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To be honest, it's quite good-looking. The protagonist's psychological description is quite delicate and touching. As for when the protagonist will regain his light, although it's a long way off, I hope there is hope. Don't be too harsh. I've seen too much in the past and my heart can't stand it. Hey, ^0^ I'm just kidding. The author can just follow his own pace.

Jazzy Book, the writing style is online and realistic, the various descriptions are very suitable for the situation, the subject matter is novel, it is not a traditional running book, there are not so many impurities, Big Buffalo will be updated soon! Who can watch 1.3W a day?

It's rare that the slow pace doesn't disgust me. Personally, I think daily life is too realistic, but this situation makes it easy for me to relax. The overall reading is very smooth, I like it very much, and try not to be anxious, otherwise it may collapse. I hope the big buffalo can continue to maintain it. Don't stop suddenly like "The Witch Makes Trouble". There is no traffic again. Buffalo, this book is going to be gone again.

After reading it so far, it seems that it is a good novel. As one of the few dark magical girl novels written by foreign readers, the best part is that there are many descriptions of psychological description and social darkness, but it is a bit too much, but the overall shortcomings are not concealed. I hope to see the author improve this book. [Like][Please update]

Keep at it, the author is not alone on this journey, we will be there, you just need to hold the pen, write the story, and lead us. The highlight of this book is the creation of the characters. The main character Shiro gave me the impression that it was not the dazzling Shiro, but the eye-catching Shiro. That kind of tenderness is the key point of the book, not the past memory. It must have been uncomfortable for me to read, and I felt uncomfortable in my heart. I was unwilling to accept this approach, but I wanted to keep reading, wondering about the subsequent development, the ending of the story, the return of Shiro, and the departure of those magical girl managers. I was looking forward to a happy ending, but I only thought so. Although I feel very sad when I see the three big characters in the serialization, I know that this is my regret. I failed to know Bai's ending, failed to see a bright future, and spent every day in anticipation. I picked up my phone just to see if there were any updates. I desperately want to see the plot, even a little bit. I know I'm crazy for thinking this way, and I have to get used to it. I have imagined the characters in the book into real life, fantasies, hopes, and expectations. Come on, author, I like your book very much. Keep it up, I will accompany you. Even if the writing is not very good, as long as I can see the ending, I will feel at ease. This is a small thought of mine. There is no need to update in a hurry, pay attention to your health, there are thousands of readers waiting and accompanying you on the other side of the screen. Come on.

The author's writing style is quite delicate. In such a dark and desperate world view, there are protagonists who stick to their true intentions, others who live in the world and are intoxicated by power, and others who close themselves off from the world. Just like the protagonist is very desperate to protect the world at the beginning, and in the process of gradually becoming a tool of power, he is casual at first, but later begins to become confused. This confusion makes the protagonist doubt what he is doing and makes him hide from the world. However, his own sense of responsibility still makes the protagonist re-participate in the struggle, but the object of the struggle this time is different from before. The author has a good grasp of the character's psychological conflicts and psychological conflicts. If the character's psychological conflicts and character growth are still reflected well in the follow-up, then this article will be quite good. The focus of the author's article seems to be to express the character's process of breaking out of his own prison, rather than simply changing the world. In the author's writing, these characters are actually self-restrained in this repressive environment. They need an opportunity to help them break through, grow, and make a character's mentality healthier. At present, the article has only written a small part, but I still want to see what kind of stories other characters will have in the author's writing, what kind of breakthroughs there will be, and how the protagonist will save the world. My writing skills are limited, so please forgive me if there are any inaccuracies in writing comments. Come on, the author is great.

This is my first time writing a book using this narrative method, so please bear with me that there may be some disadvantages.

It is a very melancholy and betrayal world🥵😋, where human greed and brilliance coexist😋Finally, I want to say, give the order😭Shikaka😭take us one more time😭This time we will definitely complete the great cleansing😭😡

It is a really good novel. I have read all novels, and I consider myself to have covered a wide range of topics. The tone of the whole novel is very depressive and sad. There is a kind of path that the revolution has not yet succeeded, and comrades still need to work hard. The protagonist is full of vicissitudes eroded by time and a heroic sense of mission. There are really few tomatoes, and I was worried when I read it. When I entered time and space, I could feel the regret and confusion about the past. Reading this novel was also a kind of growth for me. I also hope that the author can strengthen himself and write this story to the end.

A unique magical girl novel!

Have you memorized the Shiyu Sutra today? "The Sutra of Time and Rain·First Volume" 1. Shiyu is the sky and Shiyu is the earth 2. Don't make Shigure angry 3. Praise Shigure every day 4. Remember Shigure is the best baby in the world 5. You must take good care of Shigure's emotions 6. Give a call to the omnipotent Shigure 7. Protect Shigure from being abducted by strange people 8. Always be a loyal believer in Shigure "The Sutra of Time and Rain·Volume 2" 1The words of the group leader are above all else, nya♡~, 2 The group leader's order is absolute, meow♡~, 3No one can make the group leader angry, meow♡~, 4 group owners' videos, please like and comment every day, meow♡~, 5. The leader of the group is angry and must coax her, meow♡~, Group 6 leader has spoken. I must reply when I see it. I don't know what to say. I have to send an expression to set the mood. Meow♡ Otherwise, I will control you♡~ "The Time and Rain Sutra·Three Volumes" 1. Shigure is the sky 2. Do not insult Shigure 3. Must reply to every message from Shigure 4. You must take the initiative to chat with Shigure frequently 5. You must take good care of Shigure's emotions 6. You are not allowed to play hard-to-get with Shigure or let Shigure have random thoughts by hanging him up. 7. Don't ignore Shigure when talking to others 8. You can't yell at Shigure. 9. Always remember Shigure is the cutest "The Sutra of Time and Rain: Thirteen Secret Texts" Do you believe Shigure? I admire the first person to watch Shigure Maybe you will find a good book? Group friends You have to remember Shigure will definitely take us to heaven People must go to heaven Say it one last time "I" am going to start generating electricity "The first Xiaoqi" "Stress-resistant Ye Lin" "The struggling Ye You" "Sacrificial Peace" "Guest appearance by Cong Yu" "Talk about being blocked" "Now Liuli" "Jiangye being stared at" "Visiting Group Friends" "The drained Shigure" "The Logic of Debate" "Ups and downs of group chat" "The only self" That's it for now… Have faith! [Compare your heart]

My mom, the writing is very good [angry] but what I read made me so angry. This world is hopeless and terminally ill. Let the protagonist destroy this world quickly and then create a new one👿👿👿 (directly adding only positive energy to the character of the human beings in the new world, and then destroying all the negative energy) [angry][angry][angry]

It's pretty good, the pace is slow, but the actions of the Parliament are really puzzling. Why did the Parliament dare to engage in the protagonist? Before retiring, I knew that the protagonist was soft-tempered. After retiring, I knew that the protagonist was unscrupulous without a transformer. I won't go into details. Why did you dare to chase after the protagonist after confirming that she was a witch (according to what I wrote before, magical girls and witches should be incompatible with each other. Logically speaking, if the protagonist does not come, you should ignore the protagonist, because you can't beat the protagonist if you do.) There is not much else. It is well written and given to the top level.

By the way, does the protagonist have no supporters among the people? After all, he has been active for decades, and it is normal for him to have a White Rose Sect. The protagonist is a good guy and was pointed at gunpoint by the council, but the protagonist's followers are not necessarily

The description is relatively good, but the twin personalities have a shadow of Laoman, so I can only give 4 stars. I hope the author can jump out of the frame and the shadow of the prison, and get better and better! Let's talk about some more specific issues. One is the characters. Too single facet, not three-dimensional. It's hard to evaluate the protagonist's character. Does it really change at all? She's a bit like a virgin, so it's hard to convince everyone. The second plot. There have been some inexplicable descriptions recently. For example, can the description of darkness highlight anything? He told me that there was something abnormal in this city, and then he played with it, and finally told me that it was a normal phenomenon, and that fighting between the left and right brains was a yes. Maybe the author has other plans, but it seems top-heavy at the moment. There is almost no daily life, it is all plot, and the plot is delayed, which is very uncomfortable. The third description. There are a lot of useless descriptions. Descriptions for the sake of description are basically useless in shaping the characters. The fourth logical problem. Although reading the novel requires no brainpower, it made me very uncomfortable. Everyone has their own opinions on this, so I won't give any examples. If you have any comments, please feel free to submit them!

I think the story is good, but there are too many inner descriptions. If you reduce it appropriately, it will be higher. It is easy to describe too much and one chapter is all about inner drama. There are many settings but they are all good. I feel good about the description of clothes and the characters are more three-dimensional.

I don't know how to put it, so let's just say it… The world is indeed a little sick, but there will be salvation in the end. The Seven Deadly Sins are so fun. The new content definitely deserves 5 stars. Although it is a bit too dark, it is indeed better than the common magical girl novels... As for the new content, is it about evil?

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For me, I prefer to read some novels with online themes but with a literary quality. This article is very delicate in terms of the psychological description of the protagonist, the portrayal of the characters, and the thinking about good and evil. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it. Full support to the author [like] Of course, those who love cool writing should be careful [chigua][chigua]

It looks good, has a good structure, a good subject matter, a deep plot, and the weaving of the story is exquisite. The beginning seems ordinary, but undercurrents are laid under the calm water. When all the foreshadowing suddenly comes to an end at a certain moment, it brings not only the pleasure of "that's it" puzzle solving, but also an emotional shock. Your control over the rhythm is superb, making me hold my breath when I should be nervous, and leaving room for me to reminisce when it is time to relax.

Sorry, maybe it's my problem. I feel like this is what the literary youth and the like say? () Ahem, in short, I feel like I am using gorgeous words to complicate the simple.

It's okay, but this kind of slow pace is destined to make many people want to read books. If the author can't persist, I can only say GG

Although Liuli's book is no longer updated, the new book is also very nice ()

The world view is dark, but because of the darkness, it is beautiful.

A rare magical girl work that is free from formulas, Hao Chi😋

There are a bit few, I want to raise them and then take a look.

Big buffalo I'm angry! ! ! I want to see the protagonist turn into witch tulle (crossed out) and save the world! ! !

It's beautiful, and feels completely different from other magical girl novels [Chigua]

It looks good, give me some points! [Blowing kiss]

It looks good, good luck to the author