I, a Passerby, Am Their White Moonlight

Because the male protagonist is extremely afraid that if he crosses Lily, the world will not follow the original script and will eventually be destroyed, so he has been in the sheep's tail. He was so scared that the two female protagonists were about to rape him, so they both refused. The addition of the princess in the second volume made the male protagonist go to the central air-conditioned nanny road and never return. Judging from the current speed of advancement, this novel will be quite slow. If you don't mind the above, it's worth watching

5 Stars for encouragement, 3 actual points. I'm working on writing a story, and I've read two chapters so far. I'm a sucker for character, you pass. But the foreshadowing is too obvious, and there are many memes, but don't use them all the time. Once the memes are outdated or people don't understand them, they will be confused.

Pretty good. Not much anger. . It's good to read one occasionally to calm down your mood. The premise is that there is no knife later. . The protagonist has no outstanding growth and is idealistic.

Not bad, because I pay more attention to emotional description, I think it's okay. The emotional development of several female protagonists is fully logical and reasonable, and there is a clear process of emotional development. Although it is difficult to comment on the idea of ​​​​the male protagonists in the latest two chapters that "Leya and Ella like their imaginary selves", overall the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Hope it can be preserved. By the way, why is the rating so low? I give five stars to the plot before the exchange with world consciousness, and I can only give three stars to the plot after that. The male protagonist of Asashi is a standard Japanese character, and the plot is also a standard Japanese version.

The Asashi male protagonist in the early days of standard Japanese comics... It depends on the person's interest and acceptance The protagonist has no opinion of his own and is simply pushed around by the housekeeper. They say they are trying to save the world, but they call the heroines ordinary friends, but their attitude is very vague, giving the impression that they are just too troublesome and don't want to take responsibility.

I've read Chapter 40. The plot and the portrayal of the heroine are both very good so far. However, the male protagonist is a bit too weak and has no strength at all. He relies on the housekeeper for all the fights. It feels like such a waste. It's understandable that the male protagonist in the original plot is just a passerby and has no strength, but he can't grow without a little bit. , It feels very poisonous, and it will give your male protagonist some growth in his own strength. Of course, you said that the male protagonist can summon demons, which is strength, but the problem is that your male protagonist has no control methods at all, and he has not said to learn demon spells. This is no different from not having any strength at all. But then again, the advantages of this book outweigh or at least equal the bad points, so that I can keep reading. Otherwise, because the male protagonist has been led by the nose, I would have given up on the book now. I will see if this will be dealt with later. I will follow up when I see the update. Let's just say we've caught up with the big army. I skipped the third volume after only reading four chapters. Let me start with the conclusion: the male protagonist is still very good at what he does, and he is undeniably poisonous. But I thought about it and let it go. Without the setting that the male protagonist has no strength, many plots would not be able to unfold. In short, this book is so magical. With my orientation, this trash-type male protagonist is a big minefield for me, but I still like this book. I don't know if the author has done something to downplay the strength of the male protagonist. It's still a great book, I hope it gets better and better (please give Lao Lan some fighting skills😭 It's so awkward)

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The writing is not particularly outstanding, but at least it does not have AI. The plot is average, but it is readable. The current overall rating is 4⭐, so I can look forward to this new book.

This two-dimensional novel has no major flaws and is worth reading. The ending will give it five stars.

It's not the kind of mindless harem novel. You can really feel that the author is seriously portraying the characters and describing the story. I actually can't tell you what's so good about him... But... You know? It's just... That feeling... That makes people addicted when reading it. (I feel like the rating shouldn't be just 6 points, this novel deserves to be seen by more people)

It's okay. In terms of combat power, many people say it's too weak, but this book mainly describes passers-by, so it's not a big problem. After all, the natural talent is not very good, and if you want to become stronger, just ask a master to teach you the skills (as long as it's enough, it's okay as long as it doesn't make you weak). , Many people are saying that the protagonist is awkward because the original character is Lily and dare not break the hundred, but this world has God's will. After really doing something, he may be forced to return to the normal line, just like Cao Cao in the New Three Kingdoms, who clearly saw through Huang Gai's bitter plot, but in the end, he still believed in Huang Gai during the Battle of Chibi. Will be forcibly changed back to normal. In this book, it is the second princess who should have died, but survived, but was forcibly erased from the sense of existence. Although it is said that the housekeeper has a rebellious heart, it is all God's will. After all, the original book did not say this (and the pace is indeed relatively fast. I feel like I can thank you everyday more. Come on.

The rhythm of dividing into volumes is very good. The advantages over Japanese light novels are that firstly, you can eat meat, and secondly, unlike toilet paper, villager A starts to become stronger inexplicably, and the growth arc is very obvious. Furthermore, dividing into volumes is more comfortable than many online articles. In fact, dividing into volumes is also good for the author to write an outline. It is easier to write an outline in one volume than to write the entire outline at once. Overall, I think it is pretty good.

Looking back, I found that my soul had already left before I was 18 years old. What was left was just that insignificant body that was trying to fill up the washing of life. My soul seemed to only be able to possess my body when I was happy. A bit forced

Emmmm, slightly toxic, but I can read it. Let's read it in Shuhuang to pass the time.

The author writes well, with a brisk pace, reasonable plot, and self-consistent logic. And it was written with great care, both in terms of plot conception and writing style. For example, the princess kidnapped the hero with a sword for the brave man, whether it was to intimidate or hurt, these details that I thought would hit the mark were all rounded out. It's really rare to write with care

How should I put it? The style is a bit similar to that of Japanese light novels. The classic Asashi male protagonist has been optimized with some of the poisonous points of Japanese light novels. The pace seems to be okay at the moment. If it is successfully completed at this level, it will almost get a 9 points.

Shen Nong is here. To be fair, the writing is still good. It's just that in the tragedy caused by his own woman, the protagonist is strong and kind. (It's reasonable for the heroine to do this to seize power, but the protagonist is invincible when he talks about values ​​​​to the devil in the tragedy. I don't say who to blame, at least do something practical and talk about it. I'm kidding.) If you really don't try to forcibly promote the kindness of the protagonist, this book is still okay.

No lily elements? What about Ella from the other world in Chapter 66 who possesses Ella from the protagonist's world, and forcibly hugs Leya from the protagonist's world? What is your definition of lily elements? In other worlds, Ella, a lily girl, and the protagonist can be considered love rivals. You let the protagonist's love rival forcefully hug the protagonist's girlfriend?

Let me say a few words first. I think people who don't like gala games or classic Asashi may not necessarily like this book, but my five stars are all for the gravity of the heroines. It's so powerful. It attracts and tears the protagonist around like a black hole. It really makes me extremely high.

It's pretty cool, but can it be made faster? My fans are urging me. How can I move it if you don't update it?

I enjoyed watching it. The romantic comedy is really well written, and each character is very unique. The only thing that makes people feel uncomfortable is that the heroine must be written for the first and second weeks. But this author does write well, and the score is low at 7.

I feel like this is a book with great potential. The pace of the first 10 chapters is maintained very well.

It's very interesting. The butler gave me a sense of déjà vu as a zone. He also gave up his identity to achieve his goal. He was also very radical for the goal, although the goal was opposite. So what will be the ending of The Butler? Will he die?

I said BP is a good civilization, who understands?

The emotional description is very good. I have watched too many battles. I really need to watch some romance to make up for my inner feelings [smile][smile][smile]

Memoirs, looks okay

Judging from experience, it will be popular if the writing style and plot are not too separated?

It's good to watch, I'm looking forward to the plot behind it, a potential stock [Like][Like] , I haven't updated it for a long time. Today I happened to see the author's original plot before the reset. I remember that the previous writing was not very good. Why did it suddenly need to be reset? After all, I have a good attitude and I really like this book. I still give it 5 stars.

Well, it gives me the feeling of watching a funny alternate world.

I don't know much about watching football.