Demon Slayer: After Drawing the Sword, Everyone Was Amazed

The writing is super good. I was deceived by the title of the book at first. I thought it was about using coconut cake tricks and ninjutsu to cheat the ninja world. But after reading it, I found out that the protagonist has no other skills except the Sharingan. The ninjutsu rewarded by the system cannot be used because there is no chakra. However, I still like the character and attitude of the protagonist so I stuck with it. It perfectly recreates an ordinary person who has been in another world. He is confused, retreats, gives up, and has a change of mentality, and gradually becomes firm. The self-created breathing method is also very interesting. This is not about cheating every second from the beginning, but it becomes stronger little by little, and the body is really warm. However, the content of coconut cake is a bit low, except for the Sharingan. I hope that in the future, all Uchiha swordsmanship, Taijutsu and Mangekyo can be arranged.

Very nice to look at. There are no magical changes to the original characters, and no ghosts are added. In fact, I used to like watching ghosts, but joining the ghost camp and helping ghosts eat people feels a bit immoral, and it feels a bit like escaping from conflicts. (Personal opinion, but I still give partial approval to novels that include ghosts). This book describes the spiritual core of Demon Slayer, the inheritance of the times, and the endless spirit. The protagonist is also confused and thinking, and the character is very full. Moreover, reading the changes proposed by the author made me rethink the plot of Demon Slayer. There are indeed many shortcomings. The author values ​​the efforts of ordinary people, not a heroic view of history, but a people's view of history. The final result is the result of everyone's efforts, not Zhu's alone. This book incorporates the author's thinking about the plot, raising questions and making changes, which is great. Moreover, the plot advances very quickly, there are also emotional scenes, and the descriptions are delicate. In short, it is a work with thoughts, feelings, flesh and blood, and the heart of ordinary people. It's also very friendly to me who haven't watched Naruto. The eye only serves to strengthen the story, leaving little of Naruto's plot. And it is precisely because there are no powerful plug-ins that I can see the protagonist progressing step by step and changing step by step, rarely relying on the system. It also taught me some Japanese history. It turns out that Japan has had cafes so early.

I can barely be considered a bookworm. I have read more than 200 chapters. As for the evaluation, it is reasonable. Anyway, I will continue to read it. I will give it four stars. Five stars is because I have read a lot of books. For me, four stars is considered a very high evaluation. After reading a novel, you still need to use some brains. I say It's actually not possible to read without thinking. You will find that it's even more uncomfortable when you watch without thinking. Let me comment, in the first seven days, the author wants to express the protagonist's inner drama and create a realistic psychological state. If this situation is not written clearly, many people will not understand it, and they will not be able to get a sense of satisfaction.

It's very interesting. I don't understand why the score is so low. It grows step by step. From the beginning when ordinary people have to transform when faced with life and death, to the change of mentality in Butterfly House. Compared with other novels, this growth is more attractive.

It's good to watch, the love story between Mr. Cement Floor and Miss Shinobi (not). The introduction to the previous book was that Izumi Kiyokawa didn't even act and he and Butterfly Ninja were CPs. This one didn't mention CP intentionally but it was written with a lot of feeling. Of course CP is a highlight. The protagonist's character and experience are the biggest highlights. From the confusion when he first arrived at Demon Slayer, he gradually has his own goals after experiencing several life and death experiences. The self-created breathing method is also very good. The character doesn't have any OOC, it's just that the strength is suppressed too hard, and there is no chakra in the roll call. If you have a little chakra, you can just speed through without misfortune.

It must be given a 5-star rating. The protagonist becomes stronger step by step, which is very interesting to watch. Compared with works of the same type where the protagonist becomes stronger step by step, this work is not boring and interesting. The subject matter and content directly touch people's hearts. It is no exaggeration to say that if it were not for just over 100 chapters, this would be the ceiling for novels of the same genre (only this content). The shortcomings are that the author's writing style is a bit poor, but it doesn't matter. Ordinary old bookworms will not care about these. We usually focus on the development and content of the story. Well written, good luck to the author. A must-read for Demon Slayer fans! ! !

It's an amazing article. I couldn't stop reading it. How can I put it this way? This is what I like. The more you work, the more you get. There is no such thing as a time traveler who gets something for nothing because of the system. He becomes the world's number one self-pleasure article that makes people feel uncomfortable all over. The writing style is very solid, and the depiction of the protagonist is impressive. It is a little soft at first, but it has the unique characteristics of a time traveler and is unconvinced. So break through yourself and grow a little bit, which is the kind of growth that can be clearly felt. When I read the title, I thought it was a combination of Naruto and Demon Slayer, a very simple combination and crushing article, but when I opened the introduction, I saw a comment. She said it was an unexpected article. Don't be fooled by the name and introduction. The content is very good (I forgot the specific details, but that's probably what it meant). So I kept listening, watching, watching, listening. I was very happy and unbelievable. It was really a good article. I read Chapter 111 in one go. It was too late and I couldn't read anymore. After all, I had to go to work. When I wasn't working before, I could directly tie up a book, but now I can't, and I haven't written such a long review for a long time. This book really touched me. The tone of the article is established The writing stood firm The protagonist's characteristics and special personality stand out The supporting characters also fit the original work very well and were not altered beyond recognition. This is the great success of fan fiction ◔.̮◔✧ Like you ദ്ദി ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ )✧ I really can't stay up late anymore. I still have a lot to say, but I really can't. Goodbye₍˄·͈༝·͈˄₎ฅ˒˒

It looks good. There are not many or even very few Naruto elements. Most of them are original demon slayers. However, after a period of interruption, you can clearly see that it is a little anxious. The ending is a bit sloppy. It is not a bad ending but it is a bit mediocre compared to the previous parts. Some parts that can be written in detail are even brushed over, but overall it is still good.

It's beautiful, especially the ignorant and youthful emotions between the protagonist and Butterfly Ninja, which are like the feeling of being more than friends but not yet satisfied lovers. It's more like the feelings of first love. The performance of Naruto elements in the text is more auxiliary. The plot is somewhat original and the changes are not bad. This happy reunion dumpling makes up for the regrets in the original work. It is the first echelon of second works in my heart. I hope to maintain a certain level in the ending or extra chapter. Now I have caught up with the big army, author! Give me an update! ! ! [Punch out][Punch out][Punch out]

I sincerely recommend it. Among the Demon Slayer fanfics I have read, it is as good as Iibashira. It can be seen that the author's description of the protagonist is slightly lacking in some places, but the character image of the original character is restored very well, and the castrated version of the Sharingan is only half open. This kind of story that is not invincible and requires the protagonist to break through step by step is more suitable for the theme of Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba. The emotional development of the protagonist and Shinobu is also not abrupt. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it. In short, I highly recommend (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

Full marks. I have to praise the male protagonist's character. It's not as careless as in other novels. He just blindly collects treasures and makes abstract things. It just feels very comfortable and reliable. The plot is also very good.

The writing is very good. It was a bit slow when the protagonist was struggling in the early stage, but after that period of time, the feeling of satisfaction came out. The personalities of each character are also handled very well, and they all fit the original work. So far, it is a good fanfic.

It would be a lie to say that there are no flaws at all, but despite all the flaws, Tomato is a masterpiece. By the way, why do more than two thousand pages feel like a lot in the daytime, and I can read more than a hundred chapters for a long time, but why do I end it at night? [Crying] If you give me another chance, I will read more slowly. He didn't even make it to the second dawn [Crying]

Shennong: It's worth watching. Story-telling, growth-oriented, and well-written. If you get two of the three, you can conquer the world. Although this book is short in length, it is complete in content and fluent in writing. The second creation has a fresh feel and original story line.

Four stars, not for other reasons, but because the male protagonist is a Chinese time traveler. It would be too much for a Chinese to go back to that era and help Japan kill ghosts with his head in his hands. If it were an inconspicuous character in Demon Slayer who obtained the System to Kill Demons, there would be no such feeling of betrayal.

Why is the rating so low? The labor and management increase has been so severe. I don't understand why some people would give negative reviews. The beginning is a bit awkward, but later on, whether it is the concept, the character, the characterization, and the tenderness of the moment, it is all very good. The heroine may be a tolerant, and it is a semi-cool novel. There are many concepts and descriptions of the characters. I can only say that it is a great book.

This is a good Demon Slayer fanfic. There are very few Naruto elements and the Sharingan only takes up one title, but it does not affect the quality of this book. Those who want to watch Demon Slayer fandom can watch it, but those who want to watch Naruto's Dimensionality Reduction Strike don't need to watch it.

It's super pretty, very real, no exaggerated tricks!

The growth-type protagonist is very interesting every day. The most important thing is that the author is so diligent. He writes five or six chapters a day [laugh][laugh][laugh]. In terms of word count, nothing is a problem [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's okay, it's quite interesting. The protagonist is not invincible at the beginning, but gradually becomes stronger, but it is a bit faster in the later stages. In less than a year, the protagonist goes from having only the Sharingan to being able to defeat easily and without disaster. It's so fast. Although the title of the book contains Naruto, except for the three magatama elements, the text is basically full of demon slayer elements. Naturally, the hook is not too big. The protagonist is very powerful and talented. This article has a single female protagonist, but there is not much description. Except for the finale, the rest is not clearly stated, which can also be regarded as no CP.

Personally, I think the emotional line is very comfortable, which is why I keep watching it. In terms of Shinobu's relationship, unlike other novels, there is a very deliberate encounter and emotional development. Full score full score

I thought it was a story about an Uchiha brat who used ninjutsu to smash through demon slayers, but ended up using a reduced Sharingan. It was a bit slow in the early stage, but in the later stage I obviously felt that the author was improving, but I forgot about the ending. Shinobi's blood is poisonous, and drinking it after turning into a ghost will kill people, haha

I like this book very much. I have never read Naruto, but there are not many Naruto elements in the book. I like the character of the protagonist very much [Blow Kiss]. I also like the protagonist getting along with the Butterfly Ninja. Even if I am not a CP, I will recognize it. •᷄ࡇ•᷅ I am growing up very quickly. The author just dragged me into the camp of demon slayers and good guys, and I couldn't get out. Author, how long will it take for you to come back? Do you still go home for dinner? The author doesn't update, so I'll just go and finish reading the article (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎)

This book really gets better and better the more I read it, my emotions gradually get stronger, my mentality slowly changes from just eating and waiting to die, the more I read it, the more I become obsessed with it, it's great that the golden finger doesn't work, the protagonist relies on his own efforts and prophets to become stronger

Very good, don't be fooled by the rating and title

It's a really good novel. The protagonist won't be too strong, but he will be tempered by a little bit of failure in the follow-up. This is what I want to see grow up bit by bit and become a responsible and responsible person, instead of just taking it as fate.

I started reading it almost as soon as the author started writing it. I really thought it was pretty good, but could the author hurry up? [Crying] [crying]. I originally wanted to watch the finale directly, but I haven't read it for almost half a month and only followed three chapters, which was not enough.

Wow, there are no Naruto elements at the moment. People who have never watched Naruto will not be affected. I don't know if there will be Naruto elements later on. As a Naruto fan, I am quite looking forward to it. I like the character of the protagonist very much. It's very real. The psychological changes are quite natural. It's good-looking and doesn't feel like a cool novel. The protagonist is very humble (although he has grown up very quickly) and he doesn't feel uncomfortable about his ability to fight. Overall, it's a good story. I'll keep up with the updates [Chigua]

The setting is novel and very consistent with the original characters. The protagonist's cheats are not that powerful. Getting stronger is very logical. The writing is very realistic and also talks about the transformation from an ordinary person. The more you watch it, the better it gets. It's a slow-burning type. I really recommend it. It's worth watching. If you want to watch a fast-paced movie, you can jump ahead and watch it.

I read the latest chapter in one go, read the comments and express my opinion. I think the bad ones are thinking that the protagonist in the early stage does not know how to breathe, the Sharingan is useless, and I am still depressed and have no goals. The thunderous part at the beginning is very big, but I think it may be more real. How can anyone have their own goals in another world and know what they want to do, have the motivation and be able to execute it? Don't tell me that you can do it by traveling through time. There is a process. Although I personally feel that the author did not grasp the transformation part well and there are flaws. The other plot parts are just normal and cool, and there is no immediate invincibility. The progress of the protagonist is a process (I always feel that there are some shortcomings in creating new moves, but none of us really understand the professional knowledge, and there is no... I can write it and it is already very good to read) Regarding the Sharingan, some people feel that it is weakening the Sharingan. I think this can be regarded as the setting of this novel. Everyone has differences, and the Sharingan is also different. Moreover, this world does not yet have chakra, so it is understandable that the forms of expression are very different. The descriptions of the Sharingan that we know are all from anime or comics, but that itself is an imaginary world with too many differences and too many details that have not been perfected.