The Story of a Jianghu Boy Cultivating Immortality

I have read Chapter 77 so far. The setting is reasonable, not brainless, and not poisonous. You can eat it with confidence. The protagonist Gou Dao is no worse than Han Li, and the supporting characters are not brainless and have real emotions, and they are well described. The part in Chapter 85 was stupid. The villain was stupid and forced the protagonist to show off. The old gang leader who was above the seventh level of qi training must have been stupid and didn't decisively suppress it. It's okay to let the mortal grandson take action and lose face once, but let the protagonist take action the second time. First of all, everyone only knows that the protagonist is a mortal pharmacist with high martial arts skills. Since he dares to lose face a second time [vomit]

A very good mortal flow, no slap-in-the-face plot. The protagonist has a good personality. He is a well-behaved protagonist, decisive in killing, strategizing, and cautious. Of course, there are also shortcomings. There is no need for the author to arrange useless spiritual roots for the protagonist every time. Wouldn't it be better to get two spiritual roots and three spiritual roots? Do you have to be a waste stream to cultivate immortality? There is no need to go too hard to suppress the protagonist. Overall the writing is very good, the writing style is okay, neither good nor bad. The emotional drama is so-so. I hope the protagonist has a female protagonist, or no female protagonist, and the goal is to live forever. It's okay to have multiple beauties, but don't make it unclear.

I have read Chapter 65 so far. The plot is reasonable, the protagonist's character is good, and there are no brainless routines, which is rare. Although some plots still feel a little coincidental, that is, some plots are foreshadowed but still a little rushed, but the problem is not big. For example, the protagonist has reached the first level of Qi training and lacks skills, so the force of the Three Immortals Sect will be brought out immediately. , And a fairy master who is just getting started in Qi training appeared smoothly. The author has explained the reason in the article, so it does not seem poisonous, but it is still a bit stiff. Overall, it feels like a good read. The most important thing is that there are no clichés and plots that are annoying to read, and it does not overly suppress the protagonist or Long Aotian. It is a rare good book on Tomato. It's a lot worse at the back

It is a very good traditional fairy tale. The author has strong foundation and solid writing style. Although the pace is slow, it does not deliberately feed poison. It is smooth, natural and logical. It is a breath of fresh air in today's smoky tomato.

The previous writing was very good. I read the book review and almost gave up, but I still endured it. After looking at it, I found that there were no big poisonous spots, but many small poisonous spots. It's just that they are too deliberate in creating opportunities for the protagonist, and there are always plots where the character is stuck and rescued. Also, the part about the old gang leader was really vicious. Both of them were provocative. The old gang leader didn't kill those two people, and the reason he gave was very far-fetched. As for the Eight Spiritual Roots, I think it's okay. Others think that the male protagonist has some special talent that has not been discovered. I still agree with this treatment. In the end, there were no problems except for some plots that were too classic. There are a lot of minor flaws, but it looks good and worth recommending [I understand] The reason given for possessing the Requiem Pill is too far-fetched and I cannot accept it. Just take it and leave, but I can accept it [awkward laugh]

It's very good to watch. Although the plot is cliche, I just brushed it off when I thought it was going to be a bloody plot. This one is very good. It doesn't drag on, and the level is steadily improved. It's very reasonable. I haven't seen a heroine yet. I personally like it without a heroine. I hope it continues like this. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

So far, it looks good. The writing is very good and not verbose. I suggest you add some knowledge about herbal medicine and alchemy, which are included in many novels. This way the content will be much fuller and more readable than an empty book with no idea of ​​what to put in the grass and when to heat it. I hope to see the author become a master writer in the future More and more inner words and asides

I've read Chapter 237 so far. It's a slow-burning novel about ordinary people using waste materials to cultivate immortality. There's a golden finger on a jade plate. The writing is pretty good. The protagonist is decisive in killing, very resolute in his actions, a little partial, not too slapsy in the face, passers-by laugh at the plot, he is cautious and subtle, bold and careful. Of course, there are some details that are not handled well, and there are a few minor flaws in some places, but it doesn't matter. For those few plots, in fact, according to the golden finger function, there is quite a lot of room for manipulation. However, because it is a mortal who slowly cultivates immortality, some operations are not written, so the overall situation is a little suppressed for the protagonist and the realm of combat power. Otherwise, it will just become a cool novel, and it doesn't matter. Then I am not sure if there will be a female protagonist. Judging from the current performance, there is no female protagonist and no ambiguous emotional plot. I hope it will keep like this. Don't write about beauties, ambiguous emotional lines, or anything like that. This style is pretty good now

This book is a slow-burning book, with an unhurried and orderly pace, which makes people feel immersed in the situation. Learning Chinese characters, recognizing medicine and making medicines feels very real. It is very similar to reality, and we have learned a lot! Looking forward to more excitement in the future!

I think first, the three views are better. In this virtual world where you can vent at will, you can maintain a civilized heart, which is very valuable. Second, it looks better, many settings are more reasonable, and things develop more reasonably. There are not many online articles that people can read now. It's so difficult for people not to forget their original intentions!

It is a very interesting mortal novel. You can see that there are shadows of mortals cultivating immortals in the front. In the middle period, it begins to have its own characteristics. The style is relaxed and the sect friends are full of human touch and friendship. It is not the kind of dark novel that hates heaven and earth. Overall, it is relaxing and enjoyable to read! Good novels can bring good emotional value👍

It is relaxed and casual, with a bit of fighting. You take action when you need to, and it is absolutely unambiguous. This is a relatively good article. Now I just hope that He Yao will appear in the end. It would be great to be able to advance and retreat with the protagonist, because I have read so many fairy tales. Generally, the heroine appears in the early stage. It will not appear again in the future, or the male protagonist has a harem. I hope this is not the case in this book, because the current male protagonist is very well established, but if it collapses in the later period, then I will fill in a follow-up review. I hope it will not disappoint me. I seem to be able to see the next one, a tomato book, come on.

There are basic mortals, and the plot progresses reasonably. Unlike some fairy tales, there is no mortal section at all, or the mortal section directly transitions to all monks, and there is no logical thinking at all. In addition, I also read Xia and Youqing (both family, romance, and friendship), which is a rare and good novel.

Worth 9.5 Points, it will get better and better in the future. First of all, it is not brainless. The views on technology are logical and strong, the strategic framework is good (big scenes,) the tactics (writing and dialogue) are consistent with the identity, great! Excellent, in short, the writing and plot are at the level of the author of Fu Dao! The best novel about cultivating immortals that I have ever read, Jingdian!

Very good, the writing is delicate, and the protagonist is well portrayed, but the update is a bit too slow, please speed it up, author

A masterpiece among the book shortage! I just love reading Duolingen's novels! Let Fairy He be the heroine! Pig's feet, please develop your own gang, after all, that is the starting point of your immortal destiny! Nothing without gangs!

When I saw Chapter 124, they all ended in the first paragraph. They were well written and quite enjoyable to read. For the time being, I have not been seduced by Duan Ping, and have written exciting and explosive novels. Most novels, as they are written, cannot withstand the excitement of young and inexperienced readers, forcing the protagonist to stand out.

I won't go into too much detail, but in the world of Tomato novels, it's invincible, so I won't feel frustrated after reading it. Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking!

It's a very traditional fairy tale. I originally thought that Zhao Mingxuan at the beginning would be a villain who would make the protagonist slap in the face, but I didn't expect that he would be a positive character. After reading it for a while, I feel that there is no big problem. It's pretty good. Keep up the good work, author.

I saw that there were only 55 chapters left in one night, and it was daybreak. There was basically nothing wrong with it. It was mainly a little bit toxic in terms of emotion and strength, but it didn't affect the viewing experience. It could go on naturally. If there are more branches, it would be a top-notch traditional fairy tale. Of course, the above is just my personal opinion. After all, I have been an old bookworm since I was in junior high school and now am a senior. It is not bad to eat too many new products and occasionally eat old things. The reason why many people give it low ratings is basically that it is too boring. There are no good waves and refreshing points. This is understandable. There is another thing I almost forgot, that is, there are too many coincidences and too many special arrangements, but they are possible but limited. . . . . . . So I'll cut it off after commenting.

Every conversation here is very polite. It's like saying "kiss" to customer service, like it's said by the same AI. It's well written but tasteless

It's quite good. It's considered very strong among the mortals. The fighting is well depicted. So far, I haven't seen any reversals or immersive life-and-death crises. It's more casual. Most of the people I meet are good people (finally, it's not the kind of underworld cultivator). It would be better if the villains were portrayed stronger and had more wits.

The first 20 pictures are quite exciting to read, I hope they can continue to be maintained in the future. Anyway, I have the feeling of a mortal and it is very comfortable to read. I don't know about the rest. I hope it can be more realistic and not so brainless.

It's very well written. I haven't seen such a well-written book for a long time. The protagonist is cautious, ruthless and decisive in killing. It's very good. The plot is reasonable and the language is concise. Damn, it's so poorly used, rubbish vocabulary. Winning the championship is a misnomer. There was no such thing as a championship in the past. It should be winning the championship. Still the champion and runner-up, do you think the Olympics will be held? If you don't expose the Silver Monkey, you don't have to worry about it at all. If you do, you probably won't need to write anything. The writing is getting worse and worse. First of all, he reveals that his alchemy ability is extraordinary, his weapon refining ability is also extraordinary, and his fighting ability is extraordinary. The writing is just to tell everyone that he has a big secret. Yuanying and Huashen have come to arrest you a long time ago, and they also make you yell. There is also a treasure hunt with others, which turns out to be a nanny. She has a complete Madonna persona, relying on the halo of the protagonist, otherwise she will die. This is completely subverted from the protagonist's previous persona of being decisive in killing and protecting himself. It is really unreasonable.

It's okay, you can watch it, I don't think there's anything bad about it personally (oh, I suddenly remembered that the setting of the protagonist's eight spiritual roots, I'm a little convinced), although he has eight spiritual roots, his cultivation speed is not slow, well, the author's writing is okay, the plot is relatively flat, the protagonist is relatively lazy, it can pass the time

It's a very traditional novel about cultivating immortals. It's quite cliche when it comes to objective evaluation. It's boring to find resources for cultivation, but I can see that the author is very attentive, and there are no typos or logical problems. There's no problem with being a good book. Moreover, the author always uses foreshadowing to make me want to read on. The emotions are also relatively real and heartwarming, and the characters are not deliberately written to death to make people sad. Overall, it deserves a good rating, but it's still a little short of 9 points.

I've read more than a dozen chapters, and so far it's pretty good [like][like][like]

Finally, there is a novel about the harmony between brothers and sisters, without intrigues.

The rating is low, but it's still quite comfortable to watch, and there's nothing bad about it so far!

Novels about cultivating immortals are interesting and I like to read them.