Ability Copying, Why Is the Target a Magical Girl?

Disadvantages: First of all, it's a bit slow to transform into a magical girl. Secondly, the front of the protagonist is shaped like a fool. Although the back is better, the front is a bit heavy, and there are fewer words. Advantages: Tomato's writing is pretty good, and it's on the right track after being transformed. The expectations are high, and there are no problems with character creation for the time being. Several important characters are quite distinct.

"Oh, that." Liu Xin took out another ordinary lollipop from her trouser pocket, tore off the candy wrapper and stuffed it into her mouth, explaining vaguely, "That's the 'personality overwriting' function that comes with my 'Wish', it's just a side effect. After the transformation, no matter what it is, you will be forced to adopt a preset personality." Personality here means a person's long-term stable character, moral character, temperament, and behavior. It is a unique and stable overall psychological characteristic. However, in the novel, I only saw the character of the protagonist after his transformation. And later on, I felt that this character became a bit faded.

It's pretty good, as I've written before, everything disappears. Then the search history will disappear. Then wherever I find something, I don't just withdraw it with emotion, but I try it somewhere. Well, although the backend may be good, I can only say that I can't stand it anymore. Well, I saw 8. As for abilities, it is most likely that you have to go in or something. After so many years, you didn't even think about going to see it? If you've been there before, it's understandable that you'd like to revisit it now. But you haven't been there at all, and then you find something and it gets snatched away. That's great, just find something and get away quickly or hide it. And I didn't see how much I wanted to find it. I can only say that the creativity is great, but I really can't stand Qian Min. Even if you have an idea, don't hide it and go there the next day? Alas, that's out of the question. Forget it, thinking about my heart attack, the rating will be lower. Isn't it normal to walk around? Wait until the right moment and take it? And it's so obvious that you dare to search. Wouldn't it be better to just go and find something and then evacuate it?

Good review. The writing style is excellent in Tomato. It can be seen that the outline should be clear. There is no one thing or another thing. The plot progress is also step-by-step. The only shortcoming is that the golden finger at the back is not obvious. After reading it, there is a very big problem. The first protagonist is imprisoned. After the missing person notice is posted, the protagonist has no subjective initiative and can only wait. Second, the strength system is not clear. Generally, fantasy novels have a sub-goal of upgrading to drive the plot and improve strength. Fast-paced novels do not have this goal and many readers will feel it is too slow if they cannot see the development of the plot. Because you haven't done anything and you haven't accomplished anything. For example, it's been 35 chapters since the protagonist got the transformation. Apart from learning a dress-up and a silent form, there's nothing else. There's no explanation of how to upgrade and train and what to do next. And because the protagonist's strength is so poor, the protagonist of the plot can't get in at all. He can't do anything. Do you understand? It's hard to defeat the lowest level monsters, let alone participate in big events. Either there is a ring that the old man can force to skip levels to participate in events, such as the classic Tian Can Tudou's Battle or Wu Dong Qian Kun. In the early stage, he will also participate in the plot of rare event rewards, but he will rely on plug-ins to obtain rare rewards. Then it snowballs and gradually becomes stronger than the same level, and he can skip levels and fight on his own. Either he has to do it step by step, but if you want to write online articles step by step, it will be difficult to retain people if they are not enjoyable. This is how I wrote it. I don't know what your outline is like, but if you ask me to follow up, I will definitely not continue to read it. It's not fun and interesting. I will at least read it after chapters 4-50 when the plot reaches a small climax.

It's quite good [like it] but the volume is too small, I finished it without even realizing it.

The plot is interesting, the world view is rare, and the writing is barely up to par. Although there are still many problems, it is already very good for a newcomer.

The male protagonist transforms into a magical girl and looks good

The plot advances reasonably and the writing is remarkable. The only problem is that it's a little short.