Quick Transmigration: Every Western Male Lead Loses Control Over Me

I just watched the first world, it's a fine work, the plot is handled more delicately and the narrative is strong. It is no longer about the author letting the characters fall in love, but about letting the characters have souls and their own thoughts, and writing about love within reason, so that readers can understand why the characters slowly fall in love with each other, instead of finding that they suddenly fall in love as if they missed reading the article.

It's very interesting. I watched the story of Elena and Raphael in the first world. The writing is very good and it's not a very complicated story, but it is very touching. I came from the article on Quick Travel. The story of the killer and the dancer in it is very interesting. Sure enough, European and American articles are the author's comfort zone!!! Please write more, it's good to read.

Progress 1-5, Chapters 57-91, I jumped into a world without any interest. The first part of the second world is pretty good, starting from the heroine cleaning the bathroom and Hal's hair turning orange. The subsequent plot is highly similar to the animation. I hope the author can write a different plot from the animation in the future. In fact, I thought the author would refer to Hal's original work, but it turned out not to be, it was pure animation. Looking forward to the follow-up, don't cheat, don't end it, finish the review 👍

The writing is good and the heroine's character is good. I generally don't read this kind of story where the identities of the male and female protagonists are too different, but the author writes well. Elena's ambition and rationality make me think that she will go to a higher place. But what Elena wants is just a warm home, which is also quite good [full] Elena wants Elena to get it! ˶>ᗜ<˶

High quality, the male and female protagonists are well established, the plot is detailed and logical, and the writing style is also very good, not embarrassing (I only read the first story and didn't read the second one because I wasn't interested) Looking forward to the update [asking for updates]

It's so good. I finally found Hal on a tomato, okay. It's rare to see something like this. Although the name is embarrassing, the writing is really very good. Every part of the story is very satisfying, which makes me very happy. I'm not very good at writing book reviews. But I have to say it. The character of Hal's protagonist in this article is very well written. The characters and writing style are both very good! I hope to publish other full-length novels! Hayao Miyazaki's other male protagonists are like Hakuryuu's! Wish you a big hit

The second world is a pity. It was really amazing at the beginning, with the character of a female treasure, who finds a magic book in order to gain inheritance rights and hopes to counterattack. Now that the magic wand is gone, I have chosen love. In this case, it would be more in line with the character to come to this world accidentally from the beginning and choose to stay after falling in love with Hal. I plan to see how the first world is like

It's very interesting to watch. The first world is amazing. The writing is really good. I love watching it. Although some of the plots in the second world are a bit copied, the writing is really good. The main reason is that the male protagonist is Hal, the male god, and I rarely eat his food. I'm so greedy that I cry. And the teacher's writing is really good. The second world is not over yet. It's even. It's not enough. Teacher, I'm hungry, I'm hungry. I'm crying.

It's very beautiful. I feel that each world is very interesting. I just realized that I didn't give a five-star review. I'll give it a quick review, haha.

The first world is so beautiful. The main heroine is as tough as a vine, full of vitality and charm. The hero falls in love with the heroine easily, and the hero is also very good. Too secure, real men and women 😠. I just watched the first world and immediately came to support it. The following ones should be good too. The author's writing style is very good and he has a good grasp of the rhythm and character design. It's amazing 😳