Northern Liang: A Land Immortal from the Start, and You Want to Break Off Our Engagement?

Everyone likes Bai Li. The author should give Bai Li more roles. Bai Li and the male protagonist are in similar situations. In the end, they can be together by their side. It's a complete success. Concubines are not concubines in vain. I think of Han Li and Zi Ling. It doesn't matter who the male protagonist likes. I like Bai Li. Bai Li's character is more likable. The others are fighting and competing for each other and are not likable. I just looked at Bai Li, and skipped all the ones that didn't have Bai Li. Suddenly I felt a little reluctant to come here. I saw that others had already gone to heaven, so I just updated during the day.

The writing, rhythm, foreshadowing, and narrative are all very good.

Why is the score so low? The plot is good and the writing is also good. Although there are occasional cliche and mindless parts, it is much better than most cool novels I have read. I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 95, and I know why the score is low. In the past, one person could block 80,000 land gods. Now, a person who is the best in the world is actually stumped by 30,000 people. For the sake of this plot, I just made up a reason why in the early days of heavenly beings, they were afraid of cause and effect and could not kill people at will.

Yes, I like Bai Li [shy] [shy], Bai Li is my hope to pursue [laughing]

I don't know how to comment, I just think the content suits my taste. The male protagonist has unparalleled martial arts skills, wisdom and bravery, and is unparalleled in beauty. There are many female protagonists, no vase, and the writing is beautiful and not procrastinating. It is worth reading! [Laugh]

The illusion of the mortal world should be formed after the inner desires of two people converge. Bai Li contributed the wish of "wanting to live a normal life with him", and Su Qingnan contributed the wish of "wanting her to not have to carry it anymore". Together, they became that small courtyard, that morning, and that phrase "husband." Touched by Bai Li's hobbies, there is no power and status in the illusion, no human emperors, no human roads, no bloody feuds, and even no cultivation. There is only Su Qingnan and their small family. Apart from this, there is nothing extra. She only needs him to be there. It is inevitable that he will fall in love with Bai Li! ! ! Why does Ying Yue love him? Because he is the only person who can make her feel worthy even after "abandoning her homeland, clan, and origin". Because he is powerful and worth the price of admission! Bai Li loves him because he is the only light in her broken world, and because of "who he is" - his character, his compassion, the way he goes against the grain but has the common people in mind! The prerequisite for loving him in the former is his ability, and the prerequisite for loving him in the latter is his person!

My white moonlight is so painful [crying][crying][crying] I have been lonely for half my life. I thought I had found my destination but I am still lonely and helpless. I guard the southern border alone and give birth to children alone. I feel even more sad that I was alone in the wind and snow on the night of the New Year's Eve banquet. In "Bai Li", the male protagonist did not let down the world and the Taoist heart, but he only let down Bai Li, who was full of his heart and eyes. [Crying] Such an infatuated girl like Bai Li, who risked her own life for love, the author should make her sweeter, she is too bitter! Now that the heroine is dead, I have no need to continue watching [crying]

It's really good-looking, I like this type of protagonist and plot rhythm

The writing is concise and the plot is compact. It has the style of Hong Kong and Taiwan martial arts!

Not bad, not bad, some of the dialogues are a bit long-winded. It's quite exciting, but the fights are more domineering and enjoyable [laughs] The male protagonist is a bit of a scumbag in the early stage, but after meeting true love, he is the only one, and he respects each other very much. You have the confidence to go forward boldly and I will know everything about you, a soul mate who you can understand with one look [admiration]. Hope there will be a good ending [top post]