Dragon Ball: Kongbei Is Making Soy Sauce, I'm Going Crazy

Not bad, the writing is quite comfortable, but we could use a few more female protagonists, including female Saiyans from the Tournament of Power, and angels. Two are too few, and a few more would be more motivational.

I finally saw the heroine Bulma. I can accept the introduction of the two heroines. It's not bad. Can you update it faster?,,, Dragon Ball's biggest regret is Bulma (personal thoughts) Vegeta is no match for Bulma

It's so beautiful. Anyone who has never eaten S can come and check it out.

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot

The writing is very tender, and there are some places where the left and right brains are fighting each other in the plot, but it is not a big poisonous point. The author is more careful in writing. The quality of Dragon Ball novels varies, but this is okay. The overall evaluation can be given 8.2 Points.

Haokang Haokang, Pig's Knuckle's strength has improved very quickly. It would be better to write more clips of Pig's Knuckle fighting. The author will update soon [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger ] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger]

It's good-looking. It's not just a battle novel. It has the warmth of home and the bond of companions.

I think it's okay, except for some loopholes, such as what happened to Raditz after he returned, and some small details are generally handled. The writing is always a bit biased, but it is really good as a refreshing article. Whether it is because of the feelings or the Dragon Ball filter, at least I can continue to read it.

It looks good, and I think the transformation aspect is well written. But as far as I'm concerned [thinking], I don't really like Dragon Ball fandoms with multiple female protagonists, and the protagonist talks too much, so I prefer the direct ones, so I give it four stars [laughs]

His pampered body was ultimately unable to withstand the invasion of this all-pervasive filth. After a period of desperate struggle and coughing, he was completely defeated and suffocated to death in this dirty and smelly cesspit.

It's very beautiful. It's very rare to give a perfect score to a book. Just look at the 2 or 3 points I gave to other books. When I read the book, I could tell that the author didn't do it on a whim, but had an outline. He really understood Dragon Ball well, so it was very smooth and reasonable when I read it. Even though it was written along the lines of the original work, there was no ink or writing. So the author should hurry up and update. I don't want to abandon the book after seeing the update in a few days because the update is too slow. I saw the latest chapter, and as expected, it deserves my full marks. But I don't like to follow the serialization, so come on, author!

I think the writing is very good. I can see that the author is very attentive. I also feel that the author himself is very excited about the writing. He knows the characters in Dragon Ball very well. It is comfortable to read without being embarrassed. This is one of the better Dragon Ball fan novels I have read. Good luck, author [note]

I think it's pretty good. I've collected Bulma and No. 18. At least it's not as good as other brain-dead novels written by other fans where the future time and space has not changed and was greened. This is a parallel future time and space in which Bulma is also the protagonist.

. Overall, the writing is pretty good. But Whis and Beerus are missing. This is incomplete. The most important thing is Sun Wuxiu's cultivation. It was all based on the anime he watched as a time traveler. I feel like Son Goku is resting on his laurels, and Beerus and Whis are an essential part of it. He can raise Sun Wuxiu's strength again. Although Sun Wuxiu learned that freedom is a sign, he can fight against the God of Destruction. But I feel like the guidance of angels is still missing. Moreover, Sun Wuxiu is now fighting against enemies on earth. I feel like it's not enough and he needs to participate. The Universal Martial Arts Conference.

The writing is quite good, but the progress is a bit fast. The story of Namek, which has more than 100,000 words, is over. That's all that can be written about Dragon Ball. I feel that it will be finished before I can write many words, or will it end in ten thousand worlds? But there aren't many worlds where content can be written using Dragon Ball's numerical values ​​[face covering]

I feel like it's a good read. It's really good. Come on, author.

The author knows the plot of Dragon Ball very well, and some of the settings are not messed up. This aspect is very good, and there is nothing poisonous about it. However, the writing style is quite satisfactory and needs to be improved. If you have read Dragon Ball, your experience will be much better when reading this novel.

The rat charm can create dragon balls, or make moves such as your Qigong wave come alive, and you can make it come alive and attack in a corner. The Snake Talisman can be turned into a blur because in the later stage, the ability of invisibility is no longer on the table. You can use Dragon Balls to strengthen the Monkey Talisman.

The dual heroines of Bulma and No. 18 Have strong protagonists and will not enter the God of Destruction line prematurely.

Don't look at it. I only read Chapter 5, but I highly recommend it. Fishing people are not only happy when they catch fish, but they are also people who have fun. They will also be happy when they see others blowing up their rods. Okay, I'll leave now.

(Do not brush the rating) The combat power has been improved very steadily. Dragon Ball is a cool novel (the plot is a little ink-stained) You can read it and give it a five-star support.

The logic is reasonable, there is no nonsense, and the plot is designed to make people want to continue watching.

Very interesting (✪▽✪) The plot is compact and not procrastinating, the plot has ups and downs, and the chapters are smoothly connected.

Not being brainless does not mean that the protagonist is a crushing opponent in every game. The personal charm of Kong Beibi in the original work is that he can stand alone. The protagonist can influence but cannot dominate. In addition to the plot structure, the protagonist should focus on his own affairs instead of trying to be a hero and insist on establishing the first world on earth. As for the image of Yi, I hope to shape him into a more chivalrous character in the future. There should not be too many emotional scenes. On the one hand, it satisfies your personal preferences. Essentially, everything in Dragon Ball is for fighting. In the original work, the old bird actually controls the emotional scenes very delicately. I hope you can see this.

The main character has a lot of personality. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

I haven't read such a well-written Dragon Ball novel in a long time.

I've seen Chapter 92 and it's pretty good, much better than other systematic Dragon Balls.

The world view is good, the plot is smooth, and the fighting descriptions are also good. It's worth watching.

Not bad, worth watching. The writing is solid and the plot is tight.

I give you a five-star review and give me the main plot of Macarita. No one has written about such a beautiful angel. One star, too much nonsense