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The latest 37 chapters, it is really my own way at the moment, daily battles are split half and half, unless the poison is amplified, it is basically the trend of multiple female protagonists. The protagonist is self-interested. Although he retains his Chinese name, his behavior pattern or the overall storytelling style is more Japanese. The characters are vividly written, and the villain is not too superficial. However, the overall logic is a bit weak. Four stars for encouragement. ☕
The latest 62 chapters have been withdrawn, and the settings have been changed. It's not good to watch. From the free hunter to the thorny prey, just like the old book routine, I let the villain make a show of his face and I just counterattack conservatively. Even if I can't stand the readers and finally take the initiative to attack, in the end I will let you go and let the tiger return to the mountain, leaving a seed to continue to disgust you. The logic is getting worse and worse. According to this way of writing, I would not be surprised if the villain launched a fighter jet to bomb the school. After all, the question is "collusion between government and businessmen, incompetence and corruption, and no one cares about it." The feeling of being alone cannot be maintained. The revised setting says that the bad guys are projections of demon soldiers from another world, and there will be demon kings in the future. Now it is ordinary people who can't protect themselves enough to transform themselves into demons in the later stage and directly turn them into fantasy novels. And now it feels like it has begun to break away from reality. What level of exoskeleton do you have the confidence to fight against a fake knight? The villain is either crazy or the technology is so advanced that it should not be a modern product. The harem is pretty good, she eats meat quickly without getting distracted, and her personality is quite distinct. 2+1⭐.
There is not much to say, as a casual light novel, it can be said to be impeccable.
Daily is my favorite smooth reading. Although it may be a bit novice, I am not strict enough to treat this book as the top light novel. After all, it is just for entertainment.
It is worth mentioning that the key plots will be elaborated, and the writing style is good, but some of it is secondary; but having said that, if you don't like secondary, what is the point of reading a solitary text, right? [Thinking]
The most important thing is that the protagonist's three views are upright, or in other words, being upright is very satisfying, and being upright is not pretentious; if you don't like it, you don't like it, and you won't forcefully stand on the moral high ground. (Of course, the villains arranged by the author are not good people.) Integrate knowledge and action, and if you don't choose the right way to die, you will die;
I have always been honest with myself; I like to watch harems, I like to watch truly different types of dazzling girls, I like to watch powerful forces judging everything, I like to watch the sense of security that everything is under control, and I like to watch the earth-shaking changes caused by letting others guess in the dark [Adoration]
Be honest about your own preferences. A harem is a harem, and invincibility is invincibility. It is a novel anyway, so there is nothing wrong with it. Do you have any friends?
It's pretty, pretty cool. It's best to have both daily strategies and upgrades to punish evil, half and half is good. As for the heroine, she should keep away from lightning, and don't let her get too excited and create any kind of mask lightning. There is no need to deliberately hide your identity from your sister or other heroines, as it can easily be arousing suspicion. As long as you don't let outsiders know, it will be better. Of course, this level depends on the author. Don't keep delaying it, and don't reveal it casually. It is best to reveal the key plot points of the heroine, which are secrets exclusive to the male and female protagonists.
It's pretty good. Remember to control the progress, don't rush it, and don't go too fast. Then you can revive the gods later. First, Inari God, and then the main character brother and sister, Hinata Tsukiyomi. You can learn from Qidian's Tokyo behind-the-scenes articles, such as Tokyo Naruto, Tokyo Gods, etc.
The plot is a bit old, but the body is pretty good. I feel like there is no outline [exploration]
That's fine for now, the author is a newcomer after all.
So far, it looks good and not depressing.
I want to see rivers of blood, I want to see education and training [love]
It's a novel that I like to be independent of myself. The early stage is very good, with steady upgrades, a gradually progressive emotional line, the protagonist's very positive outlook on life, and a plot that doesn't make people feel cliche. You can read it in the early stage.
But it seems that the author started to let himself go after he came out of the small black room (after taking in the teacher, maybe even earlier when he took the hot girl as a mount). Although he was fighting against monsters before, it was just a portrayal of people's dirty hearts. From this point on, he started fighting against real monsters, which is meaningless. The only way I want to see is to punish evil, because there is no other extraordinary power in the world except me.
Moreover, in the later period, the collection of girls took off so much that it was obvious that the author no longer wanted to write anymore and just wanted to finish the ending quickly.
This book suits my taste quite well [laughs crookedly]
It would be better if there were less humming
I could tell at a glance that this was another masterpiece
It's easy to defeat monsters, and the protagonist's strength is constantly improving.
This is another good invincible novel. If the introduction of other characters were shorter, it would be a masterpiece.
It's worth watching, the plot is very enjoyable
It's cool, but there are too many things going on. Can you let the protagonist take a break?
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
The writing is quite good.
It seems smooth and refreshing now, I hope to keep writing!
Yes, it deserves praise if it does not leave ink marks [like]
Not bad, the writing is okay. Moreover, it is still one-of-a-kind, the protagonist's three views are correct, and the emotional lines with the heroines are also delicately written. Update quickly
It's very good, it's already great for a newcomer [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] It looks very comfortable, there are no big flaws [Send your heart] [Send your heart] [Send your heart]
Come on, Liu Bei's cool articles are really cool.
Yes, come on, author. Also, when can the author see the blood-soaked plot [laughing]
It has a Japanese light flavor and is worth a look
Still looks good
Mouth melon! Not enough to read! ! !
It's not a bad way to pass the time, but there are a few minor issues. It's a bit a bit maddening, and may be a bit annoying, so just jump on it.
I am the invincible king of pretense, and I am the strongest in Japan [face covering]
It's very interesting, it feels like it's being narrated
The latest 37 chapters, it is really my own way at the moment, daily battles are split half and half, unless the poison is amplified, it is basically the trend of multiple female protagonists. The protagonist is self-interested. Although he retains his Chinese name, his behavior pattern or the overall storytelling style is more Japanese. The characters are vividly written, and the villain is not too superficial. However, the overall logic is a bit weak. Four stars for encouragement. ☕ The latest 62 chapters have been withdrawn, and the settings have been changed. It's not good to watch. From the free hunter to the thorny prey, just like the old book routine, I let the villain make a show of his face and I just counterattack conservatively. Even if I can't stand the readers and finally take the initiative to attack, in the end I will let you go and let the tiger return to the mountain, leaving a seed to continue to disgust you. The logic is getting worse and worse. According to this way of writing, I would not be surprised if the villain launched a fighter jet to bomb the school. After all, the question is "collusion between government and businessmen, incompetence and corruption, and no one cares about it." The feeling of being alone cannot be maintained. The revised setting says that the bad guys are projections of demon soldiers from another world, and there will be demon kings in the future. Now it is ordinary people who can't protect themselves enough to transform themselves into demons in the later stage and directly turn them into fantasy novels. And now it feels like it has begun to break away from reality. What level of exoskeleton do you have the confidence to fight against a fake knight? The villain is either crazy or the technology is so advanced that it should not be a modern product. The harem is pretty good, she eats meat quickly without getting distracted, and her personality is quite distinct. 2+1⭐.
There is not much to say, as a casual light novel, it can be said to be impeccable. Daily is my favorite smooth reading. Although it may be a bit novice, I am not strict enough to treat this book as the top light novel. After all, it is just for entertainment. It is worth mentioning that the key plots will be elaborated, and the writing style is good, but some of it is secondary; but having said that, if you don't like secondary, what is the point of reading a solitary text, right? [Thinking] The most important thing is that the protagonist's three views are upright, or in other words, being upright is very satisfying, and being upright is not pretentious; if you don't like it, you don't like it, and you won't forcefully stand on the moral high ground. (Of course, the villains arranged by the author are not good people.) Integrate knowledge and action, and if you don't choose the right way to die, you will die; I have always been honest with myself; I like to watch harems, I like to watch truly different types of dazzling girls, I like to watch powerful forces judging everything, I like to watch the sense of security that everything is under control, and I like to watch the earth-shaking changes caused by letting others guess in the dark [Adoration] Be honest about your own preferences. A harem is a harem, and invincibility is invincibility. It is a novel anyway, so there is nothing wrong with it. Do you have any friends?
It's pretty, pretty cool. It's best to have both daily strategies and upgrades to punish evil, half and half is good. As for the heroine, she should keep away from lightning, and don't let her get too excited and create any kind of mask lightning. There is no need to deliberately hide your identity from your sister or other heroines, as it can easily be arousing suspicion. As long as you don't let outsiders know, it will be better. Of course, this level depends on the author. Don't keep delaying it, and don't reveal it casually. It is best to reveal the key plot points of the heroine, which are secrets exclusive to the male and female protagonists.
It's pretty good. Remember to control the progress, don't rush it, and don't go too fast. Then you can revive the gods later. First, Inari God, and then the main character brother and sister, Hinata Tsukiyomi. You can learn from Qidian's Tokyo behind-the-scenes articles, such as Tokyo Naruto, Tokyo Gods, etc.
The plot is a bit old, but the body is pretty good. I feel like there is no outline [exploration]
That's fine for now, the author is a newcomer after all.
So far, it looks good and not depressing.
I want to see rivers of blood, I want to see education and training [love]
It's a novel that I like to be independent of myself. The early stage is very good, with steady upgrades, a gradually progressive emotional line, the protagonist's very positive outlook on life, and a plot that doesn't make people feel cliche. You can read it in the early stage. But it seems that the author started to let himself go after he came out of the small black room (after taking in the teacher, maybe even earlier when he took the hot girl as a mount). Although he was fighting against monsters before, it was just a portrayal of people's dirty hearts. From this point on, he started fighting against real monsters, which is meaningless. The only way I want to see is to punish evil, because there is no other extraordinary power in the world except me. Moreover, in the later period, the collection of girls took off so much that it was obvious that the author no longer wanted to write anymore and just wanted to finish the ending quickly.
This book suits my taste quite well [laughs crookedly]
It would be better if there were less humming
I could tell at a glance that this was another masterpiece
It's easy to defeat monsters, and the protagonist's strength is constantly improving.
This is another good invincible novel. If the introduction of other characters were shorter, it would be a masterpiece.
It's worth watching, the plot is very enjoyable
It's cool, but there are too many things going on. Can you let the protagonist take a break?
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
The writing is quite good.
It seems smooth and refreshing now, I hope to keep writing!
Yes, it deserves praise if it does not leave ink marks [like]
Not bad, the writing is okay. Moreover, it is still one-of-a-kind, the protagonist's three views are correct, and the emotional lines with the heroines are also delicately written. Update quickly
It's very good, it's already great for a newcomer [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] It looks very comfortable, there are no big flaws [Send your heart] [Send your heart] [Send your heart]
Come on, Liu Bei's cool articles are really cool.
Yes, come on, author. Also, when can the author see the blood-soaked plot [laughing]
It has a Japanese light flavor and is worth a look
Still looks good
Mouth melon! Not enough to read! ! !
It's not a bad way to pass the time, but there are a few minor issues. It's a bit a bit maddening, and may be a bit annoying, so just jump on it.
I am the invincible king of pretense, and I am the strongest in Japan [face covering]
It's very interesting, it feels like it's being narrated