Demon Slayer: Douma and Kotoha, The Old Man Loves Her to Pieces

I can give five stars for understanding the character of Tong Mo in the human period. He did save a lot of people without hurting anyone. His background is the pursuit of good (even if he is unconscious). After becoming a ghost, the transformation process of being affected by ghosts and distorting good intentions is also well written. The chaotic and kind state is also very cute. I like this interpretation of the character.

It's a very step-by-step process, and the emotions are described very delicately... I'm just a little afraid of how Kotonoha will make dumplings after reading the end of the book and discovering that she has been deceived (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ )

It's pretty good, but I just feel like how can Tongmo not be cheap at all? [What] And the tone of the words is not the original one. I am very curious to know how to write [note] when I meet the third brother in the future. And Inosuke is a bit too good, right? I feel like the author is not the kind of person who writes about noisy characters. It lacks a lot of animation feel. But just looking at it as a Tongqin CP fanfic, it's still okay. Although I don't like this pair of CPs, this ending is more acceptable than the original work 🤔.

It's quite good-looking, and the emotional development is relatively fast. There are some places that I personally think are a little OOC. At least I think Kotonoha is grateful to Tongmo in her heart, but her kindness cannot accept the happiness given by Tongmo with peace of mind. Then Inosuke is more important to her than life and she doesn't dare to gamble. So in the manga, Kotonoha only called Tongmo a liar, and the other words were too hurtful, as if all the previous feelings had disappeared. The emotional pull is well written, and the author's writing style is also good. I look forward to the author's continued production.

Very good, but I always feel that Kotonoha will recover his memory later. After all, the story filled with lies is unstable after all. Solving the problem after recovering the memory is the prerequisite for achieving the real he, and it is also the climax of the story, but it is also true that it is difficult to write. I don't know if the author can control this kind of intensity. If the follow-up is not unfinished, I will give it five stars.

Thank you for your love for this book (づ◡ど). This is my first time writing an article and there may be some things I didn't notice. You are welcome to give me suggestions ꉂ(ˊᗜˋ*)

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The author's writing is excellent! The writing is great and the writing is very sweet😋 Recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended…

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