After Traveling Through Time and Becoming a Spiritual Dragon, You Told Me That You Still Want to Take Care of a Baby!
穿越成袓灵龙你跟我说还要带娃！
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 240k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- European Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 3d ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
88Reads
85Chapters
13Listens
3.6kReads · all time
The plot needs to be improved, and the sentences need to be broken up appropriately, but overall it's pretty good.
The flow of sentences is better than before, but the plot develops a bit too fast. The plot is a bit confusing at the beginning, but it gets much better at the end. It's just that the identity setting of the protagonist is a bit easy to mess up. As for the plot, you can still read it without thinking, at least for now, since not much has been written yet. It seems that there is not much difference from the previous ones. Many of them are in long paragraphs without any sentence breaks.
It's really super, super pretty. Really good.