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The ideas and creativity are very good and worth reading. Judging from the writing style and structure, he should be a novice writer. My personal guess is that it is assisted by AI. There is no problem with using AI. He should also work on the writing style. For example, metaphors such as nuclear bombs and batteries appear repeatedly in ancient wasteland and slightly gloomy immortal novels. It is really ridiculous. Frequent use of parentheses is not a good writing habit. In addition, the pace of the article is too fast. A 100,000-word plot was written in 10,000 words. It is like playing a game. In fact, there are many details and sub-plots that can be expanded, such as the beginning of the story: How does the evil-removing tool work? What tools are used? What kind of protective clothing do you wear? Is it possible to write many chapters by analogy with the plot related to Zhou Bapi? Instead of being killed after just a few chapters? What is the organizational structure of this cleansing agency? How is the surrounding environment? What is the relationship between the protagonist's family background and the bronze lamp? All the above problems can be placed in every new map where the protagonist moves. Another manifestation of this is "Come on the pillow when you feel like dozing off." Although the background of online novels is like this, it is indeed too deliberate and hasty. These adventures do not have to be like playing games, where you complete the level after receiving the mission. They can be placed in many long, intertwined plots. Secondly, there are too many God's perspectives. How does the protagonist know that it is a sword species? At the beginning of the story, the cleaners and even the little boss named Zhou Papi were all struggling at the bottom. Could it be that they didn't know what the iron piece was? Their hierarchy couldn't figure out what was normal. In addition, where did the protagonist learn his medical skills and those acupuncture techniques? Is the protagonist aware of the newly acquired skills? What did the osteoid spine tell him? Come on [Like][Like][Like] I'm optimistic about you

The author does scientific research in practical experiments during the day and codes at night. The pace of the plot in the front is too fast, but it is getting rounded in the back. I hope readers will understand me. Thank you for your support and criticism, which are the driving force for my progress.

This is the first time I have read a novel by the author. It is also the first time I have read a novel of this type. I really enjoyed reading it. The writing is very good and the atmosphere is great. I will follow it until the end. The author is very handsome! Looking forward to a meeting^⎚˕⎚^

Nice to watch, love to watch more [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][smile][laugh][laugh][smile][smile][smile]

It's pretty good. Nearly 10,000 words a day, and the update speed is also fast. But it feels a bit unreasonable at the moment. It's too coincidental that the protagonist starts practicing. I have almost everything I want. I don't know if it can be rounded out later.

Bold and novel setting The beginning is extremely exciting, and the character creation is very successful. As long as the back is not particularly ugly, this setting will definitely shine. It's just that the boundaries of strength are not clear. According to the gold cultivation realm, it's pretty good. But a dignified city lord who only showed the Evil Realm was actually killed by the Zhongjin Realm. Later, there was a level 2 peak demon elixir, which should belong to the realm of demon beasts. I hope the author can optimize this area.

The setting is good, the rhythm is good, and it has a bit of an AI flavor, but it is acceptable. Unfortunately, there are not many words. The protagonist is basically not frustrated. He must avenge himself, and it is not completely inhumane. It is good

Okay, the world view is pretty good

Very novel subject

It's quite crazy, but the logic at the beginning is a bit shaky, but the rest is fine, and it's delicious enough [eating melon]

The writing is very good. You can tell from the writing style that it is a new author. Come on.

It's super, super, super good-looking. It's different from other novels about cultivating immortals. It's very innovative, 👍👍👍

I personally think it's pretty good, the pace is fast, but it's too fast. Suggestion (slow down a little bit, otherwise you won't feel like you have anything to write later)

Okay, very pretty

Very well written

The characterization is very successful. Come on. It only took 10 chapters from being recommended by others to me recommending others. I hope everyone will work together to give the author motivation.

It's okay to look at it

The plot is quite novel

So far so good It feels like the author is running the article in AI. Can you be more careful in AI running? The asterisks have not been deleted. Can you delete them after copying and pasting? I can see it at first, because I also use AI to make reports for my courses, and the copy and paste also has this asterisk [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

Rich content and interesting plot

It feels good

The plot is not sloppy, good

The setting is quite novel

The imagination is ok. If it doesn't suck later, it will definitely be popular.

Keep it up and it will be the rare grass jelly for tomatoes, come on

This book was very enjoyable to read, it was so satisfying. I don't know why the rating is so low.

Although there are some pitfalls in some places, the main content is still quite crazy and pretty good.

Very, very, very well written

The new book is okay. The first dozen or so chapters are a bit sloppy. The later chapters after Blackstone City are very interesting. I look forward to updating them.

Very good and smart, no procrastination, no water marks. The storyline has ups and downs without so much nonsense.