The Empire Cast Me Aside, the Black Tower Welcomed Me, and the Sentinels Knelt Before Me

Progress 102, ① At least 9 elements of this book and a certain book are highly similar ② The heroine's social character and all-round actions basically come from AI, so much so that the common sense cuo'wu written by the author himself breaks this character ③There are many redundant descriptions, for example: the basic information of the four sentinels appears many times. But it didn't play the role it should have. At least I still don't remember what they are called, I only remember the animals. But there are also advantages: ① The heroine is not afraid of reptiles, she really likes them, and she doesn't squeal in the same way. ②The habits and appearances of various animals are written in great detail, including the characteristics that appear on the sentry body. I watched it for so long just because of the animals. Four stars belong to cute animals❤❤❤ Don't mind these recommendations [like][like][like]

It's really nice and beautiful, especially the back! It's not a whistle in the traditional sense. It's not the kind where you just lick your furry hair, get some spiritual guidance and then fall in love with it. The heroine is particularly charming, calm, gentle and powerful... I really like the heroine! Her character is really kind, but not the kind of Madonna. She considers things and has ideas for her own benefit and protection. The male protagonists are not like the routine of falling in love with each other as soon as they come. The emotional line is slowly developed. It doesn't give people the feeling that I will fall in love with a good guide just randomly, but through understanding and contact, I discovered that the female protagonist is such a guide lady who is worthy of admiration, belief and love. The part that is being serialized now describes the command of rescuing whales. It made me cry. I secretly wiped away my tears late at night. It is a very good work, the rating is really worthy of improvement, and the writing is particularly good. Hey, the names of the male protagonists and male supporting characters are all crooked names! It's hard to remember~ The screenshots are being transferred to the album slowly...

It's so uncomfortable, I'm looking forward to the next chapters, but I can't stand the current one. The writing is too detailed, everything needs to be described in detail, and some things can even be brushed off in one stroke. I understand the author's feeling of wanting readers to be immersed in the scene, but he tried too hard. This is a novel, not a movie. Every paragraph has its own meaning. The extensive description of the scene will be meaningless if it is not used later. It is just a running account. Only three or four days have passed since the plot lasted more than a hundred chapters. Whenever the heroine meets some of the six male characters, she has to describe the actions, demeanor and psychology of those male characters in a unified way. The heroine's mental counseling can be written in more than ten chapters at a time. The emotional line is very bland, and I have read more than a hundred chapters. Although there are intense psychological descriptions, it seems normal within the framework of Shao Xiang's character setting. The ambition is too high, and the secondary characters are very stereotyped and lifeless. Using them to raise the ambition seems hollow, incapable of empathy, and even feels pretentious. But the three views are very positive, and it is suitable for junior high school students who want to watch romance. Overall it's okay, the heroine's image is okay, but slightly fragmented. Come on [blow a kiss] After thinking about it, it's still too uncomfortable. My patience for more than a hundred chapters is nothing.

Score; 4 points. The writing style is meticulous, there are many details, and the emotional description is very warm. The disadvantage is that it is too detailed and has too many adjectives and modifiers, making it overall very long and messy. The sentences are long, which is a waste of time to read, and a waste of time to listen to, and the paragraphs are not divided well. It may be because there are too many modifying prefixes and it is too complicated. I have seen similar comments about [ai polishing] in Duanjing, so I suggest you pay attention.

1. Overall evaluation: Treasure Novel, you won't lose money if you invest in it, it is a high-quality work among new novels, and the content quality is very outstanding. 2. Hostess design: A modern "cow horse" travels across the stars, winning the audience with the organized thinking of a worker (PPT step-by-step planning, mind map-based knowledge sorting); adhering to the principle of "the customer is God", systematically learning comfort knowledge in a short period of time, doing things in an orderly and calm manner. 3. Detailed depiction: The plot of appeasing the sentinels is full of details. From relaxing vigilance, building trust, to subsequent sorting out emotions, and matching the small details of related equipment, the logical chain is clear and complete. 4. Transmission of values: The heroine is self-reliant and takes the initiative to solve problems when encountering them. The positive energy she conveys makes people feel comfortable. 1. I have been following this author's novels for a long time, and the previous ones are particularly good. 2. There is a key turning point in the plot: the heroine goes on a mission to dangerous waters. 3. I don't really like the plot after the turning point. 4. Before the turning point: Although it is a black tower background, the overall atmosphere is warm and comfortable. 5. After the turning point: The plot gradually moves towards the confrontation between the Black Tower and the White Tower and the imminent war. 6. I prefer daily and warm content, and this plot direction is not very friendly to me.

Most of Shao Xiang's books are the same, but this one is the most sober heroine I have ever seen. She knows what she wants and what she should do. She is sensible and self-sufficient. It is very interesting. I hope the author will update it soon.

I have read many articles about this sentry, but this one is quite special. The guide describes the mental counseling of the sentry in great detail, not only the purification of pollutants, but also the psychological counseling of the sentry. Logically speaking, the Black Tower Sentinels are regarded as monsters and consumables. They die in pain after being squeezed out of their last traces of value. The Sentinels are not machines, they are people. In such an environment, the psychological problems of the Sentinels will definitely be serious, which is also an important reason for the increase in pollution values. There is no description of this part in the Shao Xiangwen that I have read before. It is very novel and reasonable when I read it for the first time. In terms of emotional description, it is very delicate. Before seeing the love between the heroine and the heroes, the first thing I saw was the comradeship between the sentinels. It was really impressive and made me cry. The sentinels in the author's works have a touch of humanity. The relationship between the sentinels and the guides is also very well grasped. The reason why the guides are guides is that they are the beacon and hope of the sentinels, and can lead them out of the desperate spiritual picture and the sad stories of the past. The heroine is also very close to my liking. She can empathize with the sentinels, but she is also rational enough and does not make unnecessary sacrifices. She is really charming. Readers are the ones who fall in love with the heroine before the male protagonists.

The writing is very cute and beautiful, and the heroine is very social and hardworking. But the number of words in each article is very small, isn't it? Speaking of which, I wrote more than 80 chapters, but I ended up finishing it in just a few clicks [almost crying]

Super invincible explosion looks great! ! ! This is the right whistle! Soothing is work! This heroine's food has a strong animal taste, is so delicious, and is so refreshing. It's great to work hard at this.

To be honest, the writing style is good, and it is not a mindless and refreshing article, which can make people feel involved. However, there is one thing that really makes me feel prickly. It is the many excessive expansions and complicated redundancies. Many times, things that can be explained clearly in a few sentences can only be written in a few chapters. I think it is too much nonsense. They are all words that the author worked hard to code. But reading word for word is a waste of time and affects the reading experience. However, if you keep turning pages quickly and skipping, it is easy to miss some plots, but don't skip them. There are too many unnecessary narratives, which leads to finding the plot in long paragraphs of redundant descriptions. This makes you very tired when reading, because you have to keep turning pages to skip complicated descriptions, and you have to be careful not to miss some plots! I felt a little dazed when I saw it [laughing and crying]. Why do I feel that way? For example, the heroine traveled to an interstellar court trial scene. After the trial, she immediately took a spaceship and was exiled to the black tower. Then she met with the commander. After communicating with the commander about work arrangements, she went to the lounge to sleep. This was what happened on the first day after the time travel. Then she got up and started working to appease the four sentries, but! From traveling to the trial site to pacifying the four sentinels the next day, I wrote chapter 98 from the first chapter! Sky! Bodhisattva author, I beg you, can you please make it more concise [crying] The overly complicated and trivial descriptions in the first 98 chapters really gave me a heart attack, but there was a story and it was very interesting. As a result, I quickly browsed through the ten lines at a glance and skipped the redundant descriptions, looking for the plot I wanted to read. Fortunately, I didn't give up and got through it. Although the heroine wrote 98 chapters from traveling across the stars to arriving at the Black Tower and appeasing the four sentinels the next day, things improved a lot after one hundred chapters. The complicated details were greatly reduced, the writing was smoother, and the plot was eye-catching. Stay tuned, sisters! Come on