Twin Cities: An Imperfect Timeline

It doesn't matter whether there is a protagonist or not. What should happen happened, but having a protagonist will make you feel aggrieved and uncomfortable. I didn't want to post this comment originally, but I didn't notice the label "Fei Shuangwen" and I really wanted to post it, so I got this five-star review. If there is a level of Fei Shuang's writing, the author is at a very high level. At least he is very successful in this aspect. When listening to the book, various images of the protagonist taking the initiative to intervene, but seeming to be stupid, became an important driver of the tragedy, especially when the protagonist was emotionally involved and tried to stop it but failed, which made him feel very frustrated and uncomfortable.

Now that I have read the latest chapter, I feel that it is already very good. The author has something to write about, but the part about traveling through the original work is a bit unclear, and it disrupts the rhythm too much. But I have written it all, so I have to deal with it. I hope to see some linkage between the two parallel worlds or something.

Please keep writing, author, please [blowing kiss] The five stars are for the novel before chapter 67. The plot of the parallel time and space after chapter 67 is completely out of history and has no connection with the original time and space. So what is the point of writing so many plots in the past? Not to mention that you are crazy about giving Hilko a wit. I hope this novel can be written well, but since you gave me a big shit, I'm sorry, I'll give you two stars. What can I say about this author? I feel sorry for him. [Vomit]

At present, it seems that the writing style is stable, there is plot linkage, and many awkward places in the original work have been improved. Although some of the group plots have been weakened, the plot development is worth looking forward to. Give the author a five-star rating and ask the author to update a hundred times a day (๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ"

Is there something common among other similar articles? It's a bit weakened, except for the protagonist's IQ (ᇂ_ᇂ|||), but if you don't care about this very much, it's still understandable. It's a good new book. OK (ゝω´★) There is still too much intelligence reduction

It's very interesting, and it's a very perfect process. Although the major events have not changed (such as the theft at Jace's house in the beginning, the attack on the parliament, etc.), Some "subtle" things have been used to achieve a different process, and characters that did not appear in the original show have also been added. Combined with plots from other regions. Very good, you can! Author, you must update your mouth quickly!

From what I've seen so far, it's a very good fanfic, with the author's own ideas, and the entry point of the plot is also very subtle: a family member who was picked up. It's just a bit weird to use wild runes later to enhance the protagonist's combat power, but there's nothing else to say [laughs]

In the original book, Jesse's counterpart was Victor, but in this book I personally feel that the counterpart has become Cyrus. Both of them started from the bottom of the two cities and became the city's ruling figures. Jace turned around in Pi City due to the shipwreck, but also chose to integrate into Pi City's politics because of his childhood and personality. He became Pi City's irreplaceable strong joints and hands and feet. Cyrus was born in the ruins of Zaun and because of the red education he received as a time traveler, he chose to break Zaun's deformed backbone and overturn all feudal and backward things into the nourishment of the new Zaun, and he became the central heart of Zaun. His life was saved by the rune old man with his personal power, and all the ideal wishes he had realized in his heart originated from this, so he became a member of the personal heroism and developed Hex technology; He was brought into a warm family by Fandel when he was about to die in a filthy garbage dump. When he felt the warmth between people, he personally understood the deep connection between home and country in the book in his previous life, so he came from the people to the people. He didn't want to be the brain, diplomat or even the soul of Zaan. If he could, he just wanted to be a bartender in a tavern, but the reality was that Zaan really needed him, so he took the job without hesitation. I'm really looking forward to the scene where these two people officially meet. What kind of sparks will be created and what kind of story will happen? It's really too hard to help but fantasize about.

Excellent group portrait writing, although there are many small details that do not clearly explain the context, but the flaws are not concealed, and the overall picture is very beautiful. Looking forward to the follow-up plot. There are no emotional scenes for now, and I don't know if there will be any in the future. At present, it seems that it is not a good article. If you blindly want to cheat and feel good, you should carefully consider whether to read it.

Fried Chicken is good-looking, and the protagonist and commander is much better than the one with a harem next door⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡