Transmigrating to Solaris as a Succubus Rover

I have read Chapter 16 so far, and the author is overwhelmed. The results of the system are not as good as those of A Piao from the same time period as the original plot. The fights all rely on changing the voice. Without the voice, A Piao's strength is far inferior to that of A Piao at the same time in the original plot, and even with the voice, he is still far behind. He is not like Long Aotian at all, and his combat power is not as strong as in the original plot. It belongs to the title party

My evaluation of my own novel is just a bunch of shit 🤦 because I don't know how to write a novel and I just want to pass the time. Although I have thought about the subsequent plot, but it may be very slow, so everyone can just watch it for fun. In order to preserve my self-esteem, I give myself a perfect score. I also hope that everyone can comment more and I will listen to everyone's advice and change it.

I don't want to say anything