Tutorthis System Is Not Quite Right

I really like this book. I was always put off by the introduction because I felt that the content would be extremely embarrassing. When I read the introduction, I felt like I was back to 10 years ago when I was writing about a group-hating genre (kneeling down to apologize orz But because I'm in a literary shortage recently, I thought I'd take a look, and maybe I'll get some unexpected surprises. At worst, I'll stop reading when I see something interesting, because I don't read most books like this, and then I couldn't help but read it all the time. I finished it in one go two days ago. I can only say that it's very, very interesting, the plot is very delicate, and I don't think there's anything particularly OOC about the character. I actually like the heroine's character too. Maybe it's like when I read other people's comments before, the only controversial point is the heroine's attitude towards the male protagonist of the hot-blooded manga. This may be the most obvious, so it was brought up. In fact, when I read it before, I always felt that the heroine regarded everyone as her own to complete the task. NPC, but the heroine is very moral, like protecting girls' reputations, so when I saw the controversial plot, I personally thought it was nothing. After all, the hate value was clearly added. Of course, after the quarrel, the attitude changed later, which I think is really great. I think the heroine's character really pokes me, and she will use various means to achieve what she wants to achieve. Of course, this does not mean that she has done anything bad. On the contrary, the heroine has always respected girls in the so-called task of promoting relationships, and the heroine is also very smart. When that note appeared, I twisted in bed. I really like this book! I don't like to leave book reviews, but the author's writing is really great. I am the only one who has left a long review in so many years of reading. I hope the author will not stop updating and I want to keep reading! ! ! The author's writing is really, really good! ! ! And there is absolutely no bl that is really high! ! ! God knows how many times I have been deceived by copywriters in other novels, and I am looking forward to the following plots more and more! (I am especially looking forward to the campus festival, and I wish that Kiki would participate in one of the activities>w<I want to see Kiki the maid/Kiki the butler/Kiki playing ghost in a haunted house...

Overall rating: Excellent A++ The heroine's character traits are better than I expected. She is very vivid and has a sense of life, which surprises me. The image structure of other characters is also very good, and I personally feel that there is no OOC at all. The plot arrangement is very good and the rhythm is very stable, but the progress is a little slow. However, if the content updated in the future can maintain the current high quality level, it is a small flaw that can be ignored and can even become a major feature. Summary: The author's writing skills are good and the quality is considered very high. It can be included. Personal suggestion: I hope the author, Lao Da, can maintain high-quality writing and a stable rhythm, and fill in all the foreshadowings he has buried. I strongly support it! The author's writing skills are still as good as ever, or even improved. I just wanted to say that the author was too obsessed with the CP portrayal he wrote, so we started to push the plot, and the plot was really just right (just before I was ready to complain. The War of the Ring chapter is wonderfully written. Even if it directly describes the scenes of the original work, it still makes people feel very immersed and exciting, without feeling that the plot is superficial at all. The plot of the future chapter is really unexpected, too twists and turns, and one foreshadowing is missing one after another. I hope it will all be made up in the later stages. The description of the future chapter makes people watch with caution, and the sense of crisis and tension in the original work is very well described. And I can't guess how the plot will advance in the future. This subtle sense of unpredictability is really exciting.

Needless to say, it's great. Xikui's character design is very interesting to my favorite cute little animal heroine (?). In addition, this book has all-direction warnings and clear cp splitting, which is very helpful for me to see the results of all-direction and other cps. I feel that the teacher will develop the Lily route (after all, he is an all-rounder). Ignore Xikui, you are the woman among women, so I must take a bite of Xikui. The scene between Kyoko and Kurom feels like there is an ambiguous line about girls, but at the same time, the teacher's suggestion that Xikkui will have a fiancé in 10 years is also very intriguing. After all, 10 years later, Xikkui tries on a wedding dress not only to help Xiaoharu, but also maybe she really wants to get married. After all, her fiancé also said not to forget our wedding. Coupled with her fiancé's speaking habits, she was already 80% certain to be Bai Lan. I look forward to the development of Shiraki Line and hope this book will continue to be good. The teacher also updated at almost 11 o'clock in the morning and wished the teacher good health. Finally, I want to say, can I eat all Hikkui for the rest of my life?

Very nice tutoring text. The heroine is like a little sun. Although the sun also has a dark side, she unintentionally warms the people around her, but cannot shine on herself. Sawada Tsunayoshi and others want to keep her like male ghosts. The author writes it very carefully, which is equivalent to reviewing tutoring again. I'm looking forward to what will happen when the heroine disappears or returns to her own world. . The heroine has a natural black look, and Skylark gave her a second button. Her system rewarded her with a lot of money, so she took off all the buttons of Skylark's school uniform, which was so bold. Sometimes it's a bit embarrassing, because the heroine's character is a bit middle-of-the-road, and she gets irritated for no reason, but then she finds it funny, and you can see in the comment area other people who share your embarrassment with you. . All in all, it is human nature to fall in love with the heroine. Who can refuse a sun that praises you, takes you to heart, is rational and strong, firmly knows his goals, and has principles. However, no one can own the sun alone, and you may get burned if you get too close.

It feels like an old author from JJ. His writing style is mature and he has a good grasp of the rhythm. However, the word order is confusing in some places. Overall, it looks good. The protagonist is very charming. The picture is superb

Nice! ! ! ! After all these years, I still like Little Sun's girl, the heroine! ! You deserve to enjoy the Ancestral Temple! The character creation of the heroine is completely worthy of being a heartthrob, because I was also fascinated. I feel inferior because I don't have Kiki's eloquence and I can't get Kiki. I was also fascinated by Kiki's magic. You are so good, author. The dialogue with the Chairman is heart-warming. Although I don't know if there is CP, but Chairman, I support you, 99.

To be honest, I read it several times. I wasn't very interested in reading the introduction before. Today I happened to have something to do and I had to take the high-speed train for a few hours. I happened to read it again and glanced at the comments, which piqued my interest. Fortunately, I didn't miss it. Although at first glance, the introduction gave me the impression that I was tired of joining the group. I originally thought that I would hate both Gang and Gang. Would the character of the protagonist be terrible, or would he have to do a lot of outrageous things? But it turns out that the character of the protagonist is not bad either. Hating is more like an emmm taste? But there is no character breakdown at all. It seems relatively easy. Also, please, the author, please continue to update (if you can update four chapters like this every day, let other readers act as your bullshit, let me draw double yellow cards, win the lottery, and pass every exam [crying])

It's tied in two days. It's so happy to see such high-quality tutoring in 2026! The heroine obviously has a great personality, I really like the interaction between her and the children, it makes my heart melt.

The heroine is a very sunny little girl who knows how to praise others. It doesn't look very awkward, and it's sweet. Although there was a bit of that at the beginning, when it comes to pioneering land, feelings have to accumulate. Is he a heartthrob? At present, only half of the group pets can be seen.

The plot of this book tends to be light-hearted, and the details express the emotions of the characters from daily small things. The heroine is original, and the character is relatively out-of-the-box, but there is care in her carelessness, which made me deeply appreciate the charm of the heroine. I am about to fall in love with the heroine, Mo Mo Mo [flying kiss] and as a fan article, the basic characters in it There is no OOC in this book, which is worthy of praise [Send heart] I hope the teacher can follow you more during the winter vacation. I read more than 90 chapters of this book in one day [Please update] Teacher, don't tire yourself, and don't let yourself be free₍•ʚ•₎•ʚ•₎•ʚ•₎[KISS][Love]

It's nice to watch, and I feel like the origin of the protagonist is very mysterious. I was asked to do a task before, and it felt a bit forced, but the author's writing style resolved this very well and made it very relaxed and funny.

It's super good-looking, and everyone's personality is restored, and the heroine is a natural and charming person. She is a real heartthrob with super personality and charm. Although she has a certain self-destructive mentality, she still lives a small and sunny life, and the tasks are not deliberately and embarrassingly completed. It is completely logical according to the development of the plot. It is super good-looking! !

It is a very daily-type novel. It is currently more light-hearted and very interesting. The heroine has a very cute personality. She is a little bit big but not destructive. She is very emotional.

In the 800,000-word serialization, five stars represent encouragement. I haven't read Tutoring, and I haven't read many Tutoring fans. I can keep up with the author's rhythm a little bit, but I can't tell whether some of the plots are from the Butterfly Effect or from the original work. Except for major events (the initial time travel adaptation period and the battle for the ring), it is basically written in a chapter-by-event format, which may not seem coherent enough, but the theme of each chapter is relatively clear. The protagonist is a bit smiling and depressed, and has the feeling of being a popular lover (meaning he has become the Prince Charming in the minds of most girls). He is very funny and outgoing every day, but he doesn't care about his own life (he seems to have reconciled with himself at the moment, but he suffered a major blow the next second). Ooc I suspect there is, but I haven't read the original work, or even the fans, so I won't say anything about it. The disadvantage may be that the update is slow, the author writes slowly, come on! I'm looking forward to the ten-year chapter, but I've only started the prelude now. Also: I support Tsunayoshi! (The protagonist is like this, I can't control myself)

It's a very interesting novel. The heroine has a very good personality, very funny, but also very reliable. I like her energy and complaining about the emotional line. The author also grasps the emotional line very well, haha. Anyway, I see whoever the heroine gets along with, I will knock whoever [laughs] [laughs]

Where can I find such a high-quality tutoring article? It's really good to read. The author's writing is very strong, the story is interesting, and the heroine's character is also very lovable (by the way, can the author introduce more scenes with Skeleton and Skylark?

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This article is too awesome. . . Maybe it will be a little awkward in the early stage, but it really gets more exciting as it goes on! ! ! ! Everyone and Xikui are so cute! ! ! Xikui is an angel [Sending Hearts] is really beautiful. . . Please all of you please read the goddess's articles for me. . . Goddess, I am your fan! ! ! Please be more diligent! ! Goddess, thank you for your hard work! !

It's very interesting. The protagonist's behavior is normal. Don't be dissuaded by the annoying slut in the introduction. There is nothing objectionable or abnormal about the behavior in the article. The writing is very smooth and the development is very reasonable [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Overall rating: A++ Don't be persuaded to back off by the introduction! The writing style is more everyday. Kiki is a natural flirt and is gentle to everyone. She is a very good baby. Now she has even reached the ring. Kiki is an outside consultant.

Very very very invincible and beautiful! Everyone portrayed her very well, and Sister Bao is also very smart. She is troubled, boring, and lively, and maybe she is also dark, which makes her the best. Sister Bao is taking care of everyone, and everyone is also taking care of her. Our sister Bao will definitely continue to grow up in love.

Ouch, it must be given a five-star rating! I must praise your wife for her article. Both the character and the plot are very interesting. I will follow her to my death ∠(°ゝ°) Salute!

Wow wow wow, it looks so good, I love my little sister, little Taiyang! But I feel like there are knives buried in the back, especially with the Skylark line, please teacher! It must be the ending [cry][cry][cry]

I have tied it and started the second brush. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot. I have read Tutoring fanfiction many times in other software in the early days, and I was pleasantly surprised when I first encountered it on Tomato. When I clicked in to read it, I read the introduction and was not very interested, but after reading the comments, I felt that it was pretty good and started reading it. I am very glad that I clicked on the first chapter and read on, otherwise it would be a pity to miss such a well-written Tutoring fanfic (I personally think the author writes well, and I really like to watch Yixiang's heartthrob). The original character's personality is also well controlled. Kiki is a super charming girl, she deserves to be liked by everyone. And although it is said to be a guide type, it is not the kind of simple guide favorability, and Kiki did not take any special actions to obtain it because she wanted to guide it. It was natural to increase the dislike value, protection value, forgiveness value given by the system in the process of getting along, which is very fun. The plot follows the line of the original plot, but it does not directly copy the plot of the anime and manga, but It's very fun to write the plot of Kiki and others. The daily chapters are very fun. Kiki gets along with everyone very naturally, but Kiki is a piece of wood, only flirting (even she doesn't think it's flirting, but just getting along with each other on a daily basis, but everyone's favor gradually increases) without emotion. Hahahaha, so it's hard work to like Kiki. Now it's the Ring War, and I'm looking forward to the follow-up development. I'm even more looking forward to the plot after Kiki returns to her own world. Hehe [shy] [shy] It will definitely make sense then.

It's so well written. I actually like this kind of nonsensical comedy. Of course, boss, the logic and character design you wrote are totally fine. Oh, damn it. It was so painful to tie the knot accidentally, but it was well written and made me so happy⩺_⩹

! ! ! It's super beautiful, sisters, don't miss it! Already tied, the emotional line is very cute, everyone is very cute, the heroine Qiang Qiangqiang is very cute, the only thing I am not satisfied with is that the author's updates are unstable and not enough to read [shy][shy][shy][shy]

2026 When I see my fellow tutors, I feel like it's the same night and day. The popularity of tutoring is actually very low now. Ten years ago, there was an explosion of fandoms, and the popularity was also very high. It is not what it used to be. Therefore, seeing that there is relatively little data but 80+w words of tutoring fandom, I really can't help but encourage 5 stars! In terms of reading experience, I actually really like 18's line, probably because I think Lielang is afraid of stalking women (he is suitable for a home-invasion-robbery love) and the others are also pretty good. In fact, I think the relationship before entering War of the Ring was a bit youthful under the daily flow. The feeling of Japanese light novels had a lightness and youthfulness, but it stopped a bit abruptly when I read the copy of War of the Ring. It's not that the writing suddenly got worse, it's just that the atmosphere and feeling are different… I prefer the previous feeling. Then I saw that the author said that 500,000 words had been written, and I was surprised. Is it so fast? In this article, I feel that I prefer some of the author's own original clips and settings that interact with other characters. For example, each person has different identities and tasks, which is very interesting! But following the original plot is still a bit awkward, but if the fandom doesn't write the original plot, it seems like there isn't much that can be written. I'm still reading, and the author is still updating. I also think that if I can write it down, it might really be a 100+w work. It's very large. Fans generally can't write such a long one. I'm really looking forward to the extra chapters for each character. (Speaking of extra chapters, it feels like the main text is mixed with extra chapters, which is a bit jumpy. It feels weird to put the extra chapters up when I'm not familiar with the character bond. Maybe it can be placed in the last volume?) Tied Chapter 310! The boredom of War of the Ring is a thing of my past! I got my passion back after ten years! But it stopped suddenly [crying] I want to see the follow-up. Everyone looks so good ten years later.

The heroine is a huge, stupid heartthrob who is very good at flirting. Some scenes are quite embarrassing for me, such as the mission requiring her to confess her love in public, but after watching the heroine's confession for a long time, she became desensitized and even became a little excited.

It's delicious. Does having one more goddess count as growing up? Call me greedy. I hope Li Baoen will return to his original form in the future. It will definitely be very effective in the show. The reaction of the protagonist and Gangi will be interesting. Looking forward to a wave.

It's so beautiful and the setting is very interesting. I love the character of the heroine's baby. It's not enough.