This is a world without spiritual energy.
The immortals of legend have long since died out. Heaven has collapsed, turned to ruins, and been buried deep underground.
The only way to cultivate immortality is to become a “tomb raider.”
Dig up the remains of ancient immortals and implant them in your body; smash the bones of gods and demons to forge the foundation of your path.
Some fused with the severed claw of a true dragon and mutated into half-human, half-demon monsters;
Some swallowed a Buddha’s relic, only to be driven mad by the resentment within.
Gu Chen is a lowly evil-cleansing laborer, but he has a lamp in his hand.
Where its flame flickers, all evil retreats and all arts return to their origin.
A twisted being, no longer in the least bit human, appeared during one of his evil-cleansing shifts, holding aloft a “treasure that represents the supreme glory of the human race,” righteous to an almost wicked degree.
The ideas and creativity are very good and worth reading. Judging from the writing style and structure, he should be a novice writer. My personal guess is that it is assisted by AI. There is no problem with using AI. He should also work on the writing style. For example, metaphors such as nuclear bombs and batteries appear repeatedly in the ancient wasteland and slightly gloomy immortal novels. It is really ridiculous. Frequent use of parentheses is not a good writing habit. In addition, the pace of the article is too fast. A 100,000-word plot was written in 10,000 words. It is like playing a game. In fact, there are many details and sub-plots that can be expanded, such as the beginning of the story: How does the evil-cleansing tool work? What tools are used? What kind of protective clothing do you wear? Is it possible to write many chapters by analogy with the plot related to Zhou Bapi? Instead of being killed after just a few chapters? What is the organizational structure of this cleansing agency? How is the surrounding environment? What is the relationship between the protagonist's family background and the bronze lamp? All the above problems can be placed in every new map where the protagonist moves. Another manifestation of this is "Come on the pillow when you feel like dozing off". Although the background of online novels is like this, it is indeed too deliberate and hasty. These adventures do not have to be like playing games, where you complete the level after receiving the mission. They can be placed in many long, intertwined plots. Secondly, there are too many God's perspectives. How does the protagonist know that it is a sword species? At the beginning of the story, the evil cleaners and even the little boss named Zhou Papi were all struggling at the bottom. Could it be that they didn't know what the iron piece was? Their hierarchy couldn't figure out what was normal. In addition, where did the protagonist learn his medical skills and those acupuncture techniques? Is the protagonist aware of the newly acquired skills? What did the osteoid spine tell him? Come on👍👍👍Look after you
The author does scientific research in practical experiments during the day and codes at night. The pace of the plot in the front is too fast, but it is getting rounded in the back. I hope readers will understand me. Thank you for your support and criticism, which are the driving force for my progress.
This is the first time I have read a novel by the author. It is also the first time I have read a novel of this type. I really enjoyed reading it. The writing is very good and the atmosphere is great. I will follow it until the end. The author is very handsome! Looking forward to a meeting^⎚˕⎚^
It's pretty good. Nearly 10,000 words a day, and the update speed is also fast. But it feels a bit unreasonable at the moment. It's too coincidental that the protagonist starts practicing. I have almost everything I want. I don't know if it can be rounded out later.
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Bold and novel setting The beginning is extremely exciting, and the character creation is very successful. As long as the back is not particularly ugly, this setting will definitely shine. It's just that the boundaries of strength are not clear. According to the gold cultivation realm, it's pretty good. But a dignified city lord who had just shown the Evil Realm was actually killed by the Golden Realm. Later, there was a level 2 peak demon elixir, which should belong to the realm of demon beasts. I hope the author can optimize this area.
The setting is good, the rhythm is good, and it has a bit of an AI flavor, but it is acceptable. Unfortunately, there are not many words. The protagonist is basically not frustrated. He must avenge himself, and it is not completely inhumane. It is good
I personally think it's pretty good, the pace is fast, but it's too fast. Suggestion (slow down a little bit, otherwise you won't feel like you have anything to write later)
It's quite crazy, but the logic at the beginning is a bit shaky, but the rest is fine, and it's delicious enough 🍉
It's super, super, super good-looking. It's different from other novels about cultivating immortals. It's very innovative, 👍👍👍