The Gatekeepers Are All Land Gods. Are You Here to Break Off the Engagement?

The writing, rhythm, foreshadowing, and narrative are all very good.

Why is the score so low? The plot is good and the writing is also good. Although there are occasional cliche and mindless parts, it is much better than most cool novels I have read. I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 95, and I know why the score is low. In the past, one person could block 80,000 land gods. Now, a person who is the best in the world is actually stumped by 30,000 people. For the sake of this plot, I just made up a reason why in the early days of heavenly beings, they were afraid of cause and effect and could not kill people at will.

Everyone likes Bai Li. The author should give Bai Li more roles. Bai Li and the male protagonist are in similar situations. It would be satisfactory to be together in the end. Concubines are not concubines in vain. I think of Han Li and Zi Ling. It doesn't matter who the male protagonist likes. I like Bai Li. Bai Li's character is more likable, but others are fighting and competing for each other and are not likable. I just looked at Bai Li, and skipped all the ones without Bai Li.

I don't know how to comment, I just think the content suits my taste. The male protagonist has unparalleled martial arts skills, wisdom and bravery, and is unparalleled in beauty. There are many female protagonists, no vase, and the writing is beautiful and not procrastinating. It is worth reading! [Laugh]

The illusion of the mortal world should be formed after the inner desires of two people converge. Bai Li contributed the wish of "wanting to live a normal life with him", and Su Qingnan contributed the wish of "wanting her to not have to carry it anymore". Together, they became that small courtyard, that morning, and that phrase "husband." Touched by Bai Li's hobbies, there is no power and status in the illusion, no human emperors, no human roads, no bloody feuds, and even no cultivation. There is only Su Qingnan and their small family. Apart from this, there is nothing extra. She only needs him to be there. It is inevitable that he will fall in love with Bai Li! ! ! Why does Ying Yue love him? Because he is the only person who can make her feel worthy even after "abandoning her homeland, clan, and origin". Because he is powerful and worth the price of admission! Bai Li loves him because he is the only light in her broken world, and because of "who he is" - his character, his compassion, the way he goes against the grain but has the common people in mind! The prerequisite for loving him in the former is his ability, and the prerequisite for loving him in the latter is his person!

Yes, I like Bai Li [shy] [shy], Bai Li is my hope to pursue [laughing]

It's really good-looking, I like this type of protagonist and plot rhythm

My white moonlight is so painful [crying][crying][crying] I have been lonely for half my life. I thought I had found my destination but I am still lonely and helpless. I guard the southern border alone and give birth to children alone. I feel even more sad that I was alone in the wind and snow on the night of the New Year's Eve banquet. In "Bai Li", the male protagonist did not let down the world and the Taoist heart, but he only let down Bai Li, who was full of his heart and eyes. [Crying] Such an infatuated girl like Bai Li, who risked her own life for love, the author should make her sweeter, she is too bitter! Now that the heroine is dead, I have no need to continue watching [crying]

The writing is concise and the plot is compact. It has the style of Hong Kong and Taiwan martial arts!

It's okay. It's not as bad as what the comment section said. I like Bai Li. I hope this will turn her into a positive person and have a good ending.

Give it five stars [Like] I like this kind of novel about a battle of wits and courage, where everyone's IQ is online [Like] You have me among you, and you have among me

Very well written, keep going and don't stop! Come on, author!

I hope Su Qingnan and Bai Li have a good ending

Very good, I like Bai Li [smile][like][like][like][like]

It gives me a mixed feeling of AI and human touch, as if it was written by an agent like Mo Shu, but being able to write it so well shows that even if it is written by AI, there must be constant debugging by myself, full of [send heart]

I like Bai Li very much, but she doesn't appear much later, and Miss Bai is nowhere to be seen in the middle.

The writing is very good, with many layers. You can never see through the protagonist's cards. There are expectations, and there is no introduction to whether there is a system. It's all about guessing.

The writing is good, there are Jianghu, and there is truth, good!

The writing is good, it has the feel of a martial arts novel, and it's interesting.

Another masterpiece! ! Make strategic plans and win the battle thousands of miles away

It's interesting. I don't know why the rating is so low. It's worth watching.

The blocks are too new, too few. Come on.

Still a good article after all

The realm mentioned is so high. If one person goes over to destroy them, can't he just accept it directly?

The writing is good and the characters are described delicately.

This book is very good. It has many twists and turns. It is worth reading. The writing style is relatively delicate. This is the first book I have reviewed on Tomato. It is indeed good.

Who is the heroine? Who is the heroine? I like Bai Li and come here for Bai Li [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Very domineering novel The plot is also good

I think what I wrote is okay. Keep going. Come on.

With such a low score, it's worth reading for those who can't understand the score. I've been reading it for two hours now and I'm tired of reading it. It's really a book worth reading, so keep watching.