the family without complaining or regretting. Maybe he and Gong got married because they were in love for a long time. He accepts everything given by him unconditionally. He is like those women in ancient times who were brainwashed by admonitions. Her husband is everything to him. If he is good to him, he accepts it. If he asks for anything from him, he accepts it. If he abandons him, he still accepts it. Shou seems to have no emotions and personality of his own. Everything revolves around Gong, for which he can sacrifice everything to suppress his feelings. The extra episode also made me very upset. How could a father who was not involved in his child's growth and never appeared at all gain the love of a child so easily? I can only think that it was because Shou always talked about him and said good things about him in front of his children. Are you a more virtuous wife and mother? Isn't this what every man wants to marry a woman who can bear humiliation and bear heavy burdens without regrets and hard work without complaint? Even if a man does not take any responsibility at all, he can still amuse his children and enjoy his wife's service when he comes home. If this is purely a man, then forget it. I don't feel sorry for men that much, but Shou is a brother, a brother who can get pregnant. Apart from his appearance being different from women, he has the characteristics of women giving birth to life. It's hard for me not to sympathize with him. If the author deliberately wrote this way to conform to the characteristics of the times, I think the teacher's writing style is quite good, but it is too in line with the characteristics of the times, which makes me feel uncomfortable. I always associate it with the reality of ancient times, which is very sad.
Super praise. I really enjoyed reading this book in the middle of the night. The great author writes very delicately. The atmosphere between the young lovers is described very well. Will there be an author baby who suddenly appears? I will have a look at the 20 extra chapters of Angry. [Please update]
It's very, very beautiful [sending my heart], especially the second world, it's very awesome Klass, okay, this author is also very awesome, okay la la la [crazy], I will taste it word for word [make faces]
Looking forward to the author's Zerg novel ໒꒰ྀི ∩⸝⸝∩ ꒱ྀི১. The author must update it more often. It's been a long time since I've seen a fast-traveling article that suits my taste so well ૮꒰ྀི > . < ꒱ྀིა.
It's a cute little sweet article, especially suitable for cp girls like us. Mutual favoring is so great! But some storylines are still a bit too hasty, such as the one with unlimited streaming. I like this one the best, but the process goes too fast, and 4️⃣ people are very easy. But the little sweet article is still good to read [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh] The main reason is that the world really needs such a great invention as mutual petting.
I came from the second book of Mantou. The writing style is really good. The CP is very good and the fragrance is shocking and delicious. I cried when I read the couple of extras of Changsheng Xiaodu [crying]. I follow Mantou's works [admiration]
I read it from another book by the author. It turns out that I have read a little bit of it. It was probably a serialization so I didn't read it again, but I finished it this time! It also makes me not miss it. Hehehe, it's good, the author will update another one soon! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
Before the hearty feeling subsided, I found that I had finished reading the article, and I couldn't help but cry out in grief and indignation. Os really wants the author to write six chapters a day to feed the chickens. Os really wants to stick his head into the author's draft box to see if there is any leftover food. There is actually a new article on the os homepage, so I have to eat it immediately. The Steamed Bun Emperor brings readers a sense of happiness like being full of carbohydrates.
Secretly give yourself a good review [send heart] Welcome everyone to read the article~
The second world is super beautiful
Looks good. Xiao Du is such a cute dog.
Such a beautiful article is really unforgivable! ! !
It's so beautiful and the writing is smooth. I like it. Baozi who saw my comment should really open it and take a look. Although I don't know why the rating is so low, this book is really good-looking and good-looking. As a foreign persimmon 🍅, it is one of the few good-looking books. As a reader who has been reading for seven or eight years, I believe you can really try this book without losing money. I usually don't like reviews, mainly because there are too few readers who read this. I want to give the author a rating, and get some people to read this really good and true treasure novel. Why didn't anyone find me?
It's pretty good, a lighthearted and sweet story, the plot progresses quickly and there are no big twists and turns. Every couple written by the author is so cute. In fact, I didn't like any of them when I first read the introduction. I just didn't have any books to read and gave it a try. Unexpectedly, I found them very interesting.
After reading the first two stories, the teacher is very suitable for writing stories with ancient backgrounds, especially the story about the first prince. It is very interesting. I hope to write more [laughing][laughing][laughing]
The second world is particularly beautiful, I really like it, and the extras are also good The Zerg world is also good to watch, but I haven't finished the others and I don't like it.
It's good to read. I like the previous life of the second story. I'm looking forward to the author's great Zerg novels.
I like the Zerg unit the most. Boss, please write another one like this😭😭
I haven't read it for a long time, but the author's writing is very good. Why is it so cold [what]
It looks good. I like the Zerg unit and there is a second unit.
It's too short and not enough to read. Each unit can be a separate book. Let's expand it.
Artwork, art, art, Emperor, Emperor, we support you!
Personally, I think the first unit is the best
Units 2 and 3 are the best.
Truly an underrated novel. Very interesting.
Super pretty! ! ! Except for the second unit, I haven't read the other volumes one, three or four. I like them so much [KISS][KISS][KISS] The more I watch it, the more I like it, it's so exciting! ! !