Demon Slayer: Fengzhu Was Almost Pissed Off by Shuizhu Again Today.

Nice! As a senior real sister, the characters in this book really have no OOC, and every place is described in detail. I hope the teacher will not delay the update or give up like others. Come on! Teacher!

Hao Chi. . . . The characters are pretty good at the moment, and the Immortal Sichuan is not always hot and spicy, and Hao Chi is so cute...

Highly recommended! Currently in the process of writing my second book, I think this can be said to be the best literal text in Tomato. The character description is very good, not OOC. Shimi is not written as a violent super hero, and Yuyu is not written as a particularly OOC. It can be said that the background of the two little ones is written out. The descriptions of other people are also very good. And the teacher is really good at fusion. Although the main plot in the later stage is the same as the original work, the teacher intersperses the story of Shiyi's love story in every corner, which doesn't feel inconsistent at all. After watching it for a long time, it even feels like the two of them are secretly in love in the main drama. All in all highly recommended! This book is really excellent

It's so delicious to fight against the young couple😋😋

So cute! Looking forward to the following 🥰Hahahaha There is a witness Yi Hei in every book. Very delicious! I usually save up the serials before reading them, but this one really makes me want to read it when I think about it. It's not fattening at all🥰

This is a strong benefit! The author's writing style is exquisite and delicate. When writing psychological descriptions, he describes Yuyu's inner entanglements, feelings of unworthiness, and low self-esteem! Moreover, the author's grasp of the character's image is extremely accurate, and there is no OOC at all! Every character seems to have come out of the original work. Yihei's venomous mouth and the misunderstanding caused by Yuyu's words when Immortal Mi first met Yuyu are very interesting. Yuyu is really stupid and super touching! The Immortal Mi was not written as that kind of violent super hero, and Shinobu was realistic in his early stage when his sister was still around. He was a bit serious and had a bad temper. I was confused by the fragrance. I was originally not attracted to this couple, but after reading this article by the author, I was immediately kicked into the trap! ! ! ! So delicious! ! ! Wish 99

The writing is very good. It develops the plot reasonably without being particularly OOC (it will definitely not be exactly the same as the original work, at least in my mind, it is not OOC, I only represent myself). There are some knock-offs, and both Shi Yi's writing is very charming. If I didn't knock this pair of CPs originally, it is a masterpiece. Come on, madam!

It's a very sweet text, although it's my destiny to fall in love with serialized novels...(／_＼)[STARE][Facepalm]

This book is very interesting! The CP of Immortal River and Giyuu. After I felt a little bad in the first few chapters, it became better and better in the later chapters. I planned to quit it at first, but either the book I read was being updated, or I suddenly didn't want to read it and wanted to wait a few days to read it, so I started reading it. After reading a few chapters, I felt that it was acceptable again. The later chapters felt better and better, and it was not very OOC. I felt that it was quite good. (Self-feeling) By the way! Dear author, can you write an extra chapter? Or just in the main text, it means that Yiyong has become smaller. I have seen it often these days, and I just want to read it. I can write it or not, thank you! @ It's really beautiful, but now that there is a system, I still hope that the system will leave after Wuhan's death, but the author's writing style is really getting better and better.

Ahhhhhhh (dirty high note)! I can't do it anymore! Although I write CP articles about righteousness and bravery, this does not affect my actual righteousness! When I was watching the pillar training chapter, I thought they were so interesting! ! Holy shit it looks so good! Who knows, the extreme pull of white pepper and wooden fish will make people laugh like a goose! ! I can't help it anymore, it's so frustrating! It's really not OOC at all! ! !

It's really super, super pretty! ! ! I think this article in Shiyi CP is very well written. There is no OOC. I wait for updates every day. Come on, don't give up! ! ! Love you! !

It was my first time eating Shiyibun and I didn't expect it to be so delicious. The emotional line and plot are very full, which I like very much. I was so excited when I saw the reincarnation meeting at the beginning and the end. I like this. However, the setting of the righteous hero in this book is rather dull and tolerant. The righteous hero who likes to be venomous should pay attention to avoiding lightning. There seem to be only two main CP pairs, Snake Love and Real Meaning. I'm very happy that all the Shuihu senior sisters and brothers appeared in the extra chapter. The part where they met ww was also very funny... I hope the extra chapter can have more descriptions of Shuihu's big family and the Immortal Sichuan family.

Delicious, so delicious 😆, it made me succeed in being a righteous person. You are a god, and you are not OOC at all.

After tying the score, I suddenly realized that I had not rated it. This kind of fan fiction is of the highest quality in Tomato, the writing is extremely good, and the emotions of the characters are very well grasped. Personally, I feel like I invited the Immortal River himself.

First of all, the author's method of creating titles is very unique. The title centered around the central sentence is eye-catching, attracts readers, and arouses interest in reading. I admire the author's literary artistry very much. Secondly, the twisted emotional line between Saniya and Giyuu made me feel a bit real, a kind of reality where the characters in the book come to life. I always miss this feeling. Maybe this book has a connection and resonance with my life. In my reading career, I rarely encounter books that can keep me in the book for a long time. If I put aside the background of the book, I really like the feeling of a plain love. But the tense background story adds to the excitement, sometimes slowly, sometimes accelerating. The author knows how to capture people's hearts and highlights. Although the author's brushwork gives me a childish feeling, like a new seedling sprouting in the New Year. Therefore, I give the author a five-star rating and hope to have better works in the future. ###Tomioka Yoshiyong

It's so good to read, but the later part is terrible (Dahuang girls know all about it [smile] [smile] [smile]) The writing has no flaws, no OOC, it is one of the few books that is not bad in the middle [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

So pretty, so pretty Is there a world without zinnia sama? Just hold on Is there a world without zinnia sama? Just hold on Is there a world without zinnia sama? Just hold on Is there a world without zinnia sama? Just hold on Is there a world without zinnia sama? Just hold on Is there a world without zinnia sama? Just hold on Is there a world without zinnia sama? Just hold on Zinnia sama is heaven! Zinnia sama is the ground! Zinnia sama is the best in the world! No one can disobey Zinnia sama 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗Heartbeat value +10086

It's so pretty. It's so pretty. The two of them are so cute when they get along. I can't help but feel the corners of my mouth. It's so sweet. I must write more about it. It's so pretty.

So well written. . . The love between two stupid idiots in Feng Shui, Sanemi, who has a prickly personality and isolates others with her violent temper. The minnow, who is inhumane in all aspects of language and emotion, explodes at the first touch, then overly cares, and then reaches the same pink bubble atmosphere as now. It's so cute! ! I will be very happy when I see these. . [Adoration]

It's super beautiful, with very delicate words and emotions. The two of them were a bit "stupid" in the early stage, and they both loved it without realizing it❤️, but after they understood their own hearts, it was so sweet. I enjoyed watching it very much. Getting along with my teammate Lord... Is also very natural. The language of volunteerism is still so unique. It's really beautiful,_(:з∠)_

If you like Shi Yi or Yi You, you really need to read this book. It's very good-looking, the characters are not very OOC, and the descriptions are also very vivid. The plot in the article can make the corners of your mouth curl up, or make you laugh until your stomach hurts.

It's super delicious. It might be a bit hard to watch at the beginning, but it gets better and better later on. The corners of my mouth keep turning up when I watch it. I just hope that the teacher can suddenly update 100 chapters in one day to scare me [shy]

The authoritative text (*❛ั∀❛ั*)✧*, how do you intersperse the interaction and love between the two people in the original work? Now when I read the original work, I feel that the two people are having an underground love affair. The timeline and storyline are consistent with the original work and the spin-off novel, but It's from the perspective of Giyuu and Saneya. The character design is very good. They get along very well and are very cute. The other people and the crows are also very cute, but they are a bit sharp according to the original work. It's so miserable everyone. The reincarnation episode is also very interesting, but it's not finished yet. The teacher will come back soon to update.

This book kicked me into the real meaning, and I won't say much about its gold content. The details of the characters are described very well, and the interactions are also very interesting and funny. I really like watching the real meaning pulling each other, but I want to get them together quickly. In fact, my left and right brains are also pulling each other haha. The real meaning of modern times is also two pieces of wood. Looking at their interaction, the apples of the apples can't stay flat. The one who doesn't smile is Gei. I'm lying to you. The one who smiles is also Gei.

The overall impression this book gives me is that it is very close to the original work. Although the original Yuyu can hardly explain what he means, Shimi really fits the character very well! The little couple makes me feel very cute, and the author writes it very well, and it reads very smoothly. This is the first book that I have read in real terms. Yes, I was so disappointed in the first book ^ω^. Watching the two little lovers interact is very cute : D I also hope that the author can continue to work hard, and I also make a small suggestion, that is, I hope that the number of words in each chapter can be more (^ ^) It's really beautiful! The development of the relationship between Yuyu and Shimi is very reasonable. It is the kind that I like very much. Moreover, the author has a very good grasp of the emotions of the characters. I personally have a delicate mind and can completely understand Shimi's feelings for Yuyu. I don't know what I like in Shimi. Before he fell in love with Yuyu, his attitude towards Yuyu was like a jealous wife (? I can't use that adjective?) Before Yuyu became enlightened, his attitude towards Shimi was very different. Others can see with the naked eye that they are special to each other. They are a very cute couple, and the author has a good understanding of the plot. The characters and timeline are well created, and the detailed emotional descriptions are completely attractive to me. The characters are also very consistent with the original work. Another thing I like is that Shimi asked the shop owner to give him a pistol in order to protect Xuanmi. Shimi was really worried about her brother. The author really grasped the small emotional details very well^ω^. The only drawback is that the number of words in the author's chapters is not many, which for me needs to be saved slowly orz The actual meaning written by the teacher is really delicious😋 I hope the number of words in each chapter can be more in the future! (Orz begs on his knees)

I like it, author, you must update it non-stop [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Please show me all of them, they match the original settings of the characters very well! It is simply 99% rare ~

Please, teacher, please update more,,, it's too bold. This is simply the most delicious cp fanfic I've found on Yangshizi, and there's no OOC [crying] [crying]

It's nice to watch, the interactions are cute, and there's no OOC. I recommend it to Feng Shui sisters!

It's so delicious, the writing is good, it's not OOC, the description of the battle is really cool, it's good here, it's good there, it's good everywhere. Thank you to my wife for saving Sister Feng Shui from the fire and water. My Tina is a 21-year-old group who gets along very cutely. I don't think the two sisters Hu Die and Senior Brother Kuang Jin are not cute, my Tina😋