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Super pretty! ! Great demolition instrument! Make me crawl with darkness and light! ! (I don't want Tong Qin. In my understanding, when Tong Mo faces Kotonoha in the original work, he is at best longing for maternal love! Just like Wuhan versus Tired!) And little Yan Sheng is also very cute! ! A Warring States Period Lin Daiyu with internal friction! ! Leaving the teacher feels like losing all love and dying of thirst. Why is it so cute? \(//∇//)\

Come on, teacher! [Sending Hearts] Beautifully written [Thinking] The protagonist and Yan Shengyuan look like a love triangle [Thinking] [Learned]

It's still very good, the characters and plot are pretty good, and it's great that it allowed me to read it for so long even though I was a little tired of reading. But it's a pity that I don't like too many original characters. When I saw the warning at the beginning, I was mentally prepared, thinking that there was only the protagonist's mother. There are some passers-by and tools in the back, but I didn't care much about it until a time-traveler came later and had to clear up the variables. I couldn't stand it anymore... It's not that I hate it, I just don't like reading it. If there are book friends who don't hate it or like it, this book is still highly recommended.

Very very five ants! Wu Pei, Yan Sheng, Yuan Yi, etc. Don't feel OOC [Like] Especially Wu Pei, I am a hot girl, self-centered, venomous, cowardly and fun-loving [Like] [Like] [Like] I really like the interaction between Shui Yue and Wu Pei. Oh, that kind of pseudo-substitute, the kind of person who clearly knows that he (miser) treats him as a substitute. I have a hard time talking (in a physical sense), and no matter whether he is a stand-in or not, I will hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, how greedy he is [like] I actually like Yansheng (Yuanyi → Yansheng → ← Shuiyue), and the red milk dragon forcefully blends into this family [laughs] [like] (Of course, I did it myself because there is no tendency for the master-disciple relationship to go bad in the article!) Yiwozu is here where his wife and children (?) Are on the hot bed, and there is no problem except that he is still being harassed by Mo Mo Tou [Like] At present, the Infinite City family is still very warm (?). [Like] Looking forward to Yuyue joining our family [Like] And the author (crossed out) the big hand of fate really knows how to organize things [like] Come on, come on [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's very interesting to watch. It's a fishing-type protagonist. I like it very much. He's gentle but not aggrieved. He speaks directly and doesn't have any twists and turns. Maybe it's because his mother comes from another world, so the blood ghost skills that the protagonist possesses after becoming a ghost also have a feeling that he doesn't belong to this world. He's very emotional. The sensitive protagonist can clearly distinguish the difference between "mother" and "mom". I feel that "mom" should have gone to the fast-travel world to accumulate points. He only hopes to be in a non-fantasy world, which will allow the protagonist to wait shorter. Although the ghost has no idea about the passage of time. Real feeling, but when the longing cannot be suppressed, the ocean will collapse the building. Although the author has not described the longing too much, the longing for hundreds of years is surging in just a few words. Every time the memory is lost, the memory is recovered, the protagonist's intentions and thoughts are vented, high I saw two rounds of the moon in the sky in this book. The moonlight is an extremely gentle existence but also extremely cold (when I wrote this, I realized that I was digressing). It is a very beautiful article and the emotional description is also very delicate. However, why is there so little traffic? Come and read it.

Generally speaking, I think the setting is quite good, and the pitfalls in the front have been buried. I feel that it is biased towards the heartthrob. The OOC is just average, and the writing is also quite good. I think the character creation is okay, but it is not fast enough. I look forward to the later plot.

It's very good-looking. The protagonist is the kind of person who is flirting. After reading the storyline, I didn't feel aggrieved. I feel that the protagonist is not the kind of person who suffers a lot, especially when he travels back to the time when he was having lunch. That part really feels like the protagonist is very three-dimensional and vivid.

The front part is quite interesting, but the back part feels a bit flat and lacks something. I don't know how to describe it, it just feels like it doesn't have the desire to follow the previous version. But it's still very beautiful and worth a try! It just doesn't poke me too much from behind.

Very well written. It would be nice if it could be longer. The ending should be considered unfinished. I only wrote about my thoughts but not completely. Thank you for your hard work. If you can write more to complete the ending, I believe this is a book with a score of 9.9.

Shuiyue and Tongmo definitely have something in common. This Wen Chaoyan is a mother and a time traveler, waiting for her mother to take Yueyue home. I hope the protagonist has a good ending. Is this training Wuhan? I didn't expect it. There is even a theory of time travel. When will we recognize each other? But Wuhan is indeed a bit cruel. There is a slight sense of depression, which is a bit uncomfortable to watch. I can't do it anymore. Unable to recognize each other. . . Damn stream of misunderstandings.

Very good-looking, omnivorous and fearless [shy]

The author's writing style is very good, and the sentences he writes are emotionally delicate. But what I want to say is, update it quickly! Totally not enough! ! !

I don't understand why the author 😳 specially marked Tong Qinsai, this pair is not an official match

I really want to know that Muzan knows that Shuiyue is what Qingyue looks like!

I really like this book, Wu Mei and Shui Yue really get along very well [shy]

This is the best Demon Slayer fanfic I have ever read. I really like the setting of the protagonist and the emotional descriptions are very delicate.

Nice! Very interesting daily routine and interaction

I'm going to follow this author. . . . [Love][Love][Love][Love]

Brothers look good.

It's very interesting. I love watching protagonists with this kind of personality. I beg the author to continue writing. ദ്ദിᵔ.˛.ᵔ₎✧

It looks good, come on, author, I love you [blowing kiss]

Super good-looking, the main character is highly recommended

It's very cool. I hope all the members of Onifata have a better ending (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It looks good, but can anyone tell me whether this is the main text or the main subject text? This is very important to me. I don't dare to read it now [I'm about to cry]

Quite a funny writing style, the protagonist's appearance and IQ are both online and at the same time, he also has a crazy (crossed out) demeanor, hahahahahahahahaha A super good book. Demon Slayer just left the novice village and encountered a top-notch succubus. Ahhhhh. The teacher's writing is superb.

Yo, it's beautiful.

Very good, I really like the character of the protagonist. In terms of characters, the control is also very good. [Sending Hearts]

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

Great, great, great

Is this the end? [Crying]