You Were Supposed to Be a Tycoon, So How Did You Become the Ideal Man?

The book is very interesting, but there are too many female characters, which gives people the impression that they are reading a stallion novel. I hope that the appearance of female characters can be reduced and the appearance of some other characters can be increased. After all, the appearance of diverse characters gives people a different feeling than the appearance of too many female characters. Nowadays, to be honest, the subject matter of this kind of literature is good, and the book is very interesting, but the increase of female characters makes people feel like a stallion novel's perspective, which is the kind that shows mercy everywhere (the heartthrob series only targets the heartthrob physique of the female group)

Although there are some flaws in various descriptions, I feel very comfortable reading the whole article. There is no impetuousness and lavish spending in those great novels. I like the handling of conflicts and it is consistent. Unlike some great novels, which have a soothing rhythm in the beginning and are casual in the end. The plot is about entanglements with various beauties, endless conflicts, focusing on the description of luxury goods, regardless of food, clothing, housing, and transportation, and the rhythm changes before and after. It does not reflect the magnanimity of Shenhao. It may look very enjoyable, but after a while, it feels boring. The author's writing skills are still very immature, and some of the plot descriptions feel a bit deliberate. Of course, there are some inconsistencies and errors that can be corrected. I don't know how far the author can write. There is still a lot of room for growth, but the overall structure is quite good. Keep up the good work.

I think it's generally okay, but the emotional description is too uncomfortable. It's this place that makes me unable to stand it, you know? Just your description of the relationship, and the kind between you and a girl, I really feel so uncomfortable, it feels very deliberate, you know? You are like this

I found a specific point, that is, as long as the male protagonist travels and meets a female friend, there will definitely be a suitor around him, and his suitor will always look at others with contempt, which is a bit like the nouveau riche. In short, I feel pretty good.

First of all, I must say that this is a great book, although it is not finished yet. The author's writing is very strong, and the rhythm of the narrative is very appropriate, especially the male protagonist, who is calm, steady, gentle, and wise... Among these advantages, he is calm but not indifferent, wise but not showy, steady but agile, gentle but not sentimental, and he clearly knows what he needs. Each character appearing in the book has distinct characteristics and is described very accurately. The narration of events has a special, slow sense of continuity. This may be my personal perception. The author's writing seems particularly comfortable, well, at least it attracts me. As a middle-aged person who is about to enter his fifth year of school, I can also read it, and it can resonate in my heart and recall my youthful memories on campus. I have written a lot of things eloquently, and I would like to say one last thing, the author, your writing is indeed very good. I hope that the subsequent plot will not collapse, let yourself settle down, and polish the work to be even better! Come on!!!

Not bad. The protagonist's behavior is low-key and restrained. He is very charming. Keep it up.

Not bad. I really like the male protagonist with this kind of personality. Great support for the author.

It's pretty good so far, the updates are a bit slow, but it's better compared to other cool stories.

Personally I think it's very good

Well written! But there is a question, why have the protagonist's parents never appeared?