Douluo: I Became Kamisato Ayaka

Changes to a hundred, the writing is excellent, the description of women's clothing and female bodies is perfect, and the description of female abduction is zero. It's a rare Douluo fanfic where the female protagonist is the attacking side. It's a pity that due to copyright issues, this book has a limited time. Please read and cherish it. The author paid great attention to avoiding the names of the original people and can use homophones instead. This book is full of descriptions of battle scenes, side descriptions and scenery descriptions are in place, and the emotional lines are silky smooth. Although the time is not detailed, it is still very sweet, and the writing is worth collecting. Looking forward to the follow-up plot!

I thought it was very interesting. The protagonist traveled through time and became Ayaka Kamisato. She was born in the Far North and received the inheritance of the Ice God. She met Tianmeng at the beginning, and then convinced the two ice and snow to lead them in the Far North for four years. The Soul Emperor came out of the mountain and went directly to the Ice and Fire Eyes. Dugu Bo killed him directly, without a single Click on the dialogue; I met Qian Renxue in Tiandou, and then went to Shrek to kill Fatty. I kept talking to Qian Renxue until I participated in the competition. As a member of Wuhun Temple, I killed Tang Hao and Gangzi. The latest plot was a fight with Qibao and his group [the protagonist seems to be 14 years old]. Generally speaking, this god Ayaka is very decisive and has high combat power. She only has different emotions towards Qian Renxue. The whole book is very fast-paced and I like it very much. One thing is that the plot is too fast, what should I write next? I also read other reviews. The ones about Collapse Iron World, Dou Er, Dou San, etc. Are all pretty good. Good luck to the author! ! ! ! ! ! !

Well, how should I put it? It is obvious that he is a novice author and the pace is fast, which is also normal. After reading more than 20 chapters, I feel that the writing style in the front and the back has actually improved a lot. I remember that one dialogue took up almost half of the chapter. But to be honest, it is quite difficult to write about the social life of the characters in the novel. This kind of thing requires accumulation of experience. At least it's much better than my elementary school writing style. (And the author is not allowed to finish it so quickly, not finish it, not finish it!!! Say important things three times, say important things three times, say important things three times!!!) Regarding follow-up ideas: First, go to Dou 2, Dou 3, and Dou 4 (Dou 1 can almost make people crazy, you can refer to settings such as parallel universes), or go to other worlds such as Dou Po Secondly, I'm not the author, so why do I think so much? See whatever you want, you want to go!

Hope someone likes it

Although it has nothing to do with the characters, it is very comfortable to watch

Tomato has never seen such a pure invincible article.

Fortunately, it's a bit awkward to rise too fast, and it's difficult to make the book longer. It feels like it can be finished quickly [thoughts]

Finally saw Linghua's one

Good looking. In my opinion.

Really confident, even a little crazy. It looks pretty good if you lose your brain.

I just like watching this kind of thing, but I'm afraid it will be difficult to finish [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

It's good-looking, the aloof heroine is invincible and not pleasing to the eye. She will kill her whenever she wants. She will marry Xue'er as my wife. Keep updating more.

Invincible, just feel good [laughing evilly]

It's really good

Ling Hua, what happened to 5 stars?

Encourage it, then taste it

Maybe I'm crazy, I can't do anything

This shouldn't be the case. Changing the map would at least prevent Yuri from controlling him.

Did the author forget about the system?

Is the protagonist a double martial soul or a single martial soul? I watched half of it but didn't realize it.

How long has this been under review? It hasn't passed yet.

It's okay, it says on the front that it still looks very cool, defeating all the classic strong men in Douluo. It depends on how it develops in the future, I'm looking forward to it.

This should be my first time writing. The idea is good, but I'm a little anxious. I'll give it 4 stars first, and leave the remaining one star to the author who improves his writing skills [Thoughts]

As. It's fast-paced, exciting, invincible, and short. You can read it, but it's too fast and I can't keep up.

Just read it as a love story, it's so sweet

Awesome, the main character is a pure god of war, he is decisive in killing and the interaction with Qian Renxue is okay, but the stakes are a bit high¿ , the story pace may be a bit fast, all are killed. Overall it looks good

Invincible flow, fast pace, no procrastination, cool writing