Your Superpower Is Impressive, but It's Mine Now

Overall it's good. Is it because the protagonist has a little bit of double standards, or is it that the author didn't realize it? Just like that at the Salvation Society, two people fought, causing the car to burn down and the ground to shake. Then the protagonist gets angry and kills both of them. But the protagonist, wow, he killed it instantly with all his strength, exploded directly, and created a 100-meter crack in the ground. Do you think it's possible that the destructive power of the fight between the two of them is not as serious as that of the protagonist? 🤔

My wife is really great. The author writes it so well. I really like it. At the beginning, there was a female boss who didn't like to have contact with her. Then he wrote, well, it should be no problem just touching one finger, yes, indeed. No problem, even if she doesn't like contact, it's just a finger touch, yes. Then you can directly copy the ability. Level three is too strong. This ability is actually level lv3, which is rare in the world. Then you drive directly there. In the mountains, where the old man often cuts firewood, he directly tested it for more than ten minutes. Such advanced technology must not be able to test the energy response. After all, this ability is so beyond the standard. It took more than ten minutes to directly bombard and destroy the site. This combat power is also. Excellent! It can destroy multiple heavy tanks. This combat power is also very easy to use. I tested it vigorously for more than ten minutes without anyone noticing. It's so cool. It's so cool to write. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

It's okay. It's a typical invincible novel. The protagonist beats the opponent in seconds. It doesn't overwhelm the combat power, but the AI ​​expansion is obvious. Especially in the plot after the invasion of foreign enemies, the protagonist is constantly thinking about the inner drama. It takes a long time and several chapters to continue the plot. Then after two chapters, the inner drama starts again.

Not bad, invincible text, after all, there is no limit to copying, no consumption, no cooldown, and there is no limit on the number of times the demon can be played alone. The latest plot also expands the fighting power to the Demon King.

After reading it, write some suggestions to the author. Because my writing skills are okay, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch. I don't know if I can see it. 1. The ability introduction should not be too long or include parentheses [ ] like this. 2. Don't talk to yourself. When reading the article, the reader will obviously feel uncomfortable. 3. Content streamlining and scene switching. Don't have too many inner thoughts in one scene. This made me uncomfortable while reading. Then, after I finished speaking my inner words, I cut directly to the scene, and there was an obvious sense of fragmentation. 4. Use the simplest words to tell a good story. The article is well written, keep it up✊!!!

The things are packed tightly, and the packaging bubbles sent are also very good, crystal clear, and every bubble is full. After receiving the goods, I squeezed half of it and put the remaining half away for next time. Every bubble can make a crisp sound, and there are absolutely no dumb bubbles, which is unmatched by ordinary bubbles. Looking forward to the stars and the moon finally arrived. In fact, it took three days to cover a distance of 1,800 kilometers. It was extremely fast to send this distant touch. However, people's expectations are longer than the span of time, so it feels like every day is like a year. The meaning of this product weighs more than a thousand pounds in the hands of a foodie, and every bite is full of chewiness. This is not just a simple and boring desire, it is a kind of cleansing and release for the soul^ No brain, no brain.

The world view setting is not bad, the protagonist's behavior is very reasonable, he is aware of his own problems, and does not blindly join a large organization to seek death. It's big, but very peaceful. To be honest, this is the only bad thing about it. It's too big, there are no restrictions, it looks a bit boring, and the leveling is too obvious. Otherwise, the protagonist will directly establish relationships and get to know the boss directly, and he will be invincible long ago. I have a girlfriend, but she is very comfortable. She does not lick, and the woman is not brainless. Officials in various countries have finally stopped forcibly controlling people. Each country has its own reasonable way of dealing with people with special abilities. It is finally not mindless. Let's talk about some shortcomings. Later, there were too many vests, mainly because there were not enough reasons. In fact, it would be more reasonable to write a clone ability and then add vests. There is nothing new in the writing of daily life. It feels like pure watering down. It is neither funny nor plot-y. It is just short-sighted and a complete waste of emotions. Even if you don't pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, you still have to be a little special. The result is nothing, so what is the purpose of writing about your daily life? If the enemy is too stereotyped, you will know that it is reckless. Once or twice is okay, but the plot is the same, and it will be aesthetically fatigued. In addition, one mission every seven days is too outrageous. Under this kind of pressure, no one can be calm and ethical in reality.

I came here for the label of having multiple female protagonists, so I would call it an invincible novel. The protagonist has the ability to copy, and becomes stronger when he encounters a strong one. There are 200+ chapters in the update. The protagonist is already invincible on earth. There are only two normal female protagonists. The protagonist has no idea of ​​taking the initiative to attack the beauties around him. I don't think it's interesting to just defeat monsters and upgrade. Personally, I prefer the plot where the protagonist is invincible and then picks up girls.

Can see. . Very cool. Deducted one star because I don't like the vest genre. Goodbye.

Chapter 97 Woman: An Jiaqi, Superpower: Copy Multiple Girls: Yang Qian Time Messenger Lv11 The control range can be close to half of the planet's surface Corpse Control Level 10 Can control Lv10 living corpses, and after upgrading to Lv10, the number that can be controlled is doubled. Five Senses Control Lv10 The five-sense control range is expanded to one-third of the planet's surface Man of Steel Lv10 Pure physical strength of 1,000 billion tons! The defense is stronger, dozens of times the strength! It has a biological force field that can be more than 500 meters away from the body! But no newly awakened abilities have emerged yet. Emperor's Arms Lv10 After transformation, you can also increase your power by 1 trillion tons, and you can control the power of light, which has a special attack effect on dark creatures! The most important thing is... He looks super handsome after his transformation Super speed movement Lv10! Needless to say, he ran super fast! It's much faster than the Man of Steel flying in the sky. Elemental Spirit Lv10 Control various elements, as long as they belong to the elements, you can control them! But not an element of the periodic table Light of the Soul Lv10 Summoning the Undead Lv10 There are more undead creatures that can be summoned, and Luo Chen can finally summon the Bone Dragon! Although it is only the lowest level bone dragon Shrink Lv8 There is nothing to say. The lowest limit of all Luo Chen's superpowers is to become smaller. At Lv8, he can become even smaller. Even the smallest ants are as big as giant beasts in front of Luo Chen. Gravity Control Lv10 The super power of controlling basic power. After upgrading to Lv10 level, as long as Luo Chen is given a little time, he can directly tear the entire planet to pieces! Space Messenger Lv10 A space envoy that contains various space-based superpowers. The control range of a Lv10 space envoy can cover half of the earth's surface, which is larger than that of a time envoy. Immortality Level 10 It made Luo Chen almost immortal. It didn't matter even if he was chopped into pieces, he could recover instantly! Memory Digitization Lv9 Luo Chen's superpower of retrieving memories was just a functional upgrade. There was nothing new in terms of functionality, so he just strengthened it. Light Law Lv10