With My Peerless Beauty, I Died in the Immortal Society

The writing is good, and the plot is interesting to watch (sometimes I am embarrassed but want to know what is going on for no reason, it seems to have a magical attraction), and the sense of crisis/urgency is quite strong (mainly because the protagonist is easy to see through in the early stage, and the system will force tasks + punishments). In addition, even if the author wants to create a protagonist who is decisive in killing the weak and the strong, the black body and the crippled immortal cultivator, it is best to control the intensity. The previous scene of killing the Li family and killing the Qi Refining Perfection monks was acceptable, but Leng Bingning started to feel uncomfortable, and I really couldn't stand the scene of killing Zhao Ling'er who came home to get married. Of course, it may be because of my poor mental endurance... It's okay. Although the whole story has a strong AI flavor, the plot is at least watchable. The plot in some places is quite novel. I don't expect too much for free.

The early stage is relatively passive and the development is relatively slow, but the plot is rich. In the later stage, the opponent becomes his wife, and the two protagonists even have the experience of swapping bodies. The ending is too rushed and leaves many holes unfilled. I want to see the content of Transformation. The two protagonists experienced a love of life and death. It is emotional and will not be forgotten for a long time. For example, in the previous content of Zhongzhou, the people from the Jade Girl Sect that I have seen have not appeared after the former master. It is a pity.

Personally, I think it's okay. I'm used to reading novels without thinking. I think this subject matter is more interesting. I've read several chapters of this book. Good luck, author.

So funny, it made me laugh. As long as you are not embarrassed, it doesn't matter what others are doing [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's well written, but why doesn't anyone read it?

It's quite well written. But inexplicably few people watched it. Although the protagonist was embarrassed, I wasn't embarrassed watching it.

It's very interesting to bring Happy Yuanyuan into the lead role.

Good looking, worth recommending This book is worth reading

Write well and read this book well

Le Ziwen, so funny

I can't write well at the beginning, but I write very well at the end.

The writing is okay, but the realm has only reached Nascent Soul. There is no outline for what follows. Not bad, not bad

Later, he got together with the empress, and everything changed, but because of the system, he had to seduce men. There are also fewer later systems. If you can accept this, you can watch it

Just read it. Chapter 20 is well written, especially the ones about alienation plots and beauty traps.

The subject matter is novel, and the protagonist is both male and female. It's great. [Laughing] I'm about to fall in love with it. The author must continue to update [please ask for more explosive updates][please ask for more explosive updates]

The first plot is not as exciting as the second one, but overall it's pretty good. Why doesn't anyone watch it?

Why are there so few comments? I think it's quite interesting. Come on, author.