Dragon Ball: Starting with Twelve Talismans, I'm Invincible

Not bad, the writing is quite comfortable, but we could use a few more female protagonists, including female Saiyans from the Tournament of Power, and angels. Two are too few, and a few more would be more motivational.

I finally saw the heroine Bulma. I can accept the introduction of the two heroines. It's not bad. Can you update it faster?,,, Dragon Ball's biggest regret is Bulma (personal thoughts) Vegeta is no match for Bulma

It's so beautiful. Anyone who has never eaten S can come and check it out.

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot

The writing is very tender, and there are some places where the left and right brains are fighting each other in the plot, but it is not a big poisonous point. The author is more careful in writing. The quality of Dragon Ball novels varies, but this is okay. The overall evaluation can be given 8.2 Points.

Haokang Haokang, Pig's Knuckle's strength has improved very quickly. It would be better to write more clips of Pig's Knuckle fighting. The author will update soon 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠 😠

It's good-looking. It's not just a battle novel. It has the warmth of home and the bond of companions.

I think it's okay, except for some loopholes, such as what happened to Raditz after he returned, and some small details are generally handled. The writing is always a bit biased, but it is really good as a refreshing article. Whether it is because of the feelings or the Dragon Ball filter, at least I can continue to read it.

It's very good. It's very good. It's very rare to give full marks to books. Just look at the 2 and 3 points I gave to other books. When I read the book, I could tell that the author didn't do it on a whim. He had an outline. He really understood Dragon Ball well, so it was very smooth and reasonable when I read it. Even if it is written along the lines of the original work, it has no ink and no writing, so the author should rush to update it. I don't want to abandon the book after a few days because the update is too slow. I saw the latest chapter, and as expected, it deserves my full marks. But I don't like to follow the serialization, so come on, author!

It looks good, and I think the transformation aspect is well written. But as far as I'm concerned 🤔, I don't really like Dragon Ball fandoms with multiple female protagonists, and the protagonist talks too much, so I prefer the direct ones, so I give it four stars 😄