The Only Man from the Alien Planet, the Beast-Eared Girls Line up to Post Stickers

Come on, big brother who writes harem stories. Go away if you are single or have no girls, harem literature is the orthodoxy! ! ! ! [Laughing awkwardly]

It's very interesting. I really like this kind of farming story that travels between two worlds. There are many advantages, so I won't list them all. I think the best thing is that the two worlds in this article are well written, because most of the articles about traveling between two worlds are well written in different worlds, but the original world is poorly written. In this article, farming, collecting tribes, and killing giant beasts in a different world are well written. The protagonist travels back to the original world to grab resources and the reactions of the people in the original world are also very interesting. My personal shortcoming is that the relationship develops too quickly, and there are too many descriptions of the appearance of the twins' mother. I hope I won't accept them in the harem (if I accept them, I hope it will be written that the twins are adopted, and I don't really like to be a thief) Also, the protagonist develops too fast. It feels like there is nothing in the original world to help the protagonist. I don't know how I will write it in the future, but I believe the author can balance it well (this point is mentioned in the article) All in all, the shortcomings outweigh the good points. Come on, the author. It's been a long time since I've seen such a well-written book that makes me want to keep reading. [Like][Like][Like] It was indeed okay in the early stage, but now it is a bit mediocre as it is a parallel world and a virtual world. The narrative logic feels a bit confusing, including the part that travels decades later, which feels very stiff and forced to move people. Maybe it's just a simple interpenetration between the two worlds and there's no need to write about it. In short, it just fell into a cliché and it doesn't have the amazing feeling that made people shine before.

Recommended to read, a very interesting story about alien development with multiple female protagonists. The further back you look, the larger the world background becomes, with a sci-fi flavor and yet focusing on daily life. There are currently two female protagonists (also growth-type), there are no mindless plots that hold back the story, and the author's writing style is very interesting (it's very relaxing to watch). The further back you look, the less interesting it becomes. I thought it was a science fiction article and the setting was eye-catching, but this article is like a vibranium spear. Some science fiction settings are just for the protagonist to have a harem with a girl with animal ears. Of course, these plots can still be read as ordinary text. But the daily chapter is too long. I thought it would be about earth culture and exploring the universe later. At present, it seems that it is just an excessive description of beast-eared girls and the method of reproduction, right? At the same time, there is little growth in the protagonist, and even a slight decline in IQ. He only knows that he has reproduced, and the description style is a bit anime-style, with the beast-eared girl and some fantasy creatures that change in size at every turn. Overall, you can only watch daily life, pseudo-science fiction, and individualism (the protagonist). If you want to read about survival, group portraits, technological explosions, etc., Run away.

Come on, big brother who writes harem stories! The writing is good and the subject matter is very novel. However, I have only read Chapter 63 so far. The writing is smooth and interesting. As for the rest, I don't know how it will be.

It's beautiful, very imaginative, and very novel.

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Not bad, not bad, good, good, if you can keep it up. There are some small areas where the processing is not the best, but it is still a good way to deal with it. If you want to give it a 4.5, But Tomato can only give it a 4 or 5, then give it a 5. The 0.5 Is equivalent to an encouragement to the author. Li, come on, you wrote the big cat [laugh][like] (Note: I have read about eighty or ninety chapters now, and it is pretty good. If there are any problems, I will revise them at any time in the future (^￫ᴥ￩^)[ʕಠɷಠʔ])

It's a very interesting story, good-looking, but I personally feel it has some minor flaws. The urgency of three minutes is not expressed, and the description feels like it lasts three hours. Although it is very urgent, a single time is still enough. Anyway, cheers to the author, it's very interesting.

The setting is just to travel between two worlds to dump supplies, but through minor changes such as time limits, an urgent and passionate atmosphere is created to create excitement. All I can say is that good writing must go through good design.

Among the same genre, both the plot and the behavior of the protagonist are very good, and there are no depressive or vulgar routines. Unlike other novels, it constantly consumes feelings to stimulate emotions, and uses the abilities of normal people to take the most appropriate actions. I will add more words later when I have more words in this heart [Chigua]

The writing is very good, the plot is also very interesting, and there is also an orc as the villain, and the pacing is also very good. Currently, the two heroines have been accepted, and there is a high probability that the indigenous beast-eared girl will be included in the future.

The descriptions and writing are pretty good. As long as it's not too censorship, it's a good book and worth reading. The author is building a very large worldview, and I am very much looking forward to the follow-up content.

It's a very interesting book, especially in the early days when the map's small technology tree was not so developed. In the later stage, it is estimated that it will all be the high-latitude technology in the movie plus extra imagination. It may not be easy to control, but I am still looking forward to the content that follows.

Although this book has some minor shortcomings, and the writing style needs to be improved, it does not affect the overall reading experience. However, it is still considered an exquisite book in Tomato. To make some small comments, I feel that this book has a good outline of the main body, and it can follow the route of the People's League and add some novel settings. Today's novels are not as easy to write as they used to be. A grand world view needs to be mixed with delicacy. It can also be linked to some high-quality novels (but I haven't learned about this before, so I don't know if it is a taboo), such as Lingxi or Drama Enterprises. In the later stage, when jointly fighting certain unknown entities, you can rely on others, but they must have their own characteristics. Otherwise, it's a bit putting the cart before the horse. If you find it too difficult to write at this stage, you can also divide it into several parts [laughs] The above statement is purely due to personal boredom! ! !

It is a very good book. The author can almost be regarded as creating a new theme. It combines the themes of wilderness survival, beast girls in other worlds, high-tech world and double time travel back to China. It is a very genius idea and it is well integrated. The writing style is also masterful enough. I think this book should be rated 9 points.

The overall genre of the book is relatively new. I personally feel that the bad thing is the portrayal of the female protagonist. It does not break away from the sameness of online female protagonists and has no unique shining points. It is a typical refreshing novel female protagonist setting. The male protagonist is okay and there is no big problem. However, the advantage is the world view of the book, which is bold and innovative in the traditional theme of taking a girl through time travel to survive. In summary, it's an above-average level, and it's absolutely fine to read as a refreshing read. If we work hard on the heroine, abandon the traditional mold (big, arrogant, petite and cute), try to use as few adjectives as possible, and try to reflect the character through actions and language. Environmental description is also very important, and it will have a miraculous effect on character portrayal. I look forward to the author's follow-up content. Anyway, I like this subject very much😍😍😍😍😍

Really good, looks interesting, like it!

The plot is very interesting and the setting is novel, especially their training.

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I have read more than 160 chapters and will comment here. This should be regarded as a thought-provoking article. Although in the early stage, due to the author's own cognitive level, some settings and development models were not very reasonable, the overall plot is relatively good, and I am willing to give it 9 to 9.5 Points. But after 300,000 words, limited by the author's own level and understanding of the overall planning, the plot's appeal to me has declined compared to before, but I am still willing to give it an evaluation of 8.5 To 9 points. You can't say how good he is, but among Tomato's many novels, it should be considered a good novel to read. Now it mainly depends on the author's early plot outline design and later control ability, otherwise, it will become empty and boring. Although I am not too optimistic based on the current signs, I still hope that the author can work hard to write better. Come on!

Multiple time travels back and forth (although currently only traveling back and forth between modern earth and alien planets), the setting and plot are very exciting! There are many girls, but there are no casts. Currently, there are only two heroines, Su Li and Su Yao, both with love lines. The beast-eared girl is a full-time maid, she can do whatever she is asked to do, and she knows everything [laughing] At the moment, there is Sylvie the cat girl, and the twin twins Colo and Kelly, the bunny girl [laughing] There will definitely be more in the future. Although for me, the frequency of closing is too slow, but it's okay. There is a love line and it is not a mindless bulldozer [laughing]

I read it in one sitting. It's too short. The subject matter and the characters are well depicted. The background is relatively large and there is no stupid plot. However, the cover is a bit unattractive. I crossed it several times after seeing it.

[Adoration][Admiration] The three-meter beast-eared girl who can hammer mammoths with her bare hands touches my heart so much. . Come on, author.

The world view is more interesting than I thought, and the pace is just right. There is no annoying plot, the heroine has a temper, etc. It is quite good to watch the double penetration of the lord without any brains, and it also has some elements of strong national destiny.

It's really good, I'm looking forward to the follow-up development. Write more about the changes that come back to the earth. There are more content on territorial farming development and survival. Fewer wars and expansions, so that we can write for a long time. Otherwise, it will jump too fast in a few clicks, and it will be suppressed in various ways later. It doesn't look good This author writes really well. This is also the first time I have seen a plot involving the national level. I will not be disgusted or perverted.

It's quite nice. It's a bit like The Lord of the Rings. The description is very clear, and the gradual progression makes it very immersive. It would be great if the ring could have a defense or protection mechanism. After all, it wouldn't be too much to add a self-defense mecha to infants and young children [shy] Not enough! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Emm, it looks good, but can you tell me in advance? I originally thought it was about using resources from another world to make myself stronger, but it turned out to be the kind of cooperation with the country, which is not the kind I like to watch. Goodbye by Destiny. (><)

It's good, hurry up, hurry up, two chapters a day is enough for anyone to read

The writing is really good. Brothers who are book-hungry can give it a try. Some minor poisons can be ignored and do not affect the perception. The book has just been published and there are too few chapters. For old bookworms like us, it will be gone after just reading for a while. It is not satisfying at all. Please update the author.

It's quite interesting. I was influenced by the comment section before and thought it was toxic, but from what I've seen, it hasn't hit my mark so far. The male protagonist is not a eunuch, but if you want to have sex with one every three or five chapters, I advise you not to think about it. The beast-eared girl is great. She can switch between the three-meter-tall cart and the 1.5-Meter-tall lolita. One of them can satisfy three XP. It's a pity that there are some deletions, because I came out of season. The author's rhythm is also very good. It's not too fast, and it takes off after a few pictures, and the rhythm can't be suppressed; nor is it too slow, which keeps dragging the plot forward. For me it's a good rhythm, but for others I'm not sure. All in all, I think it's quite good. As for whether the book is poisonous or not, you have to read it yourself to know. Don't be affected by other negative reviews. Of course, my review is for reference only. Maybe I have read it and will beautify the plot of the book. Therefore, if you look at it and think it is a stone, run away if you need to, and don't wrong yourself.