Xuanhuan: One Card Draw a Day on the Path to Immortality!

The author's setting is so ingenious! He accurately binds the desperate situation of "an ant in troubled times" with the "decisive killing" character, the background of the collapse of the dynasty is textured, and the node of the seventeen-year-old comeback is just right. It not only brings out the cruelty of troubled times, but also foreshadows the exciting feeling of counterattack. You will be hooked at a glance! In just a few strokes at the beginning, the cruel and oppressive feeling of troubled times is fully realized. The tone of "human life is like grass" is firmly established. The hook of Lu Yuan's counterattack is natural and attractive. The decisive and murderous character has that flavor as soon as it is posted. The sense of anticipation is immediately heightened!

So pretty! Others have poisoned you (probably to scare you), and a half-dead person can still threaten you, so the protagonist uses his treasure to save her. The protagonist is really a good person. Why doesn't the protagonist donate his system and the skills he has acquired for free? So pretty! Must give five-star praise 💕💕💕💕💕

Yes, at present, the world view is okay and the character setting has not collapsed, but I feel that the standing system may be a bit vague and may collapse in the later period. The author should think about it and plan it in advance. Or the character who draws cards can be more villainous, which is more distinctive, because most of the martial arts writers who write drawing cards are just Qiao Feng, Yang Guo and the like. These characters have been written too many times. You can find a new way to write some characters that have not been written before.

The plot design is all okay, the only problem is the design of the golden finger. The advancement of your plot depends entirely on the card drawing of the golden finger. Every time you encounter a problem, you have to draw a card to solve the problem. Moreover, after the Zhenwu experience card is solved, the martial arts return will only have one celestial phenomenon and three top Tiangang. During the upgrade It took three years for the real martial arts, so there is still more than a year of martial arts. After the return of the martial arts, it took at least half a year, that is, more than a hundred times to get this little thing. I feel that your martial arts might as well not return, or instead just take away part of the original talent and physique from the beginning and no luck. When the Heavenly Gate opens later, you will also temporarily draw cards to create the Immortality Realm of the Innate God Realm, right? I remember that the highest level currently is the Immortality Realm.

It's time for the Ten Jue and the Eight Kings to appear. The moment when the sect was established appeared. The higher the level, the higher the level. The harder it is to get out. It's okay now. Otherwise, the characters released earlier would have been wasted. The role of the protagonist could actually be reduced. I actually prefer the appearance of people from the heavens to the protagonist. Two ten draw cards. Come and give a big gift to a character. All in one evil state.

I feel like the system can be upgraded later and some characters can be summoned. It's so slow. I've been summoning for several days.

It's a very good novel. It's not poisonous, not brainless, and the plot is reasonable. Four stars is the highest score I can give it. There are two other problems: First, the protagonist seems to have a grudge against the royal family. The system cannot summon characters, which is a pity. Second, I feel that martial arts are graded according to reputation. How to calculate the level of Dragon Elephant Prajna at the thirteenth level, and how to calculate the level of Sword Twenty-Three Level by Gaowu?

Okay, the subject matter is very novel and it's still very good.

How should I put it? It's weird to read. The early golden finger is very disconnected from the plot. It's probably a classic plot, but the plot doesn't fit with the golden finger. But it doesn't have any major problems in reading, so it's just a minor flaw. Then after reading about the appearance of Demon Demon King, it becomes more and more watery. The one-day experience card does not talk about the use before and after, and there are more than ten chapters of the plot. Let's read Lu Bu's appearance, four stars, and look forward to the next one 👍

Not bad, keep up the good work!