The Empire Abandons Me, the Black Tower Welcomes Me, and the Sentries Kneel to Me

Progress 102, ① At least 9 elements of this book and a certain book are highly similar ② The heroine's social character and all-round actions basically come from AI, so much so that the common sense cuo'wu written by the author himself breaks this character ③There are many redundant descriptions, for example: the basic information of the four sentinels appears many times. But it didn't play the role it should have. At least I still don't remember what they are called, I only remember the animals. But there are also advantages: ① The heroine is not afraid of reptiles, she really likes them, and she doesn't squeal in the same way. ②The habits and appearances of various animals are written in great detail, including the characteristics that appear on the sentry body. I watched it for so long just because of the animals. Four stars belong to cute animals❤❤❤ Don't mind these recommendations [like][like][like]

It's really nice and beautiful, especially the back! It's not a whistle in the traditional sense. It's not the kind where you just lick your furry hair, get some spiritual guidance and then fall in love with it. The heroine is particularly charming, calm, gentle and powerful... I really like the heroine! Her character is really kind, but not the kind of Madonna. She considers things and has ideas for her own benefit and protection. The male protagonists are not like the routine of falling in love with each other as soon as they come. The emotional line is slowly developed. It doesn't give people the feeling that I will fall in love with a good guide just randomly, but through understanding and contact, I discovered that the female protagonist is such a guide lady who is worthy of admiration, belief and love. The part that is being serialized now describes the command of rescuing whales. It made me cry. I secretly wiped away my tears late at night. It is a very good work, the rating is really worthy of improvement, and the writing is particularly good. Hey, the names of the male protagonists and male supporting characters are all crooked names! It's hard to remember~ The screenshots are being transferred to the album slowly...

It's so uncomfortable, I'm looking forward to the next chapters, but I can't stand the current one. The writing is too detailed, everything needs to be described in detail, and some things can even be brushed off in one stroke. I understand the author's feeling of wanting readers to be immersed in the scene, but he tried too hard. This is a novel, not a movie. Every paragraph has its own meaning. The extensive description of the scene will be meaningless if it is not used later. It is just a running account. Only three or four days have passed since the plot lasted more than a hundred chapters. Whenever the heroine meets some of the six male characters, she has to describe the actions, demeanor and psychology of those male characters in a unified way. The heroine's mental counseling can be written in more than ten chapters at a time. The emotional line is very bland, and I have read more than a hundred chapters. Although there are intense psychological descriptions, it seems normal within the framework of Shao Xiang's character setting. The ambition is too high, and the secondary characters are very stereotyped and lifeless. Using them to raise the ambition seems hollow, incapable of empathy, and even feels pretentious. But the three views are very positive, and it is suitable for junior high school students who want to watch romance. Overall it's okay, the heroine's image is okay, but slightly fragmented. Come on [blow a kiss] After thinking about it, it's still too uncomfortable. My patience for more than a hundred chapters is nothing.

Score; 4 points. The writing style is meticulous, there are many details, and the emotional description is very warm. The disadvantage is that it is too detailed and has too many adjectives and modifiers, making it overall very long and messy. The sentences are long, which is a waste of time to read, and a waste of time to listen to, and the paragraphs are not divided well. It may be because there are too many modifying prefixes and it is too complicated. I have seen similar comments about [ai polishing] in Duanjing, so I suggest you pay attention.

1. Overall evaluation: Treasure Novel, you won't lose money if you invest in it, it is a high-quality work among new novels, and the content quality is very outstanding. 2. Hostess design: A modern "cow horse" travels across the stars, winning the audience with the organized thinking of a worker (PPT step-by-step planning, mind map-based knowledge sorting); adhering to the principle of "the customer is God", systematically learning comfort knowledge in a short period of time, doing things in an orderly and calm manner. 3. Detailed depiction: The plot of appeasing the sentinels is full of details. From relaxing vigilance, building trust, to subsequent sorting out emotions, and matching the small details of related equipment, the logical chain is clear and complete. 4. Transmission of values: The heroine is self-reliant and takes the initiative to solve problems when encountering them. The positive energy she conveys makes people feel comfortable. 1. I have been following this author's novels for a long time, and the previous ones are particularly good. 2. There is a key turning point in the plot: the heroine goes on a mission to dangerous waters. 3. I don't really like the plot after the turning point. 4. Before the turning point: Although it is a black tower background, the overall atmosphere is warm and comfortable. 5. After the turning point: The plot gradually moves towards the confrontation between the Black Tower and the White Tower and the imminent war. 6. I prefer daily and warm content, and this plot direction is not very friendly to me.

Most of Shao Xiang's books are the same, but this one is the most sober heroine I have ever seen. She knows what she wants and what she should do. She is sensible and self-sufficient. It is very interesting. I hope the author will update it soon.

I have read many articles about this sentry, but this one is quite special. The guide describes the mental counseling of the sentry in great detail, not only the purification of pollutants, but also the psychological counseling of the sentry. Logically speaking, the Black Tower Sentinels are regarded as monsters and consumables. They die in pain after being squeezed out of their last traces of value. The Sentinels are not machines, they are people. In such an environment, the psychological problems of the Sentinels will definitely be serious, which is also an important reason for the increase in pollution values. There is no description of this part in the Shao Xiangwen that I have read before. It is very novel and reasonable when I read it for the first time. In terms of emotional description, it is very delicate. Before seeing the love between the heroine and the heroes, the first thing I saw was the comradeship between the sentinels. It was really impressive and made me cry. The sentinels in the author's works have a touch of humanity. The relationship between the sentinels and the guides is also very well grasped. The reason why the guides are guides is that they are the beacon and hope of the sentinels, and can lead them out of the desperate spiritual picture and the sad stories of the past. The heroine is also very close to my liking. She can empathize with the sentinels, but she is also rational enough and does not make unnecessary sacrifices. She is really charming. Readers are the ones who fall in love with the heroine before the male protagonists.

The writing is very cute and beautiful, and the heroine is very social and hardworking. But the number of words in each article is very small, isn't it? Speaking of which, I wrote more than 80 chapters, but I ended up finishing it in just a few clicks [almost crying]

Super invincible explosion looks great! ! ! This is the right whistle! Soothing is work! This heroine's food has a strong animal taste, is so delicious, and is so refreshing. It's great to work hard at this.

To be honest, the writing style is good, and it is not a mindless and refreshing article, which can make people feel involved. However, there is one thing that really makes me feel prickly. It is the many excessive expansions and complicated redundancies. Many times, things that can be explained clearly in a few sentences can only be written in a few chapters. I think it is too much nonsense. They are all words that the author worked hard to code. But reading word for word is a waste of time and affects the reading experience. However, if you keep turning pages quickly and skipping, it is easy to miss some plots, but don't skip them. There are too many unnecessary narratives, which leads to finding the plot in long paragraphs of redundant descriptions. This makes you very tired when reading, because you have to keep turning pages to skip complicated descriptions, and you have to be careful not to miss some plots! I felt a little dazed when I saw it [laughing and crying]. Why do I feel that way? For example, the heroine traveled to an interstellar court trial scene. After the trial, she immediately took a spaceship and was exiled to the black tower. Then she met with the commander. After communicating with the commander about work arrangements, she went to the lounge to sleep. This was what happened on the first day after the time travel. Then she got up and started working to appease the four sentries, but! From traveling to the trial site to pacifying the four sentinels the next day, I wrote chapter 98 from the first chapter! Sky! Bodhisattva author, I beg you, can you please make it more concise [crying] The overly complicated and trivial descriptions in the first 98 chapters really gave me a heart attack, but there was a story and it was very interesting. As a result, I quickly browsed through the ten lines at a glance and skipped the redundant descriptions, looking for the plot I wanted to read. Fortunately, I didn't give up and got through it. Although the heroine wrote 98 chapters from traveling across the stars to arriving at the Black Tower and appeasing the four sentinels the next day, things improved a lot after one hundred chapters. The complicated details were greatly reduced, the writing was smoother, and the plot was eye-catching. Stay tuned, sisters! Come on

So far, I think the author must have prepared a lot of information to create the image of each sentinel. The animal descriptions are very detailed, such as the breathing of blue whales and the ears of cats and dogs, etc. In addition to these, there is also the portrayal of the heroine, who is strong, gentle and rational. She does some very heart-warming things within her own limits, such as decorating the room and chatting. Reading the whole story makes my heart warm. But what I like most is the description of the heroine's reactions in various scenes. They are rational, cautious and restrained. They are not overly lively like the conventional Shao Xiangwen opening of the black tower. They are more realistic and logical. It is highly recommended to watch. Some readers in the article said that the description is too detailed or has too many adjectives. I think it is actually very good, more vivid, and adds to the shaping of the characters, no longer the same type. I hope this article can be a big hit. It's really good. The author should insist on following his own writing style. It's so beautiful.

Ahhhh, Xiang Shaowen is really to my liking. [Sending Hearts] Nubao is really a very serious person. Whether it is the choice to save the little crocodile at a dangerous moment or the subsequent attitude towards the commanders and sentries, he is very measured. Saving people is to do your best within your capabilities, rather than blindly "masochistic" rescue with self-emotion. And ah ah ah, the praise is great, and the comforting process is also very exciting. It is not written specifically for the purpose of writing about feelings. On the contrary, it highlights everyone's faith and tenacity (especially the article about the little wolf dog, ah ah ah, it is written for our readers) I personally feel that the content in the book should be about the lives of a group of people. This book is really suitable for me [Blow Kiss] After reading it, the author scared me if he dared to update 100 chapters.

Let me support the author. I have read many articles about whistle-stop guides. The guidance process is very simple, vulgar, and sentimental, but the words in this article are really sophisticated. I don't know why, but it can become a lightning point for some people. Just like takeout, if you eat it all the time, it will be unhealthy for your body. This article is like, um, the kind of dishes cooked in a home-cooked restaurant. It has a slow pace and a light fragrance, and the characters are also standing up. I think the author is really polishing it with intention, um, Originally, the setting of the sentry guide was worth exploring, so I think it is absolutely fine for the author to write it this way. The charm of the heroine is almost divine, and it emanates faintly. Although I haven't seen much of it, I can basically confirm that it has a stable feeling. I very much hope that everyone will read it.

Kanshao Xiang's favorite thing is the treatment process! I love it so much! Moreover, the author's characterization is meticulous and gives a real sense of living people, and you can feel the preciousness of them! The most impressive thing is the understanding and respect for Sentinel. This is the most equal relationship between the heroine and Sentinel that I have ever seen! I think this might be due to hiring? Equal employment relationship, the heroine wants to do her job well haha. This design makes the image of the heroine more distinct and closer to a real person, rather than a goddess-like figure shrouded in a halo. Porridge~Teacher, I will always support you✊

Very! Good! Look! After the heroine came to the Black Tower, she quickly sorted out the situation, made plans, and worked as a guide, earning respect with her strength. What's rare is that the author writes in great detail about the heroine's work process of treating the sentinels, but it doesn't make me feel repetitive or redundant at all. Moreover, the heroine has been improving her mental abilities during her work. She is very focused and professional, calm and rational, gentle and patient, and has a sense of boundaries. I think the heroine's character is relatively mature and her growth line is well written. I haven't spent a lot of time writing about the relationship line yet, but I can probably guess who they are. It feels so rare again! Because I really like to see the heroine focus on work and career, and I don't like to watch the heroine as a guide engaging in dog training and flirting with the sentry every day. I hope that the author can still write the heroine's growth line in the future. If I write a love line, I hope that I must respect and adapt to the heroine's personal development! Finally, I want more, faster and more crazy updates!

This is my first time to write a long review, and it is also my first time to decide to follow a book when it is serialized and the ratings are not particularly high. There are not many books on the subject of whistle blowing. After reading many whistle blowing articles, I feel that they are more or less not to my liking, but I really like this one. First of all, I really like the setting that the heroine prefers cold-blooded animals, and I am also tolerant of the furry heroine. I can feel that the heroine's baby has a very clean background, gentleness without losing strength. This article The description is very delicate, maybe the first half of the story is very detailed, and may feel a bit lengthy at first, but what attracts me is always the plot direction and characterization. I can feel that this is a really logical and thoughtful story about a female protagonist. I like all the male protagonists so far, and in my opinion they all respect the female protagonist (the author should not read some bad reviews or picky comments. In my opinion, the male protagonists are very charming, and they respect and respect the female treasures, especially the female protagonists. It's Professor Nolan! I like him very much, hehe, because many other whistle-blowing articles have more forced disrespectful plots, this article is very, very good, don't let their mindless remarks affect your mood) It really makes me feel female Bao is worthy of being the heroine. I have been impressed by her charisma. She is so smart, so sensible, so gentle, and has feelings for home and country. I really like the memories and descriptions of the sentinels defending their hometown, as well as the comradeship between the sentinels. Guides and sentinels should be Should we fight side by side, or be physiologically dependent after the grooming process, rather than falling in love directly and then becoming a dedicated sentinel as a guide. Every character here is very personalized, which makes me feel that the author must be a very, very gentle person (because I can't remember the name, I still write it in the memo and look at it from time to time, haha, even though I wrote a character summary at the end of Chapter 148). And the fact that the baby girl is full of career really hit me hard, you must keep writing it! ! ! Really really like it! ! ! ! ! !

The heroine's baby is really good, she's the kind of person who only understands after being with her for a long time. She is not like the sun, but like a lamp, with stable light and just the right temperature. Facing this is not the overwhelming emotion of "I'm here to save you", but the sense of stability and intelligence brought from the inside out by "I understand your problem and help you solve it". As soon as the heroine's words "It's emotional and reasonable, it's time to give it a try" I immediately became excited. Whose baby is so warm and sensible? She didn't slap her head and said, "I'll save the person," nor did she directly say no. She just asked the boss to express her position with just the right words. It felt like the heroine was standing firm. The sentries stood up one by one from the paper. They are not "Grumpy Sentinel A" or "Lone Wolf Sentinel B", they are more three-dimensional and fleshy. This is the first time I have seen an author describe the pain in a very real and suffocating way. When I see the jellyfish sentinel clearly in the darkness, he still leaves the last piece of pure land to the heroine's rose flower. There's also the Saving Heroes Sentinel, hey, it's really good to keep it in suspense without giving away any spoilers! The most touching thing is the trust that is slowly built between people. There is no dependence on God, no blind worship. The heroine has her own goals and plans, and the author's progress is slow and steady. I really like the feeling of growing up with the heroine, as if she has experienced a different life! After reading it, I feel warm in my heart, not the kind of tears that are stirred up by sensationalism, but like the warmth that seeps out from the seams in the bones after being exposed to the sun. All in all, highly recommended! I hope the author will get more soon and really can't wait! [Blowing kiss]

It's a very nice book, and the author's writing style is also very good. Some details in it, including the emotional changes of the heroine and some of the male supporting characters, are described very delicately. But I have a problem. I have written more than 80 chapters, but I haven't fully contacted the male protagonists yet. If I want to briefly sort it out, it is from the White Tower to the Black Tower and then received 4 mentally polluted people. This is the entire content of more than 80 chapters. I feel that the whole story is a bit delayed, maybe because the theme is a bit slow, or because it is to pave the way for the rest of the story, but I really feel that the description of these four people with polluted mental bodies is still too long, and some of the physical descriptions used are too detailed. If they are the protagonists, then forget it, but they are only four supporting characters. . . . . . . . Although, I still want to say that it looks great and I look forward to the next one.

It is a very good book with a perfect structure. It can be seen that the author has very strict regulations and explanations about the world view and the rules in the world. He is very responsible and responsible. The heroine is extremely tough inside, has a kind heart, a rational mind, and fast execution. She can quickly clarify the current situation and goals to make the best choice. She is as friendly as possible to people within her ability. She has a very strong personality. The narrative rhythm is smooth, the main drama is interspersed with daily life, and the reading atmosphere is very relaxed. The content is reasonably distributed. The inner thoughts of the protagonist and the psychological environment of the supporting characters are described in large quantities to allow readers to understand and empathize. It is a very favorite style. After all, the protagonist and supporting characters are all human beings. The author cherishes every character he writes. It is a book that is very suitable for taste! Ps: My personal opinion is that among many whistle-blowing novels, the heroine has a brain and a plan, does not hold back her past feelings, is introduced to the stage of career and growth quickly, and does not suffer in the new environment. How can I put it, it is a smooth and refreshing novel! Oh my god, baby, I love your narrative rhythm so much. There is no dog training literature. The male protagonists (?) Each perform their own duties. Everyone has responsibilities and obligations on top of emotions. Through planning to contact the female protagonist, the supporting characters will not suddenly develop protective and possessive feelings towards the female protagonist for no reason. They just can't bear to feel comfortable. There is only communication at work. The female protagonist The owner himself has more responsibility than emotion. He doesn't talk about feelings. He only has incomprehension in his eyes. However, he has no choice but to accept the unreasonable behavior of his clients, so he has a social animal personality and a sense of joy, which is almost the same as mine (helpless). If you are like me and don't want to read dog training literature, don't want to see the original owner being aggrieved in the early stage, and don't want to see sexual attraction (there are very few descriptions of appearance in this book), then read this book! [Love]

Five-star recommendation! A completely different interstellar whistle text The heroine is always awake, and so are the current potential male protagonists. The adult world does not talk about feelings, only about interests. The author's writing style is delicate and his sense of empathy is very good. It made me cry for empathy several times. There are some erotic plots in it, but the main framework is very clear. The setting is also very novel. The guide not only purifies the sentries, but also includes their psychological emotions. Every time I watch it, I will admire those soldiers very much. In the last article, my favorite sentence is: "So accept yourself, accept your imperfect self."

The author's writing is good, and the plot is also very novel, which is different from the Shaoxiang novels I have read before. The description is indeed very detailed and immersive. I really kept crying after watching it. The disadvantage is that I feel that this novel is slowly developing and not like a romance novel. I feel that the subsequent development is suitable for non-CP, strong female novels. It feels like the male characters are always the ones who have the heartbeat, and the heroine feels that she is just grateful and trusting to them, without any feelings between men and women. In this case, it may be that the author's writing pace is too slow, or that there is basically no description of the heroine's emotions towards the male characters. As a result, if the heroine continues to have relationships with male characters later, it will be a bit abrupt. However, it feels like the heroine is burdened with too much, and it would be nice to have someone to help her share the load and be by her side. I'm still looking forward to the next plot, please update [KISS]

It's very interesting to watch. The heroine is calm and rational, and she clearly distinguishes between humanitarianism and heroism. She won't be kidnapped by others' morality, and she also clearly distinguishes between public and private. It's very interesting to watch, and it's more realistic. People always weigh the pros and cons, and they don't fall in love with the heroine unreasonably right away.

Sentinel Guide novels, I rarely read such novels, this one was a complete surprise. The description of the sentinel pollution is very detailed, as if you can feel their pain personally. An Ran is simply a very "perfect" employee, and he is also a smart person who has an excellent blend of rationality and sensibility. There are many characters appearing at the moment. To be honest, the early channeling sentinels feel more likable than the commanders. The heroine herself has a strong personality charm. I don't want the heroine to stick to one person. Either they are all together or there is no CP. The heroine concentrates on her career.

Frankly speaking, when I first saw the ratings, I thought it was a cookie-cutter review, but when I looked at it I realized something was wrong. I felt like I was not reading a novel, but accompanying a gentle, powerful, and scientific master of psychology to analyze and treat the stories and traumas behind each soldier. He used the "metaphorical" pictures in each picture to truly restore the glory, sadness, fragility, and struggle they experienced. In this novel, the sentinel's feelings for the guide are true gratitude and attachment for redemption and warmth, respect for the guide's courage and cherishing of life, and resonance with the guide's tenacity and unyielding will. It is gradual and targeted. The friendship between superiors, subordinates, and comrades in the army, being willing to die for your companions, leaving the hope of life to your companions, or living with the souls of your companions, these also moved me, and I also saw many heavy but precious emotions in the book. I personally think this book deserves 9 points. I haven't encountered this kind of trouble for a long time. I hope it will be updated soon.

The author's writing style is very delicate and the images he depicts are vivid. Sister Bao belongs to the gentle and tolerant category of "moisturizing things quietly". Although she is a "worker", she will take careful care of every sentinel who needs comfort. She has strong empathy, is very sensitive to details, is sober and gentle, (os: the heroine is also a reptile lover, very uncomfortable Same, I fell in love with my sister in zero seconds [admiration]) What's more, the author writes very concrete and touching details about each grooming process, vividly showing the sentry's perseverance, watchfulness, and protection (I shed tears several times). The image characteristics of each sentinel are also distinct and unique. All in all, I love the author so much! If you add more, it's really not enough! [Almost crying]

The writing is very good. In the interstellar novel "Xiang Sentinel Redemption" that I read, it very clearly describes the pain of the sentinel and the purification process of the guide. In the black tower, the pain experienced by each different spiritual body at different levels of blackening. Each different spiritual body has very different character traits. When writing about the evolution of the wizard, it does not mean that it will be cured in an understatement, but that different preparations will be made before each purification and there will be many detailed evolutionary steps and different scenes after entering. And neither the male protagonist nor the female protagonist in it is said to be that kind of love-minded. Well, they are more of the kind of smart people who are very clear-headed and can look at the multi-faceted aspects of things, haha, they are good at talking and using their brains. I really think it's very good, and I highly recommend it. 😍😍😍But I still want to give some suggestions to the author. There are some details that can be reduced appropriately, it's really a bit much 😂. I hope to update it every day and work hard to produce food. [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's good-looking. In addition to the righteousness of family and country that is sublimated in this book, the heroine's character is also very to my liking. It's very good-looking! ! ! When I first watched it, I thought it was an old-fashioned one, either lazy or giving for free. The heroine is well-planned every step of the way. She is kind but not a virgin. She is very self-assertive. The emotional line is also very natural. She is not the type of person who falls in love at first sight, then confesses, or falls in love after being comforted once. The emotional line is slow and warm. The heroine should not have such thoughts for the time being. Revenge is in her hands. It occupies a huge place in my heart. I don't think I'll have any thoughts about love until it's over. The male protagonists are also very shady. Sometimes I get very excited when I see their fantasies, but fantasies are just fantasies, and they can't become reality for the time being. Haha, the revolution has not yet succeeded, and comrades still need to work hard. The girls help each other, and the friendship line is also super easy to cry. It made me burst into tears in the middle of the night, woo woo 🥺

Carrot and cabbage bar, it is not a popular whistle-blowing article. It is very special and can accumulate details and emotions. But for me, too much incitement makes it tiring to watch, and it always jumps. There are too many descriptions in one storyline! It can be seen that the author's writing skills are very powerful

I KKKKK It's beautiful, it vividly shows the pain of the sentinel. Moreover, our sister had sympathy, but she did not give in at all costs. Instead, she thought deeply, had a clear reason, and did what she could within the scope of her abilities. This also reminded herself that the most important thing is that she likes snakes and crocodiles. Hahaha, I also like this kind of spiritual body, and I also feel sorry for them. I told Mei Bao, "At least, he is a warrior who fights for the country and a warrior who cuts off the country for his comrades. It is reasonable and reasonable to give it a try." Woo woo woo, Mei Bao fits my image of the heroine. Strong but able to continue to improve himself, rational but humane, gentle but also clear-minded. (Also, I want to ask you, can Nolan really be the male protagonist? I feel that he is better for the younger sister than those quasi-male protagonists~) @ It's beautiful, really, come on [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

Seeing that now I feel that the love line is no longer important [crying] I burst into tears. At first, it was because it was a sweet pet, and later because it was a warm and daily life. Did it turn out to be the resistance of PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds? ? ? [Cry][cry][cry][almost cry][cry]