
I Was Caught by Yao Yue When I Started with Ming Yu Gong at Full Level.
明玉功满级开局的我被邀月抓住了
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 232k Words
- Genre
- Martial Arts
- Subgenre
- Male-Channel Fanfiction
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 7mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
56Chapters
5.4kReads · all time
It can be seen that the author wants to innovate and does not want to imitate blindly. It is true that most of the [Zongwu Diary Streaming] on the market are similar and have serious homogeneity. How can I put it, the author's spirit is very good. It's just that the writing power isn't quite enough. The protagonist just finished writing his diary and got the reward... The next moment Yao Yue appeared, and she instantly recognized the protagonist... Where did she come from? How does she recognize the protagonist? As an [ancient person], how can she quickly break through cognitive barriers? Accept [Diary], [System], [Protagonist]... These wonderful combinations with peace of mind? ———————— One more thing - learn from the ancients. Wen Zou Zou's tone... Feels semi-vulgar. When modern people read novels, even ancient worldviews will be described in vernacular. What really needs to be said is that only the climax of the plot, the appearance of key characters, turning the tide, confrontation between powerful forces, preferring death to surrender, etc., Will be carefully crafted to add an [elegance] to this climax. The daily life may be dull and excessive, but it is still described in vernacular, and it is easy to distinguish it from the climax plot, making the climax more impressive. As for the author, even in his daily life, he often talks in an eloquent manner, and the entire diary is an imitation of ancient prose... Emmm… I personally feel that I have fallen into a misunderstanding.
It's too embarrassing to imitate the ancients in speaking, and the same is true for diaries, which are half-said. It would be awkward to forcibly create the fire element with the Vajra Indestructible Magic Power, but it would be almost the same as Nine Yangs. The other thing is the design issue. Is it inexplicable to sign in? I can't remember clearly, but it was a Tao Heart Demon Seed that I didn't get by writing a diary. Isn't this nonsense? Just write well, not the way the ancients said it. Aren't you tired from writing, and the readers will be tired from reading, of course, AI will say otherwise.