Twin Cities************

It doesn't matter whether there is a protagonist or not. What should happen happened, but having a protagonist will make you feel aggrieved and uncomfortable. I didn't want to post this comment originally, but I didn't notice the label "Fei Shuangwen" and I really wanted to post it, so I got this five-star review. If there is a level of Fei Shuang's writing, the author is at a very high level. At least he is very successful in this aspect. When listening to the book, various images of the protagonist taking the initiative to intervene, but seeming to be stupid, became an important driver of the tragedy, especially when the protagonist was emotionally involved and tried to stop it but failed, which made him feel very frustrated and uncomfortable.

Now that I have read the latest chapter, I feel that it is already very good. The author has something to write about, but the part about traveling through the original work is a bit unclear, and it disrupts the rhythm too much. But I have written it all, so I have to deal with it. I hope to see some linkage between the two parallel worlds or something.

Please keep writing, author, please [blowing kiss] The five stars are for the novel before chapter 67. The plot of the parallel time and space after chapter 67 is completely out of history and has no connection with the original time and space. So what is the point of writing so many plots in the past? Not to mention that you are crazy about giving Hilko a wit. I hope this novel can be written well, but since you gave me a big shit, I'm sorry, I'll give you two stars. What can I say about this author? I feel sorry for him. [Vomit]

At present, it seems that the writing style is stable, there is plot linkage, and many awkward places in the original work have been improved. Although some of the group plots have been weakened, the plot development is worth looking forward to. Give the author a five-star rating and ask the author to update a hundred times a day (๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ"

Is there something common among other similar articles? It's a bit weakened, except for the protagonist's IQ (ᇂ_ᇂ|||), but if you don't care about this very much, it's still understandable. It's a good new book. OK (ゝω´★) There is still too much intelligence reduction

It's very interesting, and it's a very perfect process. Although the major events have not changed (such as the theft at Jace's house in the beginning, the attack on the parliament, etc.), Some "subtle" things have been used to achieve a different process, and characters that did not appear in the original show have also been added. Combined with plots from other regions. Very good, you can! Author, you must update your mouth quickly!

In the original book, Jesse's counterpart was Victor, but in this book I personally feel that the counterpart has become Cyrus. Both of them started from the bottom of the two cities and became the city's ruling figures. Jace turned around in Pi City due to the shipwreck, but also chose to integrate into Pi City's politics because of his childhood and personality. He became Pi City's irreplaceable strong joints and hands and feet. Cyrus was born in the ruins of Zaun and because of the red education he received as a time traveler, he chose to break Zaun's deformed backbone and overturn all feudal and backward things into the nourishment of the new Zaun, and he became the central heart of Zaun. His life was saved by the rune old man with his personal power, and all the ideal wishes he had realized in his heart originated from this, so he became a member of the personal heroism and developed Hex technology; He was brought into a warm family by Fandel when he was about to die in a filthy garbage dump. When he felt the warmth between people, he personally understood the deep connection between home and country in the book in his previous life, so he came from the people to the people. He didn't want to be the brain, diplomat or even the soul of Zaan. If he could, he just wanted to be a bartender in a tavern, but the reality was that Zaan really needed him, so he took the job without hesitation. I'm really looking forward to the scene where these two people officially meet. What kind of sparks will be created and what kind of story will happen? It's really too hard to help but fantasize about.

Fried Chicken is good-looking, and the protagonist and commander is much better than the one with a harem next door⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡

From what I've seen so far, it's a very good fanfic, with the author's own ideas, and the entry point of the plot is also very subtle: a family member who was picked up. It's just a bit weird to use wild runes later to enhance the protagonist's combat power, but there's nothing else to say [laughs]

Excellent group portrait writing, although there are many small details that do not clearly explain the context, but the flaws are not concealed, and the overall picture is very beautiful. Looking forward to the follow-up plot. There are no emotional scenes for now, and I don't know if there will be any in the future. At present, it seems that it is not a good article. If you blindly want to cheat and feel good, you should carefully consider whether to read it.

It's really good. After reading the Twin Cities fanfic for so long, and then watching some Twin Cities videos, I think the writing is pretty good. Everyone has their own ideas, and each person is very distinct. It's not so abrupt, and there's no sense of being together. Instead, there's a sense of upward progress and a sense of security that comes from working together. Very recommended.

It's good to watch, and the characters have brains. I enjoyed watching the Two Cities chapter, and I made up for the regrets, except for the death of an old cake (Katherine's mother). The Noxus chapter is also played very smoothly. When dealing with capital, it is a matter of learning and applying it. The writing by brothers Swain and Dele is very interesting.

Despite the repeated statements above, the overall storyline and pacing are very good.

As a long-time bookworm of Tomato fanfics, especially LoL ones, as long as they are good-looking, popular, and highly rated, I can't boast that I have read nine out of ten books. I can say responsibly that this book is worth reading and I recommend reading it.

Applause for what a great iA(ai) novel

There is currently no love story. This is a good fanfic. If you have the patience or like literary youth, you can give it a good read. However, few people read it in Tomato. Good luck, author.

He deserves a five star. The writing is very good, the plot structure and logic are all ok. The storyline is well grasped. It can be regarded as the best work in the two cities. Author, don't be lazy, learn from the donkeys who are responsible for production, and update more than a hundred chapters a day.

Good book, this is a good book that best matches the character

Good, the plot is compact, not exactly the same as the original but related, give it one star for encouragement

An excellent Two Cities fanfic It landed smoothly

It was written very delicately and rekindled my urge to go back and watch Twin Cities again.

By far the best Twin Cities fanfic.

Good looking, so far

Beautiful and interestingly written It's just that I don't like the part about traveling through time and space in the middle. It feels a bit strange to suddenly appear there.

I want the stupid beauty LeBlanc

Five stars, full of expectations, hope for stable updates, and wish the author great work data every day |•'-'•)و✧

It's so well written that it can be viewed as another timeline of the Twin Cities. If the author didn't stretch his hips later, the score would definitely not be lower.

Top, the characterization of the scenes is very touching, and I personally like the character of the protagonist very much.

The most comfortable Twin Cities fanfic I've ever watched so far

Yes, it's very interesting so far. The plot is not laggy and the combat power is not broken. You can watch it slowly.